Riding and Slashing the Wind of War

I felt that the writing was pretty good in the first and middle stages, although there were some obvious flaws, but after all, I like this kind of subject matter, and I enjoyed reading it. However, things took a turn for the worse in the later stages. From the time when the orc army moved south to the subsequent situation on the mainland, it was just like a child's play, until the necromancer who blew up to the sky and the protagonist's escape were really unbearable. The plot arrangement is too rigid and gives people a headache, as if the author just found a reason to convince himself and just wants to convince the readers.

Xianyu is now squandering his talent and aura, writing a book about eunuchs. No matter how talented the author is, he will lose the hearts of readers.

I only read the book. After reading about a third of the book, I read the book reviews. It seems I didn't subscribe and just read the book. No matter what, please support me!

Alas, I was about to watch it, but I was fed to death again.

This plot development is really inexplicable. With only a few soldiers in hand, you dare to attack a big city ruled by a witch. The protagonist doesn't even have much information about the witch, right? Where does the confidence come from to be able to control the situation? Could it be that this system can input cheating instructions?

I'm a bit confused after seeing that the protagonist has developed an army of more than 10,000 people and so many 3.4-Level soldiers, but they can't defeat the magic dragon. The protagonist also acts as a grandson and asks others to help defeat the magic dragon. Then I don't understand why the protagonist wants to develop his power. And the protagonist's goal from the beginning is to become a god. Then why do he become a grandson for others and ask for help for some territory?

Hello everyone. I am a salted fish. I'm very pink now😜😜😜😜

Came to ride and slash, but the content is yes and no. The protagonist has no strength. He has taken in more than 20 militiamen, adding up to more than 30 people, and causes trouble everywhere. The protagonist only needs to unlock the blood hanger, and these subordinates can also open it. The Harpy in Chapter 50 was forcibly opened by the author to reduce the intelligence and weaken the aura, and a city There are tens of thousands of slaves and thousands of subordinates, but he has to lead twenty or so people to attack the protagonist. It doesn't matter if the magic is really strong. Even the militiamen under the protagonist can't be killed. He dares to charge with just a few spears. It's good at first. How good are you in farming and upgrading? Chapter 50 is where you start to choose readers.

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Pink? Bah, it's all fucked up!

It's crazy. There are 20,000 full-time soldiers out of a total population of 100,000.

I have a hunch that this book will have to be sold out, because the biggest problem with Xianyu's writing has emerged, which is his own writing style...

After reading the first chapter, I discovered that it was actually Xianyu's waistcoat. Let's talk about my impression of the author Xianyu. The writing and plot are not bad, and the characters are well written. The fighting scenes and descriptions of force are distinctive features. Every book is basically very interesting. The only drawback is that there are too many private items and sometimes I don't understand what they are saying. Especially for private goods, I really feel good about the high-end products. I feel that your quality scores are too low, and those who can't live up to the high-end sales are just expelling people. I can't stand it. Really add less private goods, I can still read the steel plate Zhu Peng, the large size is also fully ordered, and the bald tiger at the back is not bad, it is also quite good. The next customized article and Yanhuang are both scum. I can't help it if I don't say much about the customized article. Yanhuang's private goods are too strong. I personally can't stand it. I always fall behind in the first three chapters. As long as the real salted fish works normally and does not add private goods, every book will definitely be a high-quality book. The key is that every private goods will screen out a large number of readers. Originally, the book was written for a niche, and I have screened out a large number of niche readers. As a result, I always feel that my performance is a bit poor, and then I complain. By the way, there are also updates, which is also a disadvantage. If you have money, go find a skilled lady. Grandma's rolling pin will really not hurt you. I hope there is no personal information in this book. Another personal favorite is Taoist Fanatic, which is a pity not to be continued. The second is Steel Plate Zhu Peng. The problem with this book is that the early private goods and the inexplicable League of Legends screened out a large number of people. Write it really well, Xianyu, write it well, you can make money without adding private goods, and you can find high-quality ones, right?

