Killing Ghosts and Gods Alone with a Sword

I was following the update today and saw that Xianyu's update was unstable again. As an old reader who has followed many of his books, I would like to review Xianyu's works and predict whether this one will end stably. First of all, let's go through the author's works with over a million words: 1. "2012 Doomsday Fairy" should be Xianyu's first full-length novel, starting with the golden three chapters, but it did not continue the path of survival in the doomsday. It became the fairy version of Naruto in the early stage + the demon-renovated version of Swordsman in the mid-term + completely lost control and collapsed in the later stage 2. "The Arrival of the Infinite Horror Daoist Idiot", Xianyu became a famous work. Among unlimited fans at that time, I personally think It is the best novel besides the Warrior Road. The main character Shiquan Taoist is very well portrayed, and it also sets the tone of Xianyu's works, but it's a pity that the eunuch; 3. "Black Wizard Zhu Peng", a variant of the wizard style + pseudo-DND + national martial arts + immortality + traveling through the heavens. In the early stage, the money for the game customization was so bad that it almost collapsed. Later, it became unexpectedly outstanding after becoming a spy wizard and traveling across the world. Xianyu's only complete work with a complete structure in the true sense. 4. "Bald Tiger's Super Martial Arts Apocalypse" is a mixed world view of the Chinese martial arts apocalypse. The protagonist combines traditional Chinese martial arts and various fictional martial arts. The early and middle stages are good, but the rhythm in the later stages suddenly collapses inexplicably. It is considered unfinished in the later stages and the book is barely completed. 5. "The Gods of Yan and Huang", the setting and story structure of the western fantasy part in the early stage are relatively boring. In the middle, the perspective is directly changed to write about immortals. The writing is actually quite good, but the outline is erroneous and it is unfinished. 6. The author has a true love for horseback slashing. There are copies of the two books above, so he changed his current pen name and wrote "The Wind of War, Horsebacklash". It felt good, but it ended up being cut and unfinished; 7. "Taihao Golden Chapter", which uses the fairy tale setting of "Ask the Mirror". Overall, it is good, but The problem of the author stuffing his own stuff or not understanding the point of view reappeared in the middle. There were twists and turns in the middle of the plot, but he managed to get through it. However, problems suddenly appeared at the end of the work, and the ending was rushed. Personally, I think the ending at the end of the battle between good and evil was better than this. It can barely be considered the author's second completed book. Works written by less than one million words and cut in half 1. MU custom writing, just like game custom writing, which sucks money and does not learn from the early lessons of the Black Wizard, so it is cut in half; 2. Naruto fanfic, in fact, the writing of this fanfic feels good, but the author feels that the results are not good enough. I can only say that niche fandom is not easy to write. 3. The book about Shi Jian, I personally think that the track chosen for this book is good, especially after the horror and supernatural works of Qidian were cleared once. If it can fill in the gaps, it should be able to achieve results, but the author cut it for a very funny reason, which is a pity. To sum up, a detailed analysis shows that the author Xianyu has obvious advantages and disadvantages: Advantages: great imagination, Chinese and Taoist skills, excellent battle scenes, good at using classic power systems in other people's works, written by Western Fantasy and Xianxia They are all good, Xianxia is particularly outstanding; Disadvantages: Here is a summary from book friend Wiki Nieba on LK: ① Opening the book: Selling setting + expressing determination (The Oath of the Inner Demon) ② Early stage: well written ③ Slowly: Literary Youth , selling private goods, the plot fluctuates ④The following: subscribe and destroy it ⑤Finally, cut the book Finally, predict the prospects of this book: Refer to Xianyu's previous works and compare the above five stages. Now Not long after this book was put on the shelves, the update of Xianyu began to be unstable. The good news is that judging from the word count (350,000 words) and quality of the book, it belongs to stage ②. The bad news is that from the perspective of updates, it has reached stage ③. The situation is not good, and it is possible that it will be cut off if it does not reach half a million words. However, considering that this book is a fairy tale theme that the author is relatively good at, I hope it can be completed like "Taihao Golden Chapter".

If you are a newcomer, I will be the bastard. It's shameless to pretend to be young when you are a great person.

