Daqian Changsheng

After watching it for so long, let me tell you what I think. The title looks like a classic fairy tale, but even now I don't see any trace of the fairy. When it comes to martial arts, it's not just about martial arts, it's about showing off to solve crimes in the capital. The topic is written in a variety of ways. There is no obvious main plot, so it's okay to read each chapter, but when I look back, I can't remember what the pig's feet did.

What are you writing? For those who don't know, I thought you were writing about an emergency department doctor! Wu is not martial, chivalrous is not chivalrous, immortal is not immortal, the rivers and lakes are not the rivers and lakes, the court is not the court. Either you write that he is a great hero who serves the country and the people, or you write that he jumps out of the Three Realms and clears the way for himself. I keep banging my hammer here and there all day long, which makes me feel like I'm screwed. You also wrote that he has magical powers, can save dead people, and has a golden finger. The man is full of wits and tricks, and he is forced to add drama to make him cautious, as if everyone in the world can kill him at any time. I don't know what the author wants to express 🙂🙂🙂

After seeing chapter 200, I was about to give up. Let me share my feelings: The other martial arts protagonists are cultivating immortals, and their writing is quite smooth. At least it doesn't make people feel that the wording and sentence making are naive. There are only occasional passages where character descriptions or perspective changes are not clear. The pace is slow but it can be read; Let's talk about the poisonous points: 1. The division of realms is speechless. The first chapter explains the realm from ninth to first level, but within two chapters it jumps to the fourth level and above. Then all the characters, old and young, are gathered in the third, second and first levels. So what is the meaning of dividing so many realms? 2. The earth cannot rotate without the protagonist. Whenever there is a magic book (the power of covering the sky and the sun), natural disasters or man-made disasters (plague), only the protagonist can handle them (no one can do it), and it is an understatement of the effort, which makes the viewer not feel happy, and gives people a feeling that world peace depends entirely on the protagonist. Without the protagonist, the world would have been in chaos, which is outrageous; 3. Main character For example, the protagonist's character said that he wanted to avoid all kinds of troubles and only seek immortality, but then he made various exceptions to show his holiness or make fun of others. A simple example is that the protagonist knew that a villain was leading people to ask for help, and he deliberately avoided it in advance. As a result, the villain appeared immediately after death, and then pretended to say, "I'm sorry for being late." Do you really want to attract hatred like this? Do you really don't want to get involved in the cause and effect? Overall, this book is tasteless and it would be a pity to discard it.

It's not interesting. I'm tired of watching it. I'm either making trouble or on the way to making trouble. I'm either saving this or saving that. In short, I just can't stop. I'm already tired from a busy day at work, but I'm still so tired from reading a book.

First, some people think that the protagonist rescuing her unconditionally and being kind to her is a bit of a licking. Rebuttal: The protagonist has saved many people, and she is not the only one, such as Fa Wu, Fan Ning, Zhou Yang, people suffering from the plague, etc.; It is true that he is good to her, but Fakong is not good to Lin Feiyang, and he is more partial to Fan Ning; in addition, it seems that the protagonist has not been attracted to any woman so far, so how can he say that he is a dog licker🐶. Finally, as a Buddhist, isn't it normal practice to practice Buddhism by saving people, doing good deeds and accumulating virtue? Second, about Ning Zhenzhen's characterization. My personal feeling about this character is that it is a standard template for female protagonists in female videos. It is hard to say whether it is good or bad, but it is not difficult to understand. After all, "The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Sword" has the Emei Sect, which holds up half the sky. Maybe the author has some feelings. Ah, is this the generation gap! This character can open a new book on the female channel. The name can be called "The Peerless Fairy Ning". Introduction: I have been practicing since I was a child, and I have reached the Tianyuan realm in my early years. In the distance of the rivers and lakes, there are the noble prince of the Qing Dynasty, the cold handsome young man, and the young milk dog. At the high place of the temple, they pass by the handsome prince, the evil prince, and the boss of the wolf dog. It can be said that they pass through the flowers without touching a leaf. The Taoist heart is clear and unmoving. However, he is already a first-class master at the age of thirty. Looking at the world, he is already at the pinnacle, except for that first-class master...

Is the emperor wise or foolish? Is this the heyday of the dynasty or the end of the dynasty? The strange thing is that I can't tell the difference. Because there seems to be no protagonist, according to what happened in the plot, the core disciples of the big sect will die in droves like cannon fodder, the people will be displaced, and the ten houses will be empty. The dynasty will suffer from internal and external troubles, the court officials will be in trouble, and the fate of the country will not be long. But with the protagonist, judging from the description, this country actually presents a prosperous scene, and the plot is also very magical. There are contradictions everywhere, and there is something wrong with the setting.

I would like to trouble the author to read the book he wrote when he has time.

Every time the main character appears, he loses a lot of weight. Every time he goes to a restaurant to eat, he loses a lot of weight. Every time Li Ying appears, she loses a lot of weight. The number of words in this book is just like this. I am really speechless.

After reading about ten chapters, this book has a schizophrenic feel. The protagonist died once, and there is nothing wrong with longing for immortality. Normal logic has no major issues other than life and death. The previous calculations, other people's secrets, fruits, these are all no problem. As a result, I went to try to cure people, but I cured them too quickly, causing the power of faith to break.

Xiao xx (not Xiao) is reborn, monk, Medicine Buddha, noble 😰😰😰😰😰 Can't you have some green vegetable soup? Or some soup?

I just want to ask, why are there endless errors in the daily updates? From the beginning to now, there have always been small mistakes. Your original book was not like this. Can't we write a good outline? Can't we read the draft word by word before sending it?

It's not good-looking. There's a nun at the beginning. This nun is just like the eldest lady in the TV series. You're a nun. You're making love all day long. You're angry or something. It's a bloody romantic drama. With this writing style, the current masters are becoming more and more awesome.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 271. At first I found it interesting. Although many people attack the role of the female supporting actor Ning Zhenzhen. But I think it's