Biography of Lingding Mountain People

It almost collapsed. The author was wrong from the beginning. What's the use of the baby being so powerful? He's not under his control, and his cultivation is controlled by the baby. The most important thing is that if your cultivation level is low, it will be useless. There is no thrill of leveling up. I'm sure I've pounced

To be honest, unless you are a newcomer or novice, it will be very difficult even in the early stage. The tripod is a hurdle that cannot be overcome, it is too dramatic. It's almost gone. The author relies on the fusion of the protagonist's soul to make the story more interesting, but the author forcefully adds all kinds of drama. I'm really speechless.

I can't stand it anymore, it's too toxic. I've watched almost half of it. The protagonist does nothing but practice. He has made thousands of hard-boiled eggs and he just doesn't build the foundation. A scumbag in the Qi training stage always has to make trouble with a group of Yuanying gods and try to be clever in front of a group of Yuanying gods. Anyway, no matter what, he will defy the fate of the gods and himself. I don't use it for cultivation. I put it in the cauldron and watch myself get high. This tree has been used for thousands of years and that elixir has never been used for tens of thousands of years. Anyway, I will grab everything I see and take it. This is either the cultivation of immortals or the TM Duobao Boy Show Treasure Conference 🙂😰😰

The plot concept is really good. The story arrangement is too confusing. Many things feel lost after being written. If someone plagiarizes it, it will definitely become popular

What a thief's spiritual treasure, he tricked the Yuanying Corpse King, Yuanying Sword Cultivator, Lei Xiu, and a large number of innocent cultivators.

There are thousands of fans, but I am the only one who has commented. Both of the two movies you wrote have over a million words, and they are still level one. You should consider whether they are suitable for you.

It's messy, I can't figure out the training system, the protagonist has a chance every three days, there are messy treasures, and chicken feathers all over the place

I discovered that the Qingzhou Tribulation was entirely caused by the protagonist himself. He tricked people and snatched things everywhere, and in the end, he tricked all his own people to death and became a virgin bitch.

The protagonist has countless resources, but his strength is weak. This book needs to be read with intelligence, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to read. Unfortunately, my IQ is online, so I gave it up.

Protagonist: Dog Licking Tool Man All supporting characters: Hypocrite, Real Villain, Madonna, Bitch, Goblin and Monster, Monster and Demon Storyline: Whenever the protagonist picks up a full cauldron of shit with the help of a broken cauldron, he will be snatched away by a powerful character, the evil dog, and then he is caught and transformed into a Dog Licking Tool Man to continue picking up... It's such a cycle There is no righteous person, everyone is a merciless person. The carefree immortal, the Confucian who cares about the world, the compassionate Buddha, the chivalrous person who serves the country and the people... Do not exist To tell the truth, as long as you change the situation of being caught and seek refuge with the strong, and then secretly poach, this is a completely refreshing article. As a result, I wrote this article about abuse, and I was convinced.

Upgrading is too slow. With so many resources and so many creations, pigs will fly into the sky.

To sum up, everyone lost everything and risked their lives to give the protagonist a chance 😅

Personal feeling This book has collapsed. It is purely because the author is alone in yy, and it is a special blow to the author. I guess the author didn't write an outline for this novel either. The protagonist is comfortable to pick up various opportunities. Goldfinger opened so much, and the protagonist got so many resources, but in the end, he was completely taken away by the bridge in the middle of the game. And I don't understand that the protagonist has taken so many treasures, but his own strength is still so scummy and useless. The power of creation in the cauldron should have an effect on all living things. I know you said that the protagonist is the master of the weapon, which is equivalent to the protagonist's own shit. But as a weapon owner, you shouldn't use people to control weapons. Why did you end up using weapons to control people? And if Ding and the protagonist are one, then Ding's improvement should also lead to the improvement of the protagonist. However, what you wrote does not reflect that they are one. It gives me the feeling that Ding and the protagonist are separate. What you wrote is very brainless and intellectually depressing. The protagonist has no skills at all and does this and that day by day. Not only is the protagonist brain-dead, you probably didn't think about anything when you conceived it. You only thought that I would take all the good ones, and you didn't spend time and effort to modify them. What's the use of envying others for signing tens of thousands of words. Should

What the hell is this writing about? The treasures obtained can train N god-transforming monks. The protagonist is still in the Qi training period. Any of the treasures in the cauldron is worth tens of millions of spiritual stones, but he is greedy for the resources of the Li family, which only add up to tens of thousands of spiritual stones. I don't know what he is going to write.

