Vice Admiral of the Navy

His banana fruit can transform into the form of Nika, the Human Fruit Fantasy Beast Species Then you, the Earth Fruit, can also be in the form of Gaia, the Human Fruit Fantasy Beast Species Mother of the Earth, and by the way transform into Ultraman Gaia.

The protagonist is a time traveler but has never watched One Piece. What's the point? The first chapter can persuade a lot of people. The author's writing style is okay, but it's a pity.

Although most of the pirate world is sea, and the land exists in the form of islands, it cannot change that it is the earth that carries the sea. The relationship between the sea and the earth is like hair attached to the skin, and a vibration of the earth's veins is enough to cause a devastating tsunami. There are also the gravity of the earth, submarine volcanoes, etc. The concept of the fruit of the earth is too terrifying. According to the settings in comics and novels, it is not possible to say that this fruit will destroy the sky in the later stages of development. It will not be a problem to destroy the earth 🐷. It depends on the author's imagination...

Referring to Qingzhi's frozen fruit, it is unreasonable that the earth fruit cannot be elementalized. It is also a natural element and cannot be elementalized... You can still add a flaw to it, such as being afraid of water.

It is recommended that this earth fruit be changed to the superhuman type. Without the natural type, it cannot be elementalized. Even the dark fruit can only be unable to evade attacks. It is not that it cannot be elementalized The setting of the natural type is that the body turns into a certain element. The dark fruit also turns the body into darkness. It is just because of the characteristics of darkness that it will only absorb attacks but not avoid them. The setting of your earth fruit draws power from the earth and then controls it. This obviously belongs to the category of the superhuman type.

There must be an earth tiger armored body 🙂 that stands on the earth and is inexhaustible!

I feel more and more that the setting of One Piece manga is nonsense, full of bugs and cannot stand any scrutiny. Or Naruto's setting has fewer flaws.

Natural fruits represent natural phenomena, not nature itself. There is something wrong with the fruits of the earth. Even if they are the only ones that cannot be naturalized, they represent darkness, a phenomenon.

Wouldn't it be better if it were just Superman? .

The protagonist is a cripple less than 3m tall?

This is the big muscle tyrant

I was also thinking that you, Lucar, are the president of the moving agency of The King of Fighters. . .

I think you can write the protagonist as a person who doesn't want to intrigue, but you can't write the protagonist as a fool, right? I was a soldier in my previous life, and I'm 30 years old. I can't be so stupid that I don't even know about human relations and politics, right? Do you have the most basic military literacy? For example, when arranging troops, are they similar?

The protagonist's identity as a time traveler is completely useless

I thought the title was going to be Country Bitch. .

When will the protagonist be able to master Groudon's Ending Land and the ability to artificially create the earth, then it will be the awakening of the fruit, right? Then there are the protagonist's move suggestions. According to the protagonist's physical strength, I feel that it should be more suitable for playing the open and close path. If the rock pillar and rock gun are made larger, harder, and more, it will not be able to be used by others. Think about it. At that time, Akainu's ultimate move against the hero's rock pillar could only blast away the surface of the rock pillar, but it might not be able to kill Akainu because there was no Haki coverage. However, this kind of move is hopeless against non-natural types, unless it is a swordsman in One Piece that is unscientific and feels that it can be cut no matter how big it is. Think of Noah's Ark in Fish-Man Island. Wang Luffy, who only took the physical route, had to dismantle it a lot. For a long time, bigness is justice, hardness is invincibility Compare it with the war scene to see how big Akainu's skill range is (maybe he doesn't want to affect other sailors?), Aokiji's Ice Age should be considered quite big, but I feel that the protagonist's skill range can be even bigger. Later, Fujitora comes to compete with the protagonist, and then summons meteorites and is directly hit by the protagonist's bigger The top of the rock pillar is broken The protagonist is now engaged in the transformation of the nature of the earth. It cannot be said that he is taking a wrong path, a bit like Wang Lufei's several gears, but in fact it is considered a shortcut. Don't be like Wang Lufei when his foundation is weak (referring to Wang Luffy's body, the protagonist's fruit ability) and is taken away by Kaido's Thunder Bagua A. Or is the protagonist planning to improve his foundation again later?

There is also land under the sea, but it is just the seabed. I think the later development of Lukar's fruit can be used to raise time stones from the sea. This will not only ensure Lukar's maritime combat effectiveness, but also turn it into a sea fort.

I was wondering if we could give the protagonist the ability to breathe underwater and become unafraid of sea water through later training, and then dive into the bottom of the sea. Wouldn't that also be the earth? 🐷

As you write, I can still stay in the Navy 🤔

It became even more boring after it was released, Mang Fu vs Yin Coin 🤔🤔🤔