Magic Gunpowder and Death Crow

Generally speaking, this book was born out of "Young Girl's War Chronicles", with the addition of "crow's cry" and "death bird" and other exciting points. The climax and intensity of the first battle are also much better than "Young Girl". The writing is good, and you can listen to the book very smoothly, which shows that the author has worked hard on word choice and sentence construction, and the descriptions of several early battles are quite remarkable. However, the two exciting points of "the contrast between the heart of a social beast and the body of a young girl" and "the devil in the skin of a young girl as described by the hard-core soldiers" are missing. The male protagonist is not good at writing emotional dramas (harem & selling meat), and he pees more than he feels happy when reading, which greatly deducts points. Furthermore, the reverse order at the beginning not only failed to attract attention, but also discouraged many readers at the starting point of the popularity of "Three Golden Chapters". The self-psychological analysis of the protagonist, who is slightly literary and young, is also redundant. This is also where the new author is inexperienced. Because the plot is based on history, there is not much to say. It can be expected that there will be no surprises or scares. As for the world view setting and background foreshadowing... Most newcomers can't control group portraits, and not many people are interested in those zzdz in World War. Overall, it makes people want to sleep and don't want to spend time digging into it. After all, online novels are different from light novels. For the latter, you can bite the bullet and read it for fun, because the money has been spent early on, and only time will be spent later. Every chapter of the online article is paid for on the spot. It is very frustrating for readers to open the latest subscription for several days in a row and find that there is nothing exciting. If you continue to write the foreshadowing according to the rhythm of "Young", the subscription will definitely be lost. When readers see generals meeting or developing weapons and magic, they will naturally quit and skip to the later war part... Because most of them don't want to read this. There is only one battle after dozens of chapters, and the battle process may be under the pressure of updates and the quality cannot be guaranteed. There are almost no emotional scenes and female characters worth looking forward to. The upgrade of combat power is extremely slow. There are too few plots that promote the strength of the protagonist from a third perspective... These are huge obstacles for readers to follow the update. Online article authors must respect the market rules of online articles. Otherwise, wouldn't the pursuit of follow-up reading, the number of words on the shelves, the number of daily updates, and the most important recommendation position be in vain?

I stayed up late and just finished reading it, so I can briefly share my thoughts. Because I can relate to the radio waves of this book. Although I don't know much about historical weapons, I feel that this book is very suitable for me. First of all, in terms of writing, the text description does not make people feel awkward and allows me to sink into the story. In terms of character creation, it is not like ordinary novels that have many detailed characters, but more about the entire era, country and protagonist. However, I think the control of the protagonist's creation is very good and has a certain degree of advancement, but it also has its own limitations. However, if it has limitations, it will break away from Xiaobai's novel and will dissuade some people (but it is not a shortcoming, it is a feature). The design of fighting weapons and many other aspects of combat feel like the author has researched them, and they are still very interesting. However, after reading the author's chapter, I feel that the results are not very satisfactory. In fact, the quality of the article itself is considered to be at least passable. However, the subject matter of the novel itself has already shown that it will not become popular without sufficient exposure, because it is different from the current mainstream. Although it is a bit exciting, the background is war after all, and there will be no very daily descriptions. The overall rhythm and atmosphere are not popular. The author himself is also a newcomer and has no connections or fan base to increase the early exposure of the book. However, regardless of the roughness, the book is still to my liking. I will keep ordering it when it is released. If the author writes it, I will order it. I understand that I won't be able to keep writing. After all, it has to be just right. However, I feel that the author still has some writing skills. I just don't know if the author can write well in other subjects. I hope the results will get better and better.

A very good book, although it is rarely updated, it is non-toxic.

I have caught up with the latest chapter, and I feel that there are several problems with this book. 1. The title is Magic Gunpowder and the Death Crow, and the introduction also explains that it is a fantasy of a duel between magic and gunpowder. But to be honest, a considerable part of the content talks about irrelevant things, such as the international situation and calculations against senior officials of the Ministry of National Defense. These contents account for at least half. These contents can be summed up in one sentence, and there is no need to describe them, because if you want to read this part of the content, why not read the Machiavellian article? And the level of this part is average, not exciting. 2. Magic should have been discovered for a long time, at least several decades, but there is very little content on civilian use, which is not very logical. This part of the content can be regarded as the application of magic and technology, and the author's imagination can also be seen. 3. I feel that the exciting content of the book lies in the battle game between magicians. If this is used as a selling point, the rest of the content should pave the way for the next battle. The one about the Greek Officer Corps is quite good. But if promotion is the core, and political opponents are eliminated, and the battles are all for promotion, I am afraid that the title and introduction of the book will have to be changed, because this book lover will be disappointed. 4. I feel that the author's idea is that the content of the book is for anti-fascism, and the political struggle is to drive Britain to fight against fascism. But the content and the main plot are actually two different things. For example, in The Lord of the Rings, the main plot revolves around the Lord of the Rings, but the exciting content is not entirely in the Fellowship of the Ring, the Battle of Helm's Deep, the siege of Isengard by the Treants, and the Battle of the White City, which started from the Lord of the Rings. However, the content has nothing to do with the Lord of the Rings. It is the excitement of the battle that makes the movie popular.

