Lord of the Mists

As a time traveler, in a world where the undead walk everywhere, when I got the light magic among the six series of magic, I didn't find an undead to try the effect immediately, but I didn't know anything. This is a bit...

Without you, mankind has survived for thousands of years. Once you appeared, disasters would be everywhere for mankind. I'm going to have a GF soon. Is that reasonable? I'm going to force it on you. Even if there are no difficulties, we have to create difficulties. If you are a person with this difficulty level, it will last for ten thousand years. 10 Will always be popular.

The pacing feels good at the moment, and it can be said to be the best of the three books. Don't make the mistake of the first book. It was useless to take so many great opportunities. It poisoned me alive in the first place.

The signing has been officially completed. I hope that book friends will take care of me in the future!

I can't stand it anymore. I have practiced every day to Chapter 256, and I am still in the middle stage of Bronze. But he gave away silver and gold potions to others. Don't take the baby seriously. What's the point of hard work? ! Typical diaosi mentality.

I can't stand it, I don't have a sense of immersion, the plot is bland and boring, I've read more than 100 chapters and I'm still in the early bronze stage, am I still at the peak of my early stage? Is there still initial consummation, great consummation, and speechlessness?

This is the only novel that can make me feel uncomfortable at all. The protagonist was suppressed too hard, even harder than Wuzhishan when he suppressed Sun Monkey, and he really couldn't even move at all. . .

Chapter 190, eight years old, bronze. Farewell, various encounters with Journey to the West

Ugh, it's really a waste of time. The plot insults the reader's intelligence.

The writing is so-so, but the ink is very stained. I have always suspected that he might not be able to get bronze with 500 pictures, and 120 pictures are still in the early stage of bronze.

It's not a bad thing to write a novel with a smaller protagonist, but it can basically make the transition faster later on. You have written more than 500,000 words, but the main character is still nine years old, Little Bronze. But the Holy level has also been done, and the gold has died a lot. Is this fast or slow? I wrote Journey to the West as soon as I was in a hurry. It was a difficult journey and I just couldn't finish it. Judging from the proportion of the plot, it can also be renamed "Misty Journey to the West"

The protagonist is so young and weak but he managed to kill so much gold and silver. What will happen to the plot in the future? I can only read the first 300,000 words

This. . . Be patient, no matter how strong the gold is, it can't ignore the opposition of a lot of silver. Asking the lord to leave his guards and become a soldier is like asking him, do you want to disobey or be cannon fodder? Once it is not written well, it can easily become poisonous. A lord is a lord, not a hero. A lord cherishes his life and considers himself as a family. A hero does not care about life and death for the sake of his name. For their own safety, lords can be timid, sacrifice their guards, and do whatever it takes. Keep the scale in mind Don't write those who wear shoes as barefoot. Personal heroism is too strong, that is the Virgin, the protective umbrella. If the lords are really like this, they will line up one by one like heroes. The lords have their own way of survival.

I feel like it collapsed in the third volume. It was okay to describe the plot from a small perspective before, but now it doesn't work when it changes to a larger perspective. The power system is starting to get messy. The plot is unplanned, like hammering here and there. It's messy and cannot be integrated. It's better to follow the farming style and slowly expand the perspective as your strength develops.

It's over 100 chapters and it's still eight years old. Does the author plan to finish the book or is it eight years old?

The protagonist doesn't plan to grow up, right? Forever eight? As well as the plot and protagonist's power system, it gave me the feeling that I was reading a novel ten years ago, and the routines were too old!

How much is unbearable! Is it fun to repeatedly ravage the protagonist⊙▽⊙

I came to see the lord, but the protagonist was always a child? I recommend the author to take a look at what he wrote about The Great Lord of the Mist World!

