Starting Out as a Lord in a Viscount's Domain

Overall, this book is quite nice. First of all, write a book. As far as I can see so far, it is an invincible article. The protagonist did not encounter any failures or setbacks. The great thing is that the character of the protagonist is great. He is a character whose confidence and arrogance as a superior and a golden finger owner can be felt. So if any new readers see this, please rest assured that the protagonist is a gentle and determined nobleman, and there is no poison here. And then, although the author's description of combat is not good enough, and there is no passionate battle, the author's control of the combat power system is very good, and he does not constantly fight across levels, which can be regarded as respecting the intelligence of the people of the other world. The third point, which is also my favorite point, is that the content of the book written by the author is very high-level. Specifically, this book does not simply talk about what was bought today and how much money was made from selling it, but what rules were made today and what benefits were obtained. It is the story of a superior person. In my opinion, the author wrote based on the principle that the weak follow the rules and the strong make the rules. But there is a fly in the ointment. Because it is an invincible novel, the plot does not have enough ups and downs. Many of the ups and downs (such as the recent one, the succession of the king) are somewhat deliberate, without any hint, to force the plot to kill and lead to the plot. In addition, it may be that the author has not carried out in-depth development, and there is currently insufficient description of other life forms such as orcs, elves, and so on. Internet writing for entertainment seems too detailed, but it is far less elegant than published literature.

I just took a look and found myself in seventh place. . . Come on, author, please ask a master to give some chapter recommendations. This book has a good foundation and should gain a lot of popularity.

The author... There is an error in Chapter 29. Please correct it. I have provided you with two options. Please, the author, please find my chapter review and correct it. Thank you.

As far as the current fifty chapters are concerned, the IQ is online and the killing is decisive. At least the lord is not secretly carrying out assassinations at night. This is very good. He knows how to train his subordinates, knows how to employ people, and pays equal attention to his subordinates. Although there are other small flaws that need to be improved, they are innocuous. The biggest problem is that the economic system in the book is not grasped well. It will collapse later. It needs to be changed. Come on.

I'm so hungry. I should have known better than to write a novel.

One thing is very poisonous. The protagonist spent 5 million and went through many twists and turns to buy the life potion and the people in the world of cultivating immortals switched to the method of cultivating immortals. Although the world is different, it was converted into a method of cultivating magic power. But even so, things worth 5 million gold coins and the cultivators have died, it is difficult to return I didn't check the skills I changed when I got them, and then gave them to a person I saved casually. Although the other person did repay the favor, is it too ridiculous to give the magic-modified skills in the world of immortality worth 5 million yuan, which is worth half of the family fortune, to a person who has only met twice?

So far, it's okay. I hope the author will be careful about the subsequent plot and not be too abrupt. Many farming novels start to forcefully push the plot at this point, and there is no farming at all. Farming novels are difficult to write and feel like they test one's writing skills. In addition, it's good that Goldfinger's presence is not high. At this stage, it's all about building walls and hoarding money.

After reading Chapter 50, I set some more important points under the complaint. After I finished the comment, I continued reading. 1. Nafu City is a resource-exhausted city. A resource-based city must have relatively reliable transportation routes to transport resources out. And from an economic point of view, it does not seem to have a commercial port. It is inferred that it should have had relatively strong land transportation capabilities. It is set that the mineral veins have dried up in the protagonist's father's generation. Considering the protagonist's age, even if his father is old and has a son (the protagonist's father cannot be a high-level professional according to the setting), it will only be a few decades before the Nafucheng mineral veins dry up. But the protagonist said that transportation in Naf City is inconvenient It may be that Nurgle City suffered a natural disaster 2. Since the exhausted mineral veins are the only pillar industry in Naf City, there should be no salt mines or saltwater lakes in Naf City. Although I don't know why, transportation in Naf City is inconvenient, and there will be no plantations or sugar mills here. But there is a magical amount of salt, sugar, etc., And even spices that can be used freely in the kitchen. Maybe these things can be seen everywhere in the world where Nurgle City is located, and spices grow everywhere like weeds. (Updated: Chapter 52 mentions the seaside of Nafu City, but does not mention salt production and commercial ports. I will continue reading) 3. The citizens and farmers of Nafu City who were originally hungry can already claim to be idle in winter, and sacrifice their time and energy to attend adult school for a job that may not necessarily be available. Perhaps thanks to the protagonist's tax exemption, the citizens of Nurgle City became rich instantly 4. The protagonist promoted public health to the citizens of Nurgle City without any foundation, and the citizens of Nurgle City accepted the suggestion to boil water before drinking it without any hindrance. It shows that Nurgle City may have mastered extremely low-cost energy technologies such as nuclear furnaces and geothermal power 5. In the presence of divine magic, subjectively deny or ignore the possibility of the existence of gods. Maybe the protagonist is Nurgle It's so scary. Keep reading.