The author should stop writing emotional lines, it's uncomfortable to read 😥

After seeing Chapter 74, since the foundation of heaven, earth and man is not important, don't keep comparing the plots with the three foundations of heaven, earth and man. The protagonist and various people's descriptions have said that the foundation is good or bad. Now there is another protagonist who builds the foundation. The foundation of heaven is not better than the foundation of earth. So why should we pursue the foundation of heaven in the past? Just build the foundation directly. Most of the reasons for going to the Nightless City are untenable. It's too weak, and the plot feels bad. Then the author keeps saying that the data is good. I don't know if it's good or not. I just think it's well written, and my desire to read it is 100. I actually don't want to read it anymore, and my desire to read it has dropped to 75. I will watch it again, but when the desire value drops again, I won't watch it.

Behind the Refining Gang Realm, there are nine realms of Master Jiedan and Zhenren Jindan. It is also said that there are 987 virtual elixirs, 654 real elixirs, and 1st, 23rd and 3rd grade golden elixirs. Then Master Jiedan should only be at the sixth level of virtual elixir and real elixir. As a result, there is also the eighth level of alchemy, which is the second level of alchemy, and the middle level of alchemy, which is the eighth level of alchemy. Ping Hongzi is a middle-grade alchemy master. He has been promoted to the eighth level of alchemy for hundreds of years. So the master of alchemy should be at the ninth level. What level are you at in forming pills? Isn't this inconsistent? A mess.

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It took me a few days to read the update. For me, there are a few main points. 1. I basically skipped reading the book about Shinto at the beginning. It didn't become interesting until I taught swordsmanship in the city that never sleeps to make money. I have never seen a popular book about incense and vows. 2. Of course it's tunnel foundation building. We could clearly state that tunnel foundation building would do more good than harm to the protagonist, but it was chosen at the critical juncture of foundation building. 3. I chose a magical power that deducts life span, and I have to use it every time I fight against the enemy. Even though I didn't have this magical power before, my life went on as usual. Although it was later said that I was reincarnated from the dead, it was already a long time ago. 4. 24 The demon god has such a strong sense of oppression, and the various sects have no rules on how to deal with it. The protagonist has no ability to save the world, and nothing has changed after he went out and came back.

Reader: Do you think you are a master of emotions? Xianyu: I think I am! Reader:……

The author is a talented person, his writing is passable, the fighting scenes are excellent, and his knowledge base is sufficient. However, he has no achievements. He can turn all the sections that should be enjoyable in serious online articles into frustration points, including but not limited to tunnel foundation building, foundation building competition, and cutting off the future. It is really a strange brain circuit.

The beginning of this book is not as good as that of Taihao. From the beginning, it is just fighting and killing. There is no plot, and the protagonist does not have any interesting interactions with other characters.

Even if the update is short, the rhythm is actually quite broken. Your original world was cleansed once every thousand years. Most people didn't know about it even if they got the golden elixir. Each major sect has inheritance, which shows that Huang Longzi and the others are not the first generation or even the second generation or the third generation of cultivation for thousands of years. Furthermore, if each generation cultivates the golden elixir for 100 years and then accepts a disciple, then at least 500 years have passed by the time the protagonist appears and starts practicing. I don't know how long it took for the protagonist to start practicing the golden elixir. I don't know exactly how long it took for him to practice, so I'll just treat him as 100 years, and then run to other places now. In his world, there are nine levels of the golden elixir, and one level lasts for decades. If we calculate it as an average of 30 years, it will take 300 years for the golden elixir to be perfect. At this time, there are still 100 years to go before the great purge begins. Among the 12 demon gods on the opposite side, if one is captured, one or two souls will come. Well, the rest are all Nascent Souls, and the Nascent Soul Demon has a record of tearing apart the local human souls. You can't go beyond the level of Nascent Soul to beat other senior souls. You can't kill those who just entered the Golden Pill and took the same Golden Pill not long ago, and they were beaten by another Lao Deng. Then how do you leap from the peak of the Golden Elixir to the point where you can defeat the Yuanshen Yuanshen in the remaining 100 years? Or if we are more relaxed, how do you fly from the third level of the Golden Elixir to the Yuanshen in 300 years? After all, it took you 50 years to get from the first level of the Golden Elixir to the third level.

I have always believed that true genius is someone who has laid a solid foundation for the realm that others have spent countless resources on to achieve! You only need to spend 1% of others' natural resources and treasures, and you can be more powerful than others, have a higher realm than others, and have a deeper foundation than others! This is considered genius!