Alas, I saw the third volume, and I really couldn't bear to complain. First, the writing at the beginning is too poor. There are many grammatical errors. One sentence is confused and repeated several times, which greatly affects the reading experience. Also, the plants in the early stage feel that they only have one function and are too monotonous. Second, your progress is too fast. Just go to the market and the protagonist will develop like crazy. Then you will cheat all kinds of things, resurrecting the dead, mastering various skills in an instant, killing people two levels higher, teleporting invincible enemies. You are really cheating as you write, automatically refining medicine, etc. You don't have to worry about it at all. They are all highlights in the first place, but you end up mentioning them all in one stroke, writing like a running diary. Third, the pretense is too low, the dialogue is too awkward, and you don't know how to leave blank space. Fourth, we are looking at this theme just to see your farming development. The theme is farming. Your timeline is a month and a half when you go out, stay for two days when you go back, and another half a month when you go out. There is no mention of the territory at all. You started writing when you were 8 years old. Why did you write the timeline in such a hurry? I don't understand, I can't understand. Fifth, when I saw the beginning of the third volume of Proton, I immediately didn't want to read it. One is that a gentleman does not set up a dangerous wall and allows the protagonist to act as a hostage. All actions may be monitored by others. The protagonist himself has all kinds of big secrets and possesses a hodgepodge of powers that can be exposed if he is not careful. He himself is not very secretive. He is really not afraid of leaks or death. There is really nothing to say. Sixth, the awareness of secrecy is really bad, the speed of development is like a mad dog, the speed of secret leakage is also like a mad dog, and there is really no need to guard against others. At the beginning, it was the father of the protagonist, then the soldiers who accompanied him, then the slaves he bought, and then the servants in the castle knew about it. You really are not afraid of others catching you and cutting you into pieces. I really blame everything on magic, so I'm too lazy to make it up. The key is that he is the only one in the world who can cast spells, absolutely.

After reading a hundred chapters, the protagonist does not know how to develop industry, does not know how to use the knowledge of his previous life, and does not understand what real power is. Say he is a time traveler? Sorry, this is just a native in the appearance of a time traveler, just like Xiao Yan from Fighting to Break the Sky. Take the paragraph about refining the primary strength potion: "When there is a shortcut to the end, who would take the old road full of thorns and many obstacles? Because it is orthodox? No, that is a fool!" Obviously I want to be lazy and abandon the most correct path, but I am told that he is righteous, but I don't know that I am the clown. Knowledge is always your own, and what you know belongs to you. If the golden finger disappears one day, then the protagonist will be useless.

It feels like the protagonist works for the Tree of War. If you say that under its cover, it takes away the souls, it also takes away those who were killed in the pyramid. This is unreasonable.

He is almost dead, but the protagonist still only wants the third-level perfection of a woman. Isn't it possible without a woman?

It took dozens of chapters to go out to make a deal with the family, and the progress bar of this book has reached 13%.

There are very few books whose first sentence can poison countless people.

That's why I said try not to finish the novel, it's another bad one

Song Jiang led the whole gang in Liangshan to be recruited. Tong Guan wanted to trap him and kill him, but Su Taiwei persuaded him to make the best use of everything. When the Liao Kingdom invaded, Song Jiang and his group were ordered to go north to fight against the enemy. When we arrived at Chenqiaoyi, Zhongshu Province sent officials to distribute wine and meat to the three armies for their hard work. Who would have thought that this group of officials were so greedy that they reduced each bottle of official wine given by the emperor to only half a bottle, and reduced each pound of meat to six taels. Yiliangshan Military Academy scolded: "You and other profit-seeking people have ruined the court's reward! Go and scrape gold on the Buddha's face!" Xiang Guan scolded: "You bold thief who will not stop killing! You still haven't changed your rebellious nature! Catch this thief!" The military academy was furious and pulled out the knife. Xiang Guan pointed at Liangshan Military Academy's nose and cursed: "You are a grass bandit, who do you dare to kill with your sword! Do you dare to kill me?" The military academy raised the knife and dropped it, killing Xiang Guan. Song Jiang was shocked and said angrily: "He is an official of the imperial court. I am afraid of him. How can you kill him? You must hurt us and everyone else." The military academy kowtowed: "He He scolded us for killing them all, so he killed that guy on a whim, and I was willing to die alone." Song Jiang had no choice but to hang the military academy man to death, behead him, and ask the court for forgiveness. The corpse of Xiang Guan was stored in a coffin, and he spent a lot of money to appease Xiang Guan's family and build relationships before giving up. Liangshan soldiers lined up to go to the north to fight against the Liao invasion. They were all sad and angry when they saw the heads of the Liangshan Military Academy hanging and exposed to the sun by Chenqiao Station. ............ "Chao An, Zhao An, Zhao An!" Chao Yu threw the "Water Margin" in his hand to the ground and cursed. "I want to protect my family and the country, but I am insulted by corrupt officials first! Is this killing Ma Su with tears? This is clearly the result of one general's success!" Want to change? Come and see

People were persuaded to quit in the first paragraph. You can't even use punctuation marks. Do you have a grudge against your Chinese teacher?

Pure immortality writing without any substantive lord content

Cut directly? Why don't you click and finish the book? Direct investment failed.

The column where the best ones were kept was raised, but there were no more. Can the author write yet?