The author's writing style is okay. I have only read about 10 chapters and the portrayal of the protagonist is better than most people. Keep at it. This book may not be popular, but it can attract fans No other author can be an amazing and diving squid who also grows up step by step. Keep at it.       ，，，      ，，666 Write a few distinctive supporting characters to make the content richer. A word of persistence can make everything difficult at the beginning.

The author is really sloppy, the protagonist is obviously a shrewd character, but every time he encounters a problem and needs to face a big shot, he shows a complete ignorance of the famous figures in the kingdom and the powerful nobles. He obviously had a conflict with the chief judge, but in the end he didn't even know what the chief judge was called These situations can be said to be superfluous and the meaning is unclear.

The author was still too hasty when writing. The protagonist actually didn't even look at the immortal cultivation techniques he got. He looked down upon it and spent a lot of money to get it. Moreover, he was just a weakling and a little shrimp. Where did he have the confidence?

Why do I feel that the quality has been so bad since it was put on the shelves? . .

The biggest problem with this book is that it's poorly finished. In addition, if you read Xiuxian, it's fantasy.

Is it because my grades are too poor and because I signed a contract, I am perfunctory, fighting and killing for no apparent reason, and throwing myself into my arms for no apparent reason?

All subscribed... But I found that this book became more and more off-topic. Isn't it a farming article as promised? ? ? Why spend so much time talking about that ghost countess? ? ? Can you farm well? ? What about trading systems? Many chapters have disappeared. Oh, stop talking nonsense. We want to read the farming story! ! !

The story is good, but the timeline is a bit short. It took a dozen people to repair my yard in the countryside for a month, but your hospital repaired it in two or three days? Is a school available in less than a week?

It was okay in the beginning, but the more I write, the more rubbish I write, and all my money is wasted.

The world view and the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are very good, but the campaign and fighting are a bit too childish. Build a county without infantry/archers/levies, 60 pure knights, plus the protagonist himself a senior mage... Personal suggestion, although this is The fantasy world has great individual differences. It is also a world where the strong can control local battlefields, and ordinary soldiers still need to cooperate to participate in the war. PS: I only saw the protagonist attacking the Green Earldom. I hope there will be more diverse troops when the army grows stronger

Alas, the writing is getting worse and worse. It feels like it was not written by the same person as the first 50 chapters. Did a master create the beginning and then find someone to write it for me? Alas, I can't read it. I originally found a fantasy novel called The Sacred Tree, but I ended up writing it down.

The more I write, the more painful it becomes. I completely regret subscribing to the next hundred or so chapters. 😅😅😅😅😅

Why do I feel that the nobles of a country start fighting casually, and the king never comes to mediate, but just kills a territorial noble at any request? It's better to do it this way during times of turmoil.

Now I get a headache when I see a beautiful woman, and I can't even eat a single meal. A six or seven-year-old kid from a poor family can tell the difference between a beautiful woman, and it's better if she doesn't look hungry.

It's over. What a pity. It depends on whether we conquer the continent or explore other locations later.

I don't know why, but I lost interest when I saw the part about the church.

I'm a little confused, how can I support the monthly vote that I voted for after it's gone?

So this kind of newcomer. . From the bad ending to the continuous eunuch disappearing directly. .

The author should have been influenced by the dancing "Devil's Rule". The overall structure is very similar. I personally like this kind of story. The only drawback is that the author's ending is too abrupt, and it ends more crisply than "Devil's Rule". Of course, the advantage is that it is not unfinished at all.

In fact, this book still has a lot of room for development. It can be written about some planes and the like. It is a pity that this book has not been written.

The first time to pursue the first place

The ending is pretty average, I still have some things I like.