Your power system is very enjoyable to write, but you are missing one of the most important points, which is the types of novels you write, such as fairy novels. In those novels, you only see the power system in the middle and late stages, but the basic logic is relatively confusing, so in that knight novel, the protagonist practices the Sun Call. When I was absorbing the method, I withdrew. Considering the speed of cultivation of various spiritual roots of Taihao Golden Chapter and the precious level of Tianling Root, I suggested that it be permanently banned. I just want to say about that book that if you give Tianling Root to a golden elixir or Nascent Soul level disciple, you might be able to get a lot of resources. To sum up, the wizard levels and even the martial arts levels you wrote are very enjoyable to read. However, when it comes to those more popular systems, your personal writing style makes it incompatible with other systems, or you cannot incorporate other systems into your own system, causing the whole book to collapse. I hope that this book of yours will learn from the previous lessons and really become a popular book and a great god.

The top-notch technique that the Lin family spent thousands of years creating? Just authentic? Isn't this Lin family just pure clowns? The distinction between foundation building in this book is not simply a difference in foundation building methods! It also affects the foundation and future practice. The author has been saying that the appropriate one is the best since the last book. There is nothing wrong with that. But every time the protagonist learns the appropriate top-level skills and has a great opportunity and spends a lot of energy, why can he only wait a little? Isn't it appropriate? Then shouldn't the one that suits you should be combined with your own talents to take it to the next level? Why is it that the one that suits me is worse?

Reading the comment section, many book friends are very unhappy with the issue of authentic foundation building, thinking it is a poisonous point. I understand everyone's dissatisfaction. There are good ones and I will not choose them, and I will choose the inferior ones. That's for sure. Everyone comes to read the cool article. If you make me unhappy, I will scold you high and low. The author must be wrong, but you must also be quite wrong. You must not have read it carefully, because the five-star true fire of the authentic foundation is actually the heavenly foundation. How did the heavenly foundation come from in the book? It is not that there is a heavenly way. Lists and the like are selected by people. The author just wants to say that the evaluation is wrong. The highest combat power now is the golden elixir. It is normal to be wrong Let's take a look at the selection criteria for the foundation of heaven. Let's talk about three points accurately: whether the natal magical power is strong, and whether the cultivation is strong. Is the training speed fast? Is it difficult to break through obstacles? Let's look at the Five Elements True Fire Tunnel Foundation Building Magical Power compared to the Five Elements Heavenly Sword Heavenly Dao Foundation Building. Blue has more blood, thicker blood, and more skills. Heavenly Sword can also be used. The only disadvantage is that the training speed is slow. The protagonist can By absorbing power, the speed is not slow either As someone who has worked again, I'm sorry, I may not necessarily be the Shilipo Sword God, but I will definitely make it thicker and do more to save my life Add more essence, or give it a top priority

The author is good at writing mindless and cool things. But the author feels that his theoretical level is good. I've always wanted to do some plot design. The result is watery and rotten. Just like foundation building and demon god design. In fact, everyone knows it. The purpose of foundation building is to highlight that the protagonist is very strong in alternative foundation building. In the end, it had to be called tunnel foundation building. Being pointed at the nose and scolded, the design of the demon god is even more rubbish. Seriously, who doesn't know that you want to increase the pressure? But there are so many bugs. In order to highlight the protagonist, the setting is forced up.

The description of the characters still needs to be deepened, and the character design is too fragmented. That woman named Lin, I forgot her name, her character is very abstract. Of course, she can protect her nephew and her family, and it is not a big deal to use a sword against the protagonist, but it is inconsistent with the previous plot description. In terms of importance, the family took her out for marriage in exchange for resources. She chose to agree because she was greedy for the Lin family's promise, and chose to go by herself because she wanted to take care of her sister. (Don't say that she thinks about her family. If she thinks about her family, she won't resist later). So here it is at least self>family. Then the loss of Yuan Yin will cause the cultivation to be very slow, but she still does it, which means that in her heart, the protagonist>own path Then ok should be the protagonist>path>family Then next, her nephew treats her as an abandoned child, the impression score must be low, and the importance of the family will be higher, so the family>nephew Then finally Protagonist>Path is greater than family>Nephew, then they still protect their nephew after the life and death battle? He also wants to keep the protagonist, which offends the young master Ren. There must be something wrong with this person. And at this moment, her standard is Daotu>Nephew>Protagonist It's very fragmented, and I can't read on after seeing this, which makes me happy But after reading the comments, the author said that the foundation building of the earth was stronger than the foundation building of the heaven. I don't know if this comment is true or not, because I didn't look back, but if it's true, it's a very bad thing to write like this. It's not that the tunnels are bad, it's just that this patch is not done well. Whether the underground or the tunnel is stronger than him, the foreshadowing and patching are not done in this way, which is very inconsistent. For example, if you want to say that a certain kind of tunnel is stronger, then you must pave the way at the beginning. For example, there are rumors that some tunnel monks mutate due to certain exercises and are stronger than the heavenly foundation. Or when you patch like this, and then accidentally encounter the inheritance of a powerful power, it can make the tunnel foundation building stronger But it shouldn't be done when it comes to foundation building, or after the foundation building, for the protagonist, the tunnel is stronger. It's unreasonable to rely on magical weapons or past life memories. It's too forceful.

