Create an Era of Magic

Long review: The origin of magic comes from the bottom of your heart When I first read this book, I thought it was an exploration-oriented book, but later I discovered that it was more like a farming article. Of course, not everything needs to be labeled. I also particularly like this kind of theme of slow exploration, growth and construction. To be honest, the plot outline of the story is very thoughtful, but due to the author's writing power, I always feel that the character portrayal is not rich enough, especially the portrayal of female characters. I feel that the most vivid person in this book is Ian. Because this character is not the protagonist, there are many side descriptions, but it seems very real. Personally, I think the biggest poisonous point in this book is Douglas, because the protagonist is not a time traveler. As a master, Douglas can actually create different views on things between people in two different worlds. I feel that there may be a lot of interest in writing from this perspective, but as a master, he does not reflect this point at all. Although the protagonist is not a time traveler, he always gives me this feeling. Some of the modern jokes that the author occasionally adds are also very interesting, and they always jump out when they are integrated into the book. In fact, the competition part is very exciting, it would be great if there were more enriching parts. As for the farming transformation part, we can write about the lives of ordinary people and occasionally intersperse it with it. The positioning of the protagonist's character could be clearer. The above are all my personal opinions. As the author's first book, I feel that if I can discover my own shortcomings and make improvements. This is the greatest wealth that a first book can bring to an author. You don't have to listen to readers' suggestions, but you must have your own persistence and attempts to grow in your own writing. To be honest, I did not expect that the author could finish this book. After all, when I first read it, the author was not very satisfied with his results, because there are too many authors who have given up like this, and many of them are masterpieces that are unfortunately unfinished. I'm glad to see that the author persisted until the end. When you meet the south wall, you can turn, but I saw that the author knocked down the south wall. This kind of persistence will definitely gain something, maybe it comes from confidence or from words, which will definitely make the future road wider and further. After all, the most difficult time is often the first step, and the author has taken it down-to-earth. Finally, to sum up, there are many poisonous points in the book, but if you look into it, you will find a vast world inside. To be honest, the ending shocked me. I didn't expect it at all. It can be seen that the author buried a lot of threads and even considered a follow-up. If there is a follow-up to this book, I really want to read it. Okay, I'm off to see the author's new work. Please support the new author. Qidian lacks people with such attitude and persistence. I hope his works will get better and better in the future.

In fact, the author is a little anxious. Masters cannot support themselves through books in one go. Accumulating readers also requires a process. Many masters' masterpieces are old readers who have followed three or four books. Readers also need a selection process. Those who like you will stay, and those who don't love you will leave. You can't become fat in one bite. This is the same as online games. Not only do you have professions and skills, but you also need talents, upgrades, improve skill levels, and develop personal characteristics. In any industry, you need to be calm at the beginning, and sometimes you need to take risks, because you will gain something if you climb dangerous peaks, and you can have a different scenery if you can endure loneliness. The reason why I say so much is that I feel that the author's mentality has not been very good and he is a little anxious. When there are not many readers, it is actually a good way to persevere. After all, it guarantees the quality of the book and gives me a greater room for growth. This book is also a challenge to myself~

I am an old reader of Qidian. I have an old account and this account is fifteen years old. I have seen too many authors affected by comments! Many comments are simply bad comments. It was written by other authors intentionally to interfere with the author's train of thought. If the author believes it, go ahead and revise it. If it is a waste of time, if it is serious, the thinking will be confused, just eunuch! So just write the plot that you think looks good.

Good books leave a name, I bet this book will be popular

It's better to die if you pass it on

This book is too confusing and the plot is unclear! I don't know why God wants to kill all the wild witches in the world? The origin is too confusing! Use this as an excuse to slaughter all the gods in the world! I don't know why God slaughtered the wild witches! Piggy is a wild witch, and after Pigfoot becomes a god, he slaughters all the gods in the world. This book is confusing and has no plot at all! The summary is that a god hit me. No matter how good or bad you are, as long as you are a god, I will kill you. As long as he is a god, he must die! ! After reading the last title, I can see why your book is not famous! It's not a collection of badly written storylines and plot settings. The magician is rational. However, the plot of this book is simply paranoid and all magicians are a bunch of mad dogs.

I seem to know why this book is not very popular, that is, the mediocre time traveler. No matter how the plot develops in the future, it is known that there is a time traveler who passed through the soul at the age of twenty and was a mage. Decades later, he became an old carpenter who teaches magic as an amateur. You should not set the protagonist's master as a modern time traveler from the earth. Such a background story will not make readers think that the old carpenter is a person with a story, but will make readers think that this person is useless. Once time-travelers are mentioned, readers will inevitably substitute them, because readers will subconsciously substitute themselves for similar characters. At the same time, readers will inevitably make horizontal comparisons with time-travelers in other works. Because of the above two points, the work has been screened by readers in the early stage, which is harmful to new books. Can this be avoided? Of course it's possible. The old carpenter doesn't have to be a time traveler, or he doesn't explain the setting at the beginning and figures it out slowly.