What makes me feel the most disgusting is that the connection between chapters and paragraphs is so poor. The plot advances very abruptly and bluntly, and it feels like one paragraph after another is missing. The reading experience is very poor. The setting is also unreasonable. This is a book about mortals, and it gives me the feeling that there is no good person in the whole world, so people are all dark behind their backs, which is very sad. Exalted people do not have the grace and mind of an expert. Many children of Qingzhou's family sects have surrendered to the enemy. There is also a feeling that it is impossible to cast the foundation without the foundation casting elixir, and it is impossible to form the foundation without the gold-forming elixir. It is locked tightly. So many people are fighting to grab those few elixirs. They don't know how to innovate. Where have they lost their brains?

How many words did you sign the contract with? I heard that the book "The Swordsman's Path" was even worse than yours in the early stages.

After watching it for a long time, I still don't understand that passers-by who smell the protagonist's farts can improve their bones and improve their cultivation, but the protagonist has never been able to upgrade. Why?

After reading this, I just want to say that this book can be read without thinking, it is rubbish.

It feels very obscure when I read it, and there are big problems with the writing. The transitions of things are inconsistent and it feels like there are jumps, and there are a lot of them. Many explanations are also inexplicable. A matter of writing! In addition, Xiaoding should be a magical treasure? The gold finger is a bit too wide. Writing a novel cannot be neither self-righteous nor too self-righteous. You may be in the latter category. The feeling of reading Chapter 11.

The pace is too slow. The protagonist wants to use resources on himself, not just to take advantage of the treasure mountain.

Author, this is too poisonous. Wherever the protagonist goes, there will be disaster, so he can't be more sleazy and write about farming well.

The writing is good. It just deviates too far from the main line of cultivation. The main thing for the protagonist is to improve his cultivation. During the Qi training period, the protagonist uses all kinds of miraculous elixirs and genius earth treasures, which are enough for the protagonist to cultivate to the point of building a foundation. However, the protagonist still wants to be a wanderer. He is always seeking death, which leads to a lot of meaningless plots. In the Qi training period, this line is not refined enough. For example, the main character is Qi training. I think the main detailed lines should be placed at the level of Qi training. The characters involved in the foundation-building period rarely promote the story line. Jin Dan and Yuanying can only miss a little bit when writing about the overall situation of a region, and hide in the mist at other times. The problem now is that the protagonist starts to compete with the foundation-building Dan Yuanying during the Qi training period, and there are a lot of them. This seems unwise.

Why does it feel like the protagonist of this novel is always on the road to abuse, and has no sense of experience!

First of all, Goldfinger is too awesome, and it is completely out of the control of the protagonist. The protagonist is the servant of the Lingding. The protagonist of the book is a broken tripod without life and emotions. It is easier to obtain the resources of the technique than to drink water. So what's the point? ? ! ! Secondly, the Qi training period was too awesome, and I didn't read it later because I didn't think it was worth it. It's not that the protagonist was so awesome during the Qi training period, but that the things he came into contact with during the Qi training period were too unnatural, and he followed the rules at every turn. The author was not embarrassed, but the readers who read it were embarrassed.

It heats up too slowly. . . The protagonist feels that the cultivation of this ancient holy body consumes more resources and is more strenuous than Ye Hei, the ancient holy body. I kept yawning while reading it, and the main reason was that I couldn't see any improvement in the protagonist even after Chapter 50. I kept feeling depressed.

Why not use "The Biography of the Cave Man" as the title of the book? ? ? 🤫

Congratulations on the success of the work and the visit of "The Road to Immortality".

You forcefully pretend to be cool, and it feels weird to be targeted. Everyone is against you, and there's nothing else. It's like this throughout the article.

After reading so many fairy novels, I have never seen such an exaggerated and sexy character. An ant with the seventh level of qi training has several treasures. Can your golden finger be more awesome? The key is that there is such an awesome and obscene golden finger, and the protagonist is almost like a waste.

Nowadays, it is difficult for this kind of slow-heating style to become popular. . To be honest, the author's writing is pretty good! But now the mainstream is happiness. . Life is not easy now. I just want to read novels for leisure and entertainment. .