Nagato Sweeps Across the Sky

Release, catch, release, have you seen too much Pleasant Goat? Dozens of chapters in one battle are stupid or rubbish

Nagato does not have the blood successor limit, he only has the Uzumaki bloodline, and the Rinnegan Eye belongs to Uchiha Madara, which can be counted as his eye (plug-in). Even if the protagonist assimilates the eyes in the later stage, it will not be considered a blood successor, because he does not have the bloodline of Senju and Uchiha (well, the Uzumaki has some connections with Senju).

The high-end combat power has been reduced and the low-end combat power has been improved. Looking at which ninjas those shadows fight in the anime is completely one-hit wonders, especially when facing Ban later.

The protagonist is like the bitch next door, beeping endlessly, talking to your opponent for a long time every time you move. Have you not spoken to each other for hundreds of years, or do you think you have enough time to make your opponent think? When your opponent couldn't think clearly, you still explained it thoughtfully. That's enough

First of all, let me talk about it. You have strengthened Konoha too much. In the original anime plot, except for Kakashi who moved twice and was hacked to death, the other ninjas had almost no ability to resist. Konohamaru felt that he was forcefully messing around. And the Senju clan has long since disappeared. When Pain invaded Konoha, the direct members of the Senju clan had died out during the Wood Release experiment and the previous two ninja wars. The rest were all collaterals and their surnames had been changed Secondly, it is too easy to defeat Metkai as a time traveler. All his information is in your hands. It is not as troublesome as you wrote. Moreover, at this stage, he cannot open eight doors. After opening seven doors, he will basically become disabled. Several reasonable solutions? Control one Pain, talk to him about youth, and then the other one will sneak attack directly (the probability of success is very high), use poison or use the Samsara Iron Chakra Rod, just waste one hand and clap, like Jiraiya did, so his combat effectiveness will be limited even if he opens the eight gates, can he open the eight gates even if his body is bleeding massively? Still a problem The second option is to prepare a defective Shura Dao, go up and directly output it with all your strength, force him to open seven doors, and then directly cut off the chakra supply and let him explode. For Nagato's body, it doesn't matter how much damage he takes as long as the chakra supply is cut off. Well, the consumption of chakra is not too big, and then use a defective Shura Dao to let Metkai's seven side effects come out and destroy it, and that's it. It's outrageous to fight head-on like you wrote. For a ninja with high explosive power using this method, it definitely shouldn't be dealt with head-on.

In a word, it disgusts me to death. After almost 40 chapters, I realized something was wrong, so I went to Konoha to set up a map cannon and grab some things. As for Momojiji, why did I write so much? The entire story is nonsense, and the Thousand Hands appear all over the place. If there is really a strong person named Thousand Hands in the original work, why doesn't any one appear in it? What about the map cannon? What about feeling pain? Looking at what you said in front of me, I thought that after grabbing the cells and injecting them, I would just clear the screen with my big move. Is this the result? After playing so many chapters, a few unnecessary deaths occurred.

The fight lasted for a long time, and the typical villain died and talked a lot.

It's so procrastinating, it's disgusting to watch.

There are only so many chapters in Metkai and it still sweeps across the world.

A Konoha Invasion Noshui Chapter 500

You are so verbose, I can write so much in Konoha. There will definitely be a lot of water behind!

I wrote more than 100,000 words in one sentence, which is awesome. However, your kind of gameplay will not be retained by ordinary readers except for die-hard fans. You constantly create accidents and make things that are already a sure thing repeatedly unbalanced. Even after hundreds of thousands of words, Nagato is still walking a tightrope. This way of writing makes me think you are insulting the reader's intelligence. Give it up, bye.

It took me eight hundred years to kill Danzo, but he still didn't kill him. Is this really awesome?

The fight in the original novel is not as difficult as yours. It feels like the protagonist has been hypnotizing himself from head to toe. I still believe it. Otherwise, why would he be so stretched out?

