Sprint King: An Olympic Champion's Journey from High School

I have a suggestion for the author, that is, can you write a novel without using such a colloquial expression? None of my emotions are coherent.

He is already the 400-meter Olympic champion, so why should he add attribute points to endurance? Don't you think it's contradictory? Since the protagonist runs 100 meters and 200 meters, if the endurance is completely sufficient, add some endurance, and it is the most cost-effective. It would be understandable if the protagonist ran 800 meters. I hope the author can think of his own logic

You can't win the championship even with rebirth and cheating 🙂

Author, can you please avoid spoilers in your chapter titles? You didn't write much content in each chapter, but you also gave a title to summarize the content. As soon as I saw your title, I knew what you wrote, so what else should I read? No sense of expectation at all. It's like watching Su Bingtian's game. If you watch his game before he wins the championship, and watch his game video after knowing that he won the championship, can the two emotions be the same? The unknown, tension, excitement, expectation and satisfaction of realizing expectations in the former are far beyond what the latter can offer. I had endured it before, but when I saw Chapter 134, I couldn't bear it anymore. Your chapter is actually quite good, but because your title told me the result as soon as it came up, my mood didn't change when I read the chapter. If you change the title to just three words [Grand Finals], I will feel a huge sense of satisfaction after reading this chapter.

What kind of sprint king is just eating ashes behind Usain Bolt? 400 Chapters, where is the king? Why don't you write it?

{"NickName":"Running Xiaolin","UserId":370835091} Li ​​Hanyue is cute😜

As readers of novels, do we want to watch pigs' feet work hard slowly? Reality already requires hard work. If the novel tells us to work hard, it will directly make people abandon the book. This is the first point. The second point is that this is a systematic text. It is best to highlight the Olympics by imagining the world. Winning gold in the Asian Games is the climax. Isn't it good to win gold again and again to satisfy the needs of the spiritual world? I see you working hard to improve bit by bit, are you kidding me? If you have a system, you tell me about hard work. The third point is to practice your writing. If the plot is not good, write more explosive points and climaxes. For the review, I collected 500 points to send suggestions after reading so many chapters. The last point is that this is a novel, there is a system, then the King of Dash, and then finally write directly, win the gold medal in the Pig's Foot Olympics, and then end? If you describe less in the early stage, your grades will double. If you write more carefully in the early and late stages, your grades will also improve.

The subject matter and ideas of this book are very good, but it is a pity that the author's writing style is poor, his memory is not very good, and his common sense is not enough.

It's getting worse and worse, updates are still slow, please get out of my bookshelf 😐

It's pointless to keep suppressing the protagonist so much. The progress is too slow. Those points are always stuck. They don't come out every time. Isn't the system text just for fun?