I originally thought it was a horse-and-blade novel that hit the spot, but now I'm getting more and more confused. Starting from the noble and beautiful young city lord, I've been following the ancient routine, and it's still that poisonous routine. Author, you write a horse-and-blade novel. You've already screened the readers when you named the book. It's very clear what the readers want to see. This kind of routine There is really no need to write Lu, and no one wants to read it. The author spent almost half of the words to whitewash the characters, but the more they are washed, the more boring they become. The other power system and goblin civilization, although it is obviously inspired by another book, but their writing style and layout are different from yours. Let's wait and see how the later writing goes.

Nowadays, the writing on horseback and slashing has been badly written by various eunuchs! Basically, they are all the same down-and-out nobles, the same ones developing territories, the same leveling up by fighting monsters... Of course, if the writing is good, this won't be a problem.

Please support Hello everyone, I am a Wind of War player, Well, I am explaining many game settings in this book. If there are any mistakes, please correct me ("Text": So when can we see those NPCs in the original version, I really look forward to the peerless looks of Miss Mathilde and Jamila)

I thought this novel was good in the early stages, but not so good in the later stages. It was not because of the plot, but because of the random mixing of oriental elements in the later stages, or the whole thing about the Great Immortality of Heaven and Man. A novel with Western elements was forced to be nondescript and purely superfluous. Then there are the soldier levels. I looked at them for a long time, but in the end it was too messy. The soldier levels were lifted up together and they could fall down on their own. The system was completely messed up. Also, I saw that there were probably more than 500 of them now. The Light Hell has been written here, but what about the abyss in the later stage? This novel can be said to have collapsed in its later stages.

It's best not to make this kind of book too high in combat power, just low martial arts. High martial arts will make it easy to jump.

I personally find it very strange why the orcs must capture Lonely Mountain Castle. In previous wars, the castle must be captured to ensure the stability of the supply line, but haven't the orcs already made a desperate move? Haven't they already brought everything they can? Why don't they just go around and fight to the death?

Good guy, I'm just giving my opinion that Caitlin's attributes are unreasonable. The total attributes at level 12 are only 15, and the highest attribute is 6. Since the author dares to write this, he should dare to let people say it and delete the comment directly. After re-downloading, I saw that the attributes have changed. It is now changed to level 12 with a total attribute of 18 and a maximum attribute of 8. How should I put it? It has been changed, but it seems that it has not been changed.

Opinion Building, Everyone can come here to say anything they want to say.

I really don't understand why you, a noble, would establish diplomacy with a group of bandits in an upright manner? Aren't you afraid that the kingdom will label you a traitor? The current territory is not self-sufficient at all. Once you are labeled a traitor, your reputation in the kingdom will be completely gone, and it will be difficult for you to immigrate later.

What does the author do by using a small vest to create a niche novel? Testing the waters? Let's go back to the unlimited flow that the author is good at, the low martial arts plane of the Republic of China, and the popular martial arts planes such as the medium martial arts and high martial arts of Jin Yong. Each plane is a little longer and crueler. Love, hate, and hatred are a little stronger. I hope you won't follow the trend of writing about relaxing, funny, talkative, invincible, behind-the-scenes, and inspiring ideas. I personally want to read a monster book that combines the essence of these martial arts planes.

The author's writing style is adequate, but the title is useless. The description of the situation and the characters are very good, but the plot has many flaws. I suspect that the author has no outline. The orcs inexplicably raise an army of millions to attack the protagonist. It is simply too speechless. The human strength is set too weak. It feels like the orcs' auxiliary troops can defeat regular human troops. This Western fantasy written by the author has better writing skills than many starting authors. It is better to outline it first and then write it slowly. Think about the plot slowly so as not to make too many flaws.

You can't write more, that's all you've been raising for a month! !

When will the new book be released? Stop writing about niche themes like this. I really can't follow this one. I've never played horse-and-blade, so I can just write about a fantasy genre.

This book is really good, the author may consider continuing it. This book says it's about riding and slashing, but it's actually a bit like The Lord of the Rings. This book could be considered a blockbuster.

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Grandpas, you really don't want to read books. If you like it, just read it. If you read it, the author will die if he doesn't include it in the book. Alas.