Come On, He Is Really Super Strong!

I posted again, and some readers reported that the protagonist's treatment of enemies was too cruel, almost to the point of torture. Also, the protagonist was beaten too badly in the first competition after entering school, which is a bad point, so I specially posted a post to ask for everyone's opinions.

Well, tell me what's so toxic and I'll try my best to change it.

Personally, I feel that the male protagonist is a bit cruel 😥 Using a wooden stick with a flame attached to it and inserting it into the flesh feels a bit like torture 😅 It can be a little lower, such as holding his arm, but it is not as impactful in reading If you set the character of the male protagonist to be like this, it is okay But it may have an impact on # in some ways😅

What, he doesn't know how to use his ability at all?

After reading the beginning, the main character is a bit silly. Why didn't he say that the flame he awakened was very powerful but invisible?

In Chapter 15, the attributes are 25 26 26 29. In Chapter 18, the attributes are only 22 22 20 29? Instead of rising, you are falling.

Wouldn't it be better to have the ability to continue fooling the neighbor's children? I have already saved his life. It can be said that I have absolute trust in the protagonist. He will think whatever the protagonist says about him! Why don't you go to school after you have maxed out your abilities?

What you are trying to do is to be invincible, and what you are doing is a useless life. I only read the beginning. Since others believe that you can be invincible, why not just fool the big one, and do it bit by bit?

I suggest the author change the introduction. The most speechless thing is the kind of introduction that first introduces the beginning, and then introduces the ending, saying that when you look back, you have conquered all worlds, conquered all races, and become invincible in the world. I would like to ask, since you wrote the beginning and ending of the story in the introduction, what is the highlight of this book? Although the ending can be guessed, why not just write it out?

After the college entrance examination, I came here again. It's really good. I'm worthy of having raised you for so long.

By the way, the talents have been useless and I haven't seen any improvements for a long time.

2035? ? ? I think I can live until that time. If the awakening does not happen, I will come back and scold me. If it happens, just pretend I didn't say it.

I haven't started watching it yet, but I personally don't like movies with female protagonists. Can the heroine be written to death?

Chapter 69: Prosperity concept map:

It was good in the past, but I saw that I was in school again, and it was nothing more than adding a few losers in the same dormitory, a secret realm, a fragmented world, pretending to be B and brushing up my skills in front of passers-by, and some girl saw it, and became the protagonist group, the first in the protagonist group, all-inclusive, etc. The routine slipped away.

After reading the title of the book, I just want to say... Please, you are weak! Now we know who is the boss!

The protagonist's flame controller has an awesome name but is actually a big fireball technique that pulls the crotch! ! !

The writing is quite good, but the system at the back is particularly awkward. I read it on QQ Reading. If you look at the advertisements over there, the author can get money. You should not turn to pirated copies. You can go there.

I'm here to take a look. I won't curse anyone, just comment on the book.

If you say that his eyes can slow down the opponent under normal conditions, or accelerate under normal conditions,

Thank you to the author for this book. Even though it is not completely finished, it has improved greatly since the middle and later stages, as if it was written by someone else. Maybe the results are not good, but the author still persists here. The story has been explained and it is worth reading to the last page (I personally think). I finally finished this book, and I look forward to the author's new book coming too, come on! The first book already has potential and strength, come on!

I think it's okay. The content is generally good. The plot goes too fast and becomes average later on. But I can understand that there are too few subscriptions. I don't understand why people nowadays have such high requirements for reading 😅. I also offended the editor.

I haven't started reading it yet, but I personally don't like reading novels with protagonists. Can the protagonist be killed? 🙂

I just finished reading it, and I feel that the author has a lot of fluctuations in the rhythm in the front and back, especially in the ruins and death sections. The rhythm started to be difficult to grasp, and the writing was a bit watery. Later, the rhythm slowly came back after being attacked by the minotaur. I feel that the biggest problem in these two sections is that there are many things without ambush. If you look at it directly, it will be suddenly incomprehensible. And here, a lot of settings and details are added to make it easier for us to understand, and it will become particularly bloated. And the effect is definitely not foreshadowed. We can guess that the effect is good. Then one thing that feels very bad is the combat power. I don't know this about other people. I'm definitely better at level by level. Just write about strength in combat. This kind of cool article mainly depends on comparison and combat description. For example, when you fight, if you are all A-level, my star-shattering finger can tear apart your domain. At S level, adjust a few more rules, and when you hit it right, your rules will be smashed. This is definitely much better than writing about combat power. No matter how high the numerical value you write about your combat power is, you can't tell how strong it is.