Scourge Asylum

Hello, dear readers!

Hey, I got to know the author from the Disaster Asylum. That book is really a masterpiece. I really like it. The following books are all lacking in performance. I think the author can find the reason. The neurotic protagonist and world view are not easy to write, and are not particularly attractive. It is recommended that the author can quote part of the world view, but not all of it. In addition, there are a few points that attract me to Disaster: First point: Semi-invincible flow, invincible flow is becoming more and more popular now. It is the kind of real invincibility. It must not be under the guise of invincibility. In the end, the opponent cannot be killed with a single blow. Second point: Light novel style and fantasy style. Although Calamity is not a light novel, it has a bit of light novel + fantasy style. Light novels are a very popular genre now, and the mystery style is also very suitable for the author. In the mystery style, fantasy and mystery are easier to write and more popular than fantasy/fairy mystery, and they are in line with the author's knowledge reserve. It does not necessarily have to use a mysterious world view or promotion method, but you can use its style. The third point: Organization/power, if what attracts me in the early stage is the first two points, what attracts me in the later stage is the organization. However, the construction of the organization is not perfect in disaster, which is a very attractive point and feels a bit let go. Here you can refer to "My Salvation Game Comes True" and the author's own "Disaster Asylum". Personally, I feel that if we continue to write in this style, we can refer to the author's own disasters and add some more popular elements. Because it is a pity that after the disaster, the author's two consecutive novels failed to achieve good results, and they were not attractive enough for me. But before the disaster, I am very confident that the author can write good novels. Here are some creative ideas for the author. Shuhuang always hopes that the author who has written a favorite novel can continue to write the next favorite novel.

Happy New Year to all readers! If you don't have a partner, find your perfect partner in the new year. Those who are struggling, I wish you a successful career and make a lot of money. If there are elderly people at home, I wish them good health and a long life. To those who are still in school, I wish you success in your studies!

Level three or four at every turn, but ordinary people are still alive?

I really hope the author can become popular. The author's level is still very high, surpassing most people from the starting point.

If you finish this book well, if the novels you write become popular in the future, readers will look for novels that you, the author, have written before, and then they can get a good novel😊. The creativity and ideas of this book are very good, and the fighting scenes are also very vividly described.

This is a war. . War, the great war. That's how we survived in 1999

I came here for a bit and felt it was not as good as the original one. This opening is very impressive, but it's not attractive when written like this. It's better to start catching vampires and develop your abilities a little bit.

The best feeling is still in the asylum, but I still hope that the author will get better and better. Writing a book, you never know when it will explode Just like starting from Red Moon, the impromptu work after the previous book hit the street became popular all of a sudden.

Tang Ada: War (likes war deductions) Liang Erni: Famine (likes to eat, has a large appetite) Wen Xiaosan: Plague (likes to poison) Wang Sini: Death (likes to try different ways to die) Yan Xiaowu: Fire (maybe a red dragon, with red scales, likes money) Hai Liuni: Flood? (Has mysophobia) Feng Qimei: Wind disaster (likes to be invisible, not letting others find her, and then feels sorry for herself, hoping to be needed) Han Bamei: Ice disaster (cracks on her body) Huang Xiaojiu: (possibly randomly) turns into various insects Zhen Xiaoshi: Kuang Shiyi: Crazy, crazy (Ability 1: absolute sanity) Mo Twelve: (The king of mess, doesn't care about anything, doesn't eat or drink, has no desire) There may be some imperfections, just try to read 😁

I just hope that the later part of this book won't be like the later part of the Disaster Asylum book.

It took me an entire afternoon to finish the painting. The protagonist really impressed me✿✿ヽ(°▽°)ノ✿

Why did the Invincible novel collapse after writing Chapter 70 at the beginning? Being forcibly suppressed in combat power is very uncomfortable to watch. It stands to reason that the author is not a novice, so how could he make such a mistake?

Good guy, another 1999 non-disclosure agreement slipped through the cracks.

This book has great potential. Here are the reasons why. First, most of the protagonist's high-end power now comes from his patients. However, in this case, the protagonist himself is not a completely ordinary person. He also has a powerful but difficult to use ultimate move and a weakened version of the ultimate move that can be commonly used, giving readers a sense of security. Of course, the reason why the ultimate move is not commonly used is logically consistent and is also a very important point. Second, the world view is relatively complete. The origin of the demons and their promotion channels are explained from the beginning, allowing readers to deepen their understanding of the demons. Third, foreshadowing is very important. A good foreshadowing is very important. The author handles foreshadowing very well. For example, the protagonist said that there are no fifth-level monsters in this world, and they will be extradited. The fourth-level monsters will gradually become less and less, but the protagonist encounters fourth-level monsters from time to time. But when it will be unveiled, we still have to look at it comprehensively.

Even the name of your introduction is much better than the last one.

I just discovered that I had read a few chapters of the author's previous book and then couldn't stand it anymore. . . . This one is obviously much better than the previous one. Let's read the first one again.

Why is this book not popular?🤔

I suggest the author wait before starting a new book and read other people's books. The three books after Asylum were all unreadable after reading the beginning.

Faster, faster, faster! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this!

"On the fact that after my second visit to the asylum, I went to Qidian Novel to support the author."

I came from a piracy shelter. The character of the protagonist written by the author is very suitable for me. The author has published a new book. Subscriptions and monthly passes have given me hope.

The author greatly requests updates😭😭

Does it look like it's going to end?

Except for the price collapse, everything else is fine. It can only be said that the protagonist is not even a little greedy. He has the initiative. It can be said that when cooperating, the lion opens his mouth. He asks others, how much does this cost? He can definitely make his own decision. He is not a member of the staff, so why should he be issued according to the rules of the staff? He can definitely say that, he gave out 120,000 yuan, but he really can't understand it. Can I say that poverty limited his imagination? Not only is this not refreshing, it will actually make readers feel frustrated.

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Previously, I was afraid of getting into trouble and wanted to wait for the trouble to subside before going in to find a mirror. But now I am helping the officials for a little money. Before that, I could have cooperated with Lajier. The rewards were rich and the risk was lower than bringing a bunch of trash fish or becoming a spy. Why rush to the street? Cooperating with Ragir is a choice that maximizes interests, so that even if the risks are judged, it will not be a choice that is not proportional to the reward.