Being persuaded to quit by the teacher, what a ghost character setting. As a time traveler, I started to want to do something, but halfway through I found that I couldn't resist, so I gave up and became an ostrich. I read novels to find a place for spiritual sustenance. When I saw this mission setting, my sense of immersion was completely gone. I'm afraid to start writing like this.

I think it's very realistic! If an ordinary person travels to another world, won't he still be an ordinary person? The strong are destined to be popular and drink spicy food wherever they are. Even if I go to the Three Kingdoms now, I don't know how to survive. It's okay to travel through time to the nobles, but who will care about you when you travel back to a peasant 🤫

The main text is pure abuse. All the new characters have a combat power of level 5 or above. If it weren't for the lack of plot, I would have run away.

Let me ask a question, is Annie the heroine? Because of mysophobia, I don't like this kind of plot where a woman is almost raped and the protagonist saves the heroine. It would be great if it wasn't the heroine. Please forgive me for the straight man's terminal cancer.

This book seems to be quite good, but the setting of the protagonist is a bit unacceptable. Why is it not that the protagonist is a time traveler, but an old carpenter is a time traveler? Although the old carpenter is still the master of the protagonist, why not just let the protagonist become a time traveler.

Good job, author. I'll give it a thumbs up once it's released.

Sincerely, it's really good to watch. I hope it won't end badly. I've seen too many people who have traveled through time as the protagonist. This book by the author is definitely a good book. If you are not a full-time author, I really hope it can be completed completely. I will definitely support you when I put it on the shelves

Not necessarily adopted, but definitely considered carefully2333 Like some new magic, more distinctive characters, etc.

I read this book about three or four days ago and couldn't stop reading it. So the following is my experience of reading. If there are any mistakes, please correct me. First of all, the world view of this book is eye-catching. It depicts an era of gods before the rise of magic, which is a highlight in comparison with other novels. Secondly, this book does not have any brainless plots such as pretending to be a slap in the face, but shows the perseverance, courage and resourcefulness of pioneers and explorers, who walk on thin ice. Third, the villain's character is reasonable. The greatest advantage of the description of the villains in this book is that the villains are written as normal people, rather than blindly smearing and exaggerating evil. Take the City Lord of Jino as an example. As a villain, this City Lord shows the fearlessness of a warrior and also shows his paranoia after being trapped in a political whirlpool. Fourth, the plot arrangement is reasonable. While promoting the development of the story, the plot conforms to the characters' personalities without being stiff, which is commendable. Then I have to talk about the shortcomings. The biggest shortcoming is: typo! Typo! Typo! The second point is that the description of the supporting characters is not deep enough and the image is not full enough. The description of the supporting characters in the article is not enough to support a character with a full image and distinct personality. Personally, I think the interactive plot between the main and supporting characters should be strengthened to create full-bodied characters. The third point, which is not a shortcoming, is that I hope the author can stick to his own ideas and proceed according to his own ideas, because only by writing according to his own ideas can he truly build a huge and three-dimensional world view of the pre-magic era. Okay, limited by my ability, I will write so much. Come on, author!

I'm fighting Gandalf wildly here, who dares to act wild! !

I have a question, which character do you readers like... (My real life is Randall, I am crazy about this guy!!!) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

At this time, the law destroyer is on his way.

After reading the first volume, I don't know why some people think that Douglas is not good at it. Douglas is a time traveler, but he didn't see that he has a golden finger. He can't level up by fighting monsters and completing tasks. He developed the magician system on his own based on the wild wizard. He is living in seclusion as a carpenter. He became a retired man after becoming famous, and he took an apprentice by the way. What's wrong with this?

Why haven't I discovered such a good book like Te Niang's before? I looked through various book lists and couldn't find it. I found it after I put it in the fantasy category. After I finished the exam, I also checked out the entire book list.

The writing is not very good, and it is not refreshing enough.

It would be great if the protagonist had a forbidden love with Douglas. Of course, Douglas Sr. Would be the one to accept it.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, there is nothing poisonous about it, but there is nothing attractive about it either.

This is a good book, but why isn't it popular?

A new round of reincarnation? Has God counterattacked the arcana?

Why did it end so suddenly🤔

I don't understand. Aren't wild witches and wizards the same thing?

It is a rare good book, with a beginning and an end, smooth writing, appropriate foreshadowing and plotting, and the use of imagination is also amazing. In one word, I like it.

I remember there is a book similar to this one, but it feels a bit more enjoyable. The protagonist's abilities are similar to Magneto's. There is a time traveler who should be a female protagonist. Her main ability is a map. Does anyone know this book? Suddenly I wanted to pick it up and read it.