The weird tone of this story is all the golden finger's fault.
The menacing techniques of the Demonic Sect get warped in my hands, until they could be serialized as a spin-off in some unmentionable anime world.
Other transmigrators from my world add points to Iron Arm and Iron Head techniques to improve their martial arts, while I somehow unlock experience in forging cyberpunk mechanical arms and metal skulls, along with practical skills in modification surgery.
After finally collecting a whole set of musclebound martial arts classics, including Golden Bell Shield, Iron Shirt, and Tendon Transformation, I thought I could defy fate and bulk up. Instead, I unlocked modification surgery for the giant space marines of Warhammer 40K. Now a bunch of former rabid fanboy underlings want to pin me to the throne and crown me emperor.
Even the cultivation world isn't letting me rest. I planned to make a name for myself as a farmer and pill alchemist.
But when I look at the spirit fields, I see a whole crowd of girls who look like Tomie Kawakami, hopping around and cursing and spitting at each other. They look as though they'd kill each other if they weren't buried in the ground with only their heads sticking out.
Zhang Yusheng falls into deep thought. Shouldn't growing beautiful girls be cause for celebration? But here's the problem: I only want to grow medicinal herbs. Can these things go into the pill furnace?
He glances thoughtfully at the nearby Taotie pill furnace, which looks just like Taiyi Zhenren and has a gaping maw dripping with saliva. In theory, paired with this pill furnace from the world of spirit beasts, made by refining a goat and a rabbit while they were still alive, it might work.
But why does Zhang Yusheng feel like his story's tone is running headlong in a strange direction?
The Sword Immortal of Emei, Mount Shu
An Ancient Cultivator's Handbook for Refining Demons
I Prove the Dao Fruit Through Two Worlds
Reporting to the Motherland: I've Mastered the Technology of Mechanical Ascension
Reconstruction After the Plague
I Play All Living Beings!
My Astonishing Wisdom
The Top Immortal of the College Entrance Exam
A Pair of Living People
Moral Responsibility Ltd.
No System for Cultivation? Then I’ll Make My Own!
Stop Ruining the Worldbuilding
Voice-to-text typing? No wonder some parts seemed nonsensical to me. I thought the author's Chinese language skills were taught by a PE teacher. This book has no future if you're this lazy; it's so frustrating to read.
Opinions and Bug-Catching Building
Since this book is transcribed via voice, there will be typos. I always miss some when I check, so please feel free to point them out. Just point them out in the chapter, and I will correct them as soon as I see them in the backend. If you have any opinions or suggestions about the book or the plot, please leave a message here.
Author, I'm investing in you. Will you be able to finish this book?
Good introduction (to be honest, I don't like cyberpunk). Keep it up!
This content isn't bad at all. If you just glanced at it after writing and made minor corrections to the paragraph structure and spelling, the score would be much higher. Why bother just glancing at it and making changes after you've already written it? These days, encountering a laid-back, "sloppy" author really gives you a feeling of frustration and disappointment. 😅
Author, let me share my feelings. I felt the early chapters were well-written; the initial concept was brilliant. However, after learning the truth about the childhood sweetheart's death—basically, after those few chapters—it became incredibly chaotic and confusing. It was incomprehensible and difficult to continue reading. The writing was also very dense, trying to explain a single point within a few chapters, but it felt disjointed and the story became increasingly illogical.
This guy's an old eunuch; just look at the ideas in the free chapters, anyone who subscribes is a fool.
The biggest problem with this book right now is its awkward phrasing; no matter how well you write it, it won't be useful unless you improve it.
Well, how should I put it?! The new generation of Suicune feels... It's all about water, similar in style to Taibai's Suicune, all about water.
Is this another sit-up? I feel like the author's books all have good ideas, but they just seem to run out of steam as they write.