Let me talk about the status of this book. The author had to take a break from writing for a while due to recuperation. However, during the recuperation period, his account was blocked and the editor of the book resigned. The new editor was irresponsible, and then he died here.

Seeing that the author often responds to questions, I'll post one too. The first time I saw this book was in the daily guide,... How should I put it, I felt that the title and introduction were not attractive enough, and I missed it all at once. Later, I saw a post promoting this book, so I searched for it and took a closer look. I haven't seen the latest chapter yet, about 20% of the total. First of all, I personally feel that the writing is good. Whose vest is this? It doesn't look like a newcomer. If I can maintain the standard, I think I will read it to the end. There's probably a part of Tanya's feelings there too. Tanya's story puts aside factors such as the easily harmonious war background. The main plot is the battle with existence X. Existence He is a rival to Tanya, who does not believe in God and dreams of working as a civil servant in a stable homeland. But there is no doubt that Tanya fell into Existence The protagonist of this book is not on the side of the empire. The survival crisis at the beginning was solved through personal wisdom. But if you want to survive, you have many choices. According to the analysis, there is a high probability that you will not be able to escape conscription under the background of the times. The army is indeed a low-threshold way to improve your social status. There are some issues that I would like to discuss with you. If you want to improve your status in the army, as long as you win, you will always win. Is this the simplest way? Because Tanya was calculated by Existence Falling behind and lacking preparation, the frontal battlefield will definitely win less and lose more at the beginning. Avoid the main battlefield. After the intensity of the war increases, he will be transferred back from the side battlefield as a backbone. Is he more independent? Is the risk lower? The protagonist takes the initiative to go to the frontal battlefield for the reason of improving his status. How high is the goal? It seems that it is better to tell the readers the goal at the beginning, and the main line is clearer.

Emmmm The writing style is passable, but the context of this book has nothing of the author's own. The international situation is basically copied from that of Europe during World War II. The protagonist's experience is too similar to Tanya's War Chronicles, so in a sense it is considered copied (especially the medal for engaging the enemy). . . . . . Even the protagonist does not have the courage and charisma of Tanya, and lacks personality. . . . . All in all, if I hadn't read Tanya and the History of World War II, it would still be an above-average book. . . In a word, this book lacks soul, which is the author's own thoughts. What kind of world and protagonist do you want to show? This is something that cannot be copied. The author should work hard.

"Map Tower" will be updated regularly in the future, and old maps will be deleted after updates. In addition, the map was produced by Kingdom Rush 2 and has many omissions, which are waiting for optimization (Gang San deleted it for me... Sorry!)

I originally wanted to post it in the character information, but suddenly I found a reward button... The picture is not original and inappropriate, so I put it in the book review area Second Lieutenant Adam is observing the enemy's situation Colonel Gavin is waiting for the report Elizabeth and her useless male teammates

I just read Chapter 177, and I have always had a question, why are there no army magicians? Even if the magicians eliminated by airborne are mixed with the army, they can also use multi-purpose arms such as radar, sniper, anti-tank infantry, mobile turret, etc., But I have always seen only airborne.

Ace Airborne~

I'm thinking that the airborne troops don't need a sea platform as big as an aircraft carrier as a fulcrum to fight. Then sea-based airborne troops are much better than aircraft carriers. It doesn't make sense for the airborne troops not to rely on land bases to attack the enemy fleet at sea

Elizabeth on the day of reunion~

There are too many background introductions, which makes reading feel fragmented. It is recommended that the background be exchanged in another way! In the context of the overall situation, a private soldier is too far away, so focus on what he can do!

After reading dozens of chapters first, I personally feel that the cruelty of war should be highlighted. Like the Battle of Gronika, with less and more, fighting away from home, even if the enemy commander loses his mind, it is unlikely that there will be no casualties at all. Adding personal descriptions of casualties and sacrifices can increase the reader's ability to empathize. In short, I hope the author can write better and better, and I hope to see the combination of the navy, army, and even communications and logistics with magic later.

I feel very speechless. The author has some problem with the designation of military ranks. A colonel commands a lieutenant to fight such a war, which means that the military ranks of the magic air soldiers are too low, and the protagonist's military rank is too low. Our air force basically has the rank of lieutenant. I imagine that the astronauts and the kind of outstanding colonels are all low-level. The author must have thought about the military ranks of the protagonist and the troops he leads. It seems awkward no matter how you look at it. He is a hero of the kingdom and is only a lieutenant. According to the setting, there are so few magic airmen, so why should they be all lieutenants like the air force? The protagonist should also have a captain (it can be said that it is because of age, not that the protagonist can only be a lieutenant). If it were not because the protagonist is young, I think it is normal to be directly promoted to major. Your military rank settings are really terrible.