I took a second look and asked if the road was suitable. This statement is really not good, because you are building the foundation of Heavenly Dao, not the Heavenly Dao Sword or some Heavenly Dao Fire foundation. First of all, we need to understand what foundation building is, which is to build a foundation. Taoism also has foundation building during the day, which is actually to lay a foundation. Even in your book, Heavenly Dao Foundation Building is a level rather than a category. Let me give you an example. You can say that the Red Dragon of Heaven's Path is not enough to build a foundation. Then I can have a similar foundation of Heaven's Path and Five Elements. If you want to write something that does not suit you, then you should emphasize the type (gold, wood, water, fire, earth, etc.) Rather than the level (heaven, earth, people) from the beginning. Of course, you can say that this is the author's setting, and it is wrong for the author and the reader to fight the setting. But there is a problem, that is, whether it is the explanation of foundation building in the general environment or the Taoist day foundation building, it is different from what you set up. If you must write like this, it is best to create a name for the realm yourself from the beginning or explain it directly at the beginning. Otherwise, it would be like this, I wrote a book, this thing is a pencil, and I want to use it as a pen in the story. . . . Using readers' inherent cognition to create initial identification, and then trying to break it and show your differences in this way is actually a bit clever and not a good thing.

The protagonists in the author's books basically all have one characteristic. They don't follow the high road, but delve into the secret lanes, burning their lifespan and doing basic attacks. Doesn't this give readers some eye candy?

If you are a eunuch. Is the author also a eunuch?

I don't quite understand. You specifically wrote about finding exercises and a series of final tunnel foundation building. It's better to directly build a human foundation and force humans to conquer the heavens.

This book basically doesn't show the use of the so-called past life. Apart from bringing a Jiuli Ding over, it is of no use.

As soon as the pretending author stopped updating, the readers shouted: "Zhu Peng, you are swearing to the demons again!" The author blushed and muttered, "I was the one who gave out red envelopes. Grandma's rolling pin hurts when it hits people, so it won't be a mess!" All the readers laughed, and the comment area was full of joy.

If you don't follow the right path and insist on learning blood and nerves by force, no wonder your grades are not good.

How pink are you? Can you take it off and take a look? If you are a fan, I will give you monthly passes in the future.

Those who can write good books are good authors. Several books by Zhu Peng and Zhang Lie are all very good books. A small part of the reason why they are not popular is asking for leave, nonsense and mentality. A small part of the reason is low productivity. In fact, these are unavoidable problems. Good books are carefully sorted. Ten chapters in the coming day So nonsense and mentality are the key. My personal feeling is that the author's recent book is no worse than the senior brother. The tone is more in line with me. Heroic Blood. So what is the main reason? Liangcaowen is a big seller. Fine books and good stories but windy and clear?

I haven't read this book yet. I just finished reading it, so I can read it slowly. Give me a little suggestion, don't blame me if it's wrong. It is best to adapt the subject matter of the book to yourself, including writing style, writing habits, personal personality, etc. Except for the Black Warrior Zhu Peng, the next few books collapsed in the middle and later stages, including the plot, combat power, etc. Xianyu's writing style, descriptions of battles, and upgrades in combat power are all extremely talented. These strengths should be fully utilized. It is suggested that the next book should return to the heavens or the infinite category. The advantage is that each plot is a story, and you can control the length according to your own performance. The small dungeon is fixed to Eastern fantasy or Xianxia, ​​and the character growth and combat power level are steadily improved. I believe that is a wonderful story suitable for Xianyu to play.

Delete it from the bookshelf, add it back when you remember it, delete it again after reading it, I found that this is the best attitude towards this book.

Salted fish, salted fish, I paid the balance today and worked together to help you get a big one; this is my last bit of trust in you, I hope you won't be a eunuch anymore.

Has it been replaced since it was put on the shelves? When Lin Qingyue came out, her son and daughter began to love each other, and the pig's feet were like a fool!