I'm speechless. How can this author be so good? He wrote more than 60 chapters, which can be said in just a few sentences. He killed Danzo, obtained Hashirama cells, and then tortured Konoha. But shouldn't the basis of all this be strength? You just crossed over and were about to destroy Konoha. Is it possible? Does having the Rinnegan make you invincible? He's just a loser, but he still doesn't admit it. It's enough to make the protagonist as strong as the original Nagato. He also forcibly strengthens Konoha. It really works!

No wonder it's such a mess, the protagonist is so wordy and stupid

It's completely bullshit that this kind of protagonist can survive for three episodes. He fights all the time, retreats rationally but doesn't leave, just wants to die, and then uses explosive tricks on the opponent to explode in minutes.

I don't like to talk nonsense, but I was confused as to what this was written about. The protagonist has been talking nonsense since time travel. I'm afraid it was written in the Pacific Ocean, rubbish

I thought it was okay at first, but when I saw there were eight and nine doors, I was really convinced. Goodbye

The settings are terrible. He has mastered Yin-Yang Escape, but he refuses to give himself a Yang Escape treatment. Then the yin and yang escape you mastered became imbalanced because of the unopened kaleidoscope Sharingan? And you, the protagonist, are even more talkative than Naruto. You can obviously kill others directly, but you still have to explain a lot in front of him. Okay, kill him, and then he will do a lot more to Danzo's soul. Also, Kai opened the eight gates once and didn't die. He opened the seven gates again and found that he still couldn't beat him. Then he opened the eight gates again? , And then with this fight, you can kill him in seconds without killing him, and wait for the sequelae of his death...

Except for funny people, no one likes a protagonist who talks too much nonsense.

You just follow the trend after watching Naruto? You don't have any ability to write a shitty Naruto article?

Is the reincarnation eye the blood successor of Nagato? Um! Haven't I watched Naruto?

A hundred chapters are written about the events of one chapter. How can the book be completed without ten thousand chapters?

Nagato was invincible when he attacked Konoha. Naruto's survival was purely due to the aura of the protagonist. Before the explosion, Danzo killed Toad, and Naruto escaped Nagato, who was still in good condition! After the explosion, Naruto came with full buffs and met Tiandao who was already much weaker! In the end, Naruto turned on the sage mode and blocked Konan and Nagato together. Nagato couldn't move himself, only Konan was left. Yahiko asked Nagato to protect Konan. He must listen to his friend's words, so even the capital to die together in the end was gone! Personally, I feel that if Nagato hadn't been around because Konan was around, Naruto might have been cheated by Hagoromo in advance. The most important thing is: Nagato talks a lot and is nagging. If he had just shut up and started to act, Konoha would have been gone. Naruto has Hagoromo, so he's not sure, but If you really travel to the protagonist's situation, shut up and take action directly. If you don't catch or kill Naruto, just destroy him and leave. You have already traveled through time. Knowing that there is an uncertain factor like Hagoromo, don't think about killing Naruto. The last word is to destroy the village directly. Once you destroy it, leave!

Develop the habit of reading reviews first before reading books, suppressing the protagonist's strength? Bye-Bye

Kai is the protagonist in this book, right? You can open 8 doors without dying, but can you open it infinitely? ? ? You need to have a recipe for strengthening? ? The Otsutsuki clan probably won't be enough to kill even if they come here. What kind of sage is a scumbag in front of Kai?

The first chapter directly persuades you to quit, vomit, bye bye

It seems that all Naruto stories are based on Naruto's settings. Can't they just wear Naruto's skin? My thoughts are different after seeing it. There will be an awkward feeling. The above is just a rant that has nothing to do with this book. Finally, I have an idea. Can I directly set the golden finger to double the combat power? If you can't beat it, double it 100 times, 10,000 times, and so on. Finally, there is an infinite rescue form.

It combines the shortcomings of a villain, the Holy Mother, the ink stains, the talkativeness, and the procrastination. It can be said that the pig's feet deserve to die.