The World Begins with Payne

Since you can travel across the heavens, knowledge is king

Fighting template, the power system in Naruto is good, but the characters in it are really disgusting

Lao Tie, blowing anything is better than blowing the inner demon 🤔🤔🤔. It is just a kind of magic skill in the world of low martial arts. What is the sacred tree? It is a magical plant that can swallow the energy of the planet and destroy the stars. The skills of mere mortals can actually resist the instinct of the sacred tree, and the Taoist demon has been blown up to the sky 🤔🤔🤔.

After reading the chapters of Spider-Man, why does the protagonist think that the most valuable things are the retrovirus and venom? We don't need knowledge, we don't need weapons, and we don't need equipment. Is it because missiles are not good or because nuclear bombs are not strong? Even if you absorb the knowledge of a few scientists and cooperate with the universal energy chakra, you can easily annihilate the ninja world and move towards the sea of ​​stars, or give some ideological and moral books to the school. The seeds of the future of the school will blossom and bear fruit, and slowly turn the sick world of the ninja world back on track, instead of letting the whole village depend on the protagonist in every aspect like the protagonist.

The novel is good, but it's not suitable for people to read.

What's the plot during the time when Naruto defeated Hanzo, and what world did he travel through, as a supplement? Welcome to leave a message. I will refer to one or two. If it is suitable, consider writing it.

What is the explanation for the inexplicable biochemistry and the indigenous people? Logical dad said

I can't understand some places. There's so much bullshit in the fight and I can't understand what you're trying to say. You just keep trying to endure it. I can't stand it anymore.

It feels like the power of the original characters is infinite, especially at the soul level. The back-up left by Uchiha Madara is just a back-up after all. Universal Madara is definitely dead. Even if he possesses the Wood Release, he has used all his power in the past few decades to give birth to the Samsara Eye. It is impossible to just leave a back-up, and you can fight with people in the space of consciousness, coming and going, Read the latest chapter and parting ways, feeling that Uchiha Madara's power will still spread to others, but knowing how broad the world is, will Uchiha Madara still be so narrow? I know, the Sage of Six Paths is still alive, I know, the ending of Naruto, there are even people outside the planet who are eyeing him, so what should I write next? Uchiha Madara has the Samsara Eye, so several people from Otsutsuki later have the Samsara Eye, so do all of their souls have particularly powerful souls? Even if they die, it can be used as a blessing. After they die, the contract will take a long time to transform other people's bodies, and then use their souls to occupy other people's souls. It's not just a matter of time.

I really think we should learn from the fantasy world of time travel. The current time travel literature is such a mess.

This book. . . How to say it? The writing is even more fantasy than fantasy. There is no introduction to the origin of the protagonist, why he can travel through time for a long time, and no introduction to the time-travel mechanism. It would be strange if you write it so unclearly.

I just chewed up the previous Dragon Veins chapter, but how many chapters did the Biochemistry chapter and the supporting actor pretend to be a pig on the shelf? Wouldn't it be nice to push it sideways? The tasteless chapters are meaningless, but they discourage me. If this book was written by the author for fun, I would treat it as if I didn't say it.

The reading threshold is too high. Perhaps the self-promotion at the beginning makes people unable to stand it. It looks like the whole person is confused.

The type of world that the protagonist travels through should not be too confusing. Consider the power system, otherwise it will be the same type or a similar type. Otherwise, the worlds you travel through all have something in common. A world view that is almost destroyed, or this civilization has the existence of alien life or the legacy of alien civilization. Finding similarities will make it easier to write, and it can also give a meaning to the protagonist's time travel. The Otsutsuki clan, the Temple of War, Venom... These are the similarities 😁

I picked Nagato from the garbage dump of NC characters as a template, and pretended to be SB, but I had to install a dirty frame.

Get the He's Bi to directly replenish your vitality and return to its heyday with a healthy body. Then you can consider practicing all seven pictures of Sheng Sheng Jue.

I just want to complain about why everyone who traveled to Naruto doesn't know how to change things. Isn't it good to play a unified game?

No matter what the hell it is written, anyone can play the protagonist 50-50.

After reading dozens of chapters, my impression of this book is that it is full of nonsense and is full of specious and messy preaching.

It's so chaotic, and any character I encounter is: so strong. I almost died every time. No wonder the results are not good.

The best strength of the novel is the power of the mind. . . . . I have a grudge against you and I am in a good mood. If I don't kill you, my strength has advanced. . . . It's better to find an illusionist or hypnotist to break through the universe with various euphoric moods. . . . I always feel that power is power, and state of mind is thought. There is no state of mind, only mental power has state. . . . .

This is a book that starts to deviate from the theme. God uses the wrong one and uses Naruto. . . . I originally thought I was reading the book about Payne's abilities. . . . It was written as a matryoshka novel about Payne's inner activities and his spiritual power in Naruto's peace. The author of the novel site, which has so many Naruto fans that he wants to vomit, is still diving into it. . . . .

Isn't Superman's bloodline bad? Is there any weakness when paired with Yangshen martial arts? Do I still need resources?

There are no traces of the protagonist in dozens of chapters

The second time travel world is Marvel. . . It's a completely different power system. Why can chakra still be used in Marvel? Not a word is mentioned. There are so many bugs that it's impossible to start. . . Dissuaded

First generation cells? Why do you need cells? There are so many good things in the world, cells don't need them at all

Super Seminary, The Adventures of Jackie Chan.

Brother, let's prioritize. Is Payne the protagonist?

The harem party wants to ask, is there multiple female protagonists? Is the protagonist not wilting?

I finally finished writing the 600,000 words in the contract. I can barely finish it (￣⊿￣")