Revelation of the Lord God

Can you create a dividing line when cutting the plot?

I hope the author will not ruin this main god series. The protagonist will not think about it from the bottom of his body. Why does the main god not have a woman? Come on, author!

Like this, the first guide you see is 50% the main god pretending to be the leader. It's better not to show up and let them explore on their own.

Don't you think the author thinks that the white night vest lowers your IQ? Anyone who is smart enough to reincarnate can guess that he is the mastermind behind the scenes. Why? First of all, the national team only needs to investigate the population data. As soon as the name and appearance match, they will know that there is no such person in reality. Since there is no such person, it means that the identity is forged. Just go down and do a simple inference. This book was no problem more than ten years ago.

How should I put it, it seems that the behind-the-scenes god style is no longer popular nowadays. Behind-the-scenes game flow, no forced disgust, low attraction, strong presence, and low sense of presence, and the gameplay is as smooth as a drop of water. The main god construction flow is not too low-key, there are punishments and mandatory tasks, it is easy to get disgusted, and it is a conspiracy. It's easier to write games in multiple styles, such as amusing the mind of God, and listing and raising all human beings. The rhythm of the main flow should be good, and being rigorous and utilitarian would test the writing and imagination.

The comment section is so deserted. Is this book a hit? I watched a quarter of it and have some thoughts. First of all, in terms of writing and telling stories, it is not clear. First, the author's writing style is not very good, his expressions are blunt, and various connecting words are not used well, and there are often some long paragraphs to modify, which increases the difficulty of reading. I don't know if the author has read his own article, but after jumping around, I often don't know what it is about. Sometimes I even feel that there are missing chapters. Second, the pursuit setting is complete and good, but the expressive ability is limited. The ability of the fantasy tree is explained in a long paragraph. In fact, it is not necessary. Isn't it just to collect mental power to upgrade? An origin was added later. In the final analysis, it is up to the reincarnators to contribute to the realism upgrade. Why bother doing so much? Third, I like to throw settings after the fact. The most obvious point is that when I first obtained the origin, it was said that the protagonist was in a bottleneck in the fantasy tree and controlled the acquisition of mental power. Now he knows that the origin is the foundation, so there is no restriction. But in the eyes of readers, huh? Bottled? When did it happen? Controlling development, when did it happen? Fourth, some common poisonous points, such as too many emoticons, all of which are emoticons; such as personal guidance, your artificial intelligence God has come out, can't you just guide it in separate threads; such as introducing national power too early, can you really control it? Finally, this is really my little hope. When I read novels like this, I mainly want to see how the main god is developed, not what happened to the reincarnated people. Although there are some exciting points caused by the information gap, it is boring to keep pretending to be realistic. The main character of this book is unclear, and he is confused at the beginning. Later, he only talks about the general direction.

Before you get into the trap, I would like to make some suggestions. If you are building the main god type, do you have a foolproof way to control the reincarnators? If not, it is nonsense. If you do, be generous. Don't hide it. You can fully control the reincarnators. The more people who work for you, the better. Be generous and open the space of the main god. Either come work for me or get out.

You've just started, so it doesn't count as a pounce.

There is too much nonsense about the number of water words, no wonder the results are not good

The writing is very good. I have saved it and please visit again!

Since spiritual energy is collected, virtual games, underworld shows, horror broadcast stamps and the like can be added to perform multi-line operations.

I don't know what the author wanted to write, but personally I think it's definitely not as good as the previous one. This book is too harmonious and does not show any evil. There is no intrigue between the reincarnations, especially the second team of reincarnations. They always like one and the other. The second team of reincarnations are even more annoying than the first team because of the pretentiousness of the second team, especially that Xia Xue. Pretending can only be done by the protagonist. These reincarnators should be cautious and frightened. How can they have a carefree and distinctive temperament. Bad review.

This exchange is very tricky. Now the new version of the main temple has almost completely abandoned this function, and directly provides the ability to travel and assist. If reincarnators want to become stronger, they can only go to the story world to learn. Because of the redemption function, if you are too generous, you will suffer a loss, if you are too stingy, most of the infinite reincarnations like the ancestor are scum, and the spells are sold by the piece.

Some sentences look very elegant, but they don't read smoothly and the meaning is unclear.

After looking at the catalog, I felt like it was too long for one world! To be honest, if there was only one world all the time, it would be better to watch fantasy!

Is there no heroine? If yes, recommended!

I hope that the reincarnations in the later period will not be just Blue Star people. . . .

It's better to make it a game if you force yourself to show off like this. Anyway, what is needed is not just mental strength.

Just started watching. But why does it feel like a lot of the plot suddenly disappeared?

Why write a note? Doesn't this reflect the humanity of the Lord God? Doesn't this imply that the Lord God is a human being?

Something's wrong? ? ? ? ?

The plot is quite confusing, jumping around a lot, and another thing pops up before one thing develops to the ending.

No matter how you say this novel, it feels like it is too gentle and lacks character.

It feels pretty good. The author should write according to his own ideas...

If the author can persevere to the end, this book will do well.

Comments on the launch. Don't say a word. The Lord God gives seven points out of ten. I hope you write realistically. OK, I hope you can write something funny. Don't write dark streams. Dark text is blocked.