I have just read Chapter 59. I have never quite understood what are the characteristics and irreplaceability of a magical flying soldier like the protagonist? This type of unit is very rare, not as plentiful as pilots, and not as easy to build as pilots. But what about the effect. When converted into Steel 4, war is a competition of statistics. It is true that the principal cannot do without 7 steps, 2 cannons or even 10 steps, but it can do without tanks. The former is irreplaceable. In addition to killing each other, magicians, judging from the first few dozen chapters, perform special tasks like Wu Zhi, and it is very expensive to train them. In fact, without adding Maozi, it is true that Maozi, the magician, cannot stand it. I feel like it would be nice if there were some outstanding chapters describing the role of magicians. Not everyone has read "War", but I have never seen it... I still play P Club a lot For example, tanks solved the problem of front line breakthroughs in World War I. They were temporary fortresses in land warfare, breakthroughs, and mobile integration, so they are irreplaceable and easy to build (see Maozi) Aircrafts solved the problem of reconnaissance, information delivery, and transportation of important personnel. (So ​​the Republic of China also had some airplanes, which are irreplaceable). Then there are close support, tactical bombing, strategic bombing... There are a lot of functions What about the magician? What can't be replaced by airplanes? It feels like it was not explained clearly in the first dozens of chapters. Anyway, I don't understand Principal Gang 4 doesn't have martial arts or paratroopers, he can still fight. The principal still has a plane (which can still deliver orders and transport personnel), but it can be done without military commanders or paratroopers. So I feel like there is a problem at the beginning...

This book is very touching. Single-soldier flying and combat couldn't be more romantic.

This is a mediocre one-on-one building (mainly for monthly ticket tasks...) The author has not encountered any bottlenecks in character design at present, but if there are enthusiastic book friends to participate in the interaction, I welcome your creative ideas. Requirements: At this stage, we only accept paratroopers from Versailles (French Chicken). There is no gender limit. The age limit is 18 to 40 years old. There is no limit on personality.

A head portrait of a young Adam made by pinching her (the color of Adam's eyes was not found in the book, so he chose blue-green after careful consideration).

Coming from the comment section of "Steel Fire", the author must not learn from electricity. (Nanami, you have committed a heinous crime

Damn it, why did this cut-off book get pushed to me again today?

It's made by Steel Fire, it looks great, support it.

The author wrote it very well. The protagonist grew up step by step during the war and slowly changed. He fully accepted all the ups and downs in life and slowly changed. It was great! It's not a cool article, it's more like reading about a legendary growth path.

Just reading the introduction, I felt that it should be based on the setting of "Young Girl War Chronicles", so I will collect it first.

I don't understand why you recommend it to me after cutting off the starting point, but the author's writing is indeed very good. I will definitely follow him when he opens a new book.

Alas😔, I didn't expect that the book I collected a long time ago would disappear like this. It's really a pity... I'll write a book review to express my love for it. Although it is a light novel, this book is very realistic in its description of the war and the situation on the mainland. It is very comprehensive in terms of both the strategy on the battlefield and the discussion of the current war situation. War is not a personal matter. Different tactics, differences in equipment, the momentum of soldiers, etc. All determine the outcome of the war... At the same time, the magic introduced in the novel also makes it possible to win with less, making the protagonist's role in the battlefield greater, making the novel more exciting. Of course, as a light novel, the most admirable aspect of this book is the character design and characterization. The male protagonist is a 14-year-old young officer and a rational idealist. As a time traveler, he doesn't have much affection for his country, and he doesn't have much pursuit of fame and fortune. In the beginning, I just set foot on the battlefield to make my life better. Later, it was to bring the anti-fascist war to an early end so that more people could fight without being implicated in the war. In addition, there are the patriotic chief who is as rational as a robot and has no plans, a smart and motivated adjutant, a national warrior who has grown from a young reporter to the strongest spy, and the working class leader Secretary Lu... The protagonist is surrounded by many idealists or capitalist careerists who emerged during the war. Everyone has their own positions and determinations, but there are also many people who, like the protagonist, fight hard to end the war. What attracts me most about the novel is the rationality and ruthlessness of the protagonist and his superiors when they plot against others and the battlefield. Realizing your ideals is not something you can do just by talking about it. You must be prepared to make sacrifices along the way. In order to achieve goals, sometimes we have to choose to sacrifice a few people and interests. This is also what I admire most about the protagonist and the commander. The article mostly draws on "The Chronicles of a Young Girl" (also called "The Chronicles of Tanya") in terms of military ranks and magic, but it is more rigorous than the anime in terms of war descriptions, and the discussion of the overall situation has also been expanded a lot. Many readers have complained that it would be better to read "The Story of a Young Girl" directly, but in my opinion this book is more beautiful than the anime. Although it lacks the attraction of a young girl, it is more realistic and in-depth than the anime. Novels can also express the characters' personality traits better than animations. In short, after I found out that the book suddenly disappeared, I felt really regretful. It is really not easy to find a well-written light novel at the starting point, which is a pity (><)!

In the end, will the protagonist retire as an ace in the air, or will he become a big boss in the air force?

That's it, it's over~Spread the flowers!

Why have I finished the book? When can I expect updates to be resumed?