Captain Rocks of One Piece

You're on the wrong track. Why don't you just follow the boat and spend so much time writing about Luffy and Zoro? Who is the protagonist of your book? If there is no plot, just copy the original plot and make it up. Stop writing it and find a job in a factory.

An announcement for the newcomers. Stop looking. This book feels like it was written by someone who only knows a little bit about One Piece. Some are too unreasonable. And the out-of-circle index should still be brushed up.

I read one and asked for a Chinese name... I didn't feel like I was immersed in it at all... Are you so stubborn? You have to give me a Chinese name. If that's the case, why do you need to travel to Japanese comics?

Chinese name + miscellaneous fish body shape, is this stacking debuffs?

Comment: A book written by a passerby who has never read One Piece

Okay, as a captain of Rocks, I went to the Valley of the Gods, and my domineering power is still at the intermediate level. The most speechless thing is that I don't even have the overlord color, which can suppress Whitebeard's blame on me 😒

Putting aside everything else, the name of the protagonist alone put me off.

Three-card persuasion series. I just want to watch the protagonist use his invincible strength to suppress everything, not to see how the protagonist grows from an ant to a lion and then to an ant. The masters dare not play this way in the first three pictures. They are trying to sell dogs over sheep's heads. Write an invincible name and then write an upgrade flow. The name of the brother is not attractive. People who want to read your book should change their names (*￣rǒ￣) Pick your nose

I asked why the number of comments in the comment section is so high, this SS Xiaolanzi. I swiped more than 200 photos at once.

What the hell is Lin Feng? Is it a self-defense novel? I skipped through a few of them, and I actually saw the words "cheats", which made me even more surprised! Goodbye

If it wasn't called Lin Feng, he might watch it

After reading so many Pirates fics, Garp was persuaded to quit in the first chapter. How did he improve his grades and get out of the circle level 3?

Captain of the first team, intermediate armed color, intermediate knowledge color, okay, okay

Most of the comments are written by one person, no wonder

What the hell are you writing? Not to mention the collapse of combat power, but also the collapse of characters. Let's go back and study pirates before talking about it. There is no heroic spirit in writing a hammer.

I opened the directory and looked at the name of the protagonist, sorry that I removed it.

It's mediocre, the max-level queen follows the original route, pretending to be Luffy's B, there is no fruit development, no introduction, and no training. The supporting characters have all become backgrounds and failed to create. This writing is really in vain.

I've just read two chapters. A maxed-out character is running to the novice village to show off or act awkward. The world of pirates, which is a high-level martial arts world, can scare children just by looking at it. But you are doing all kinds of things there. Oh╯╰

The first name is too ridiculous Although there are people with Chinese names in the One Piece world, they are not common after all! Then, most people in One Piece have around 4 characters! To be honest, it was really too dramatic. Then there is your foreshadowing, but the results are really mediocre! The strength is also too poor. For such a strong group of people, you talk about your fruit ability, but your domineering power is not to mention that you can see and hear the color to warn the future, and the armed color can flow. Your ability is too poor, and the strength will decrease after consuming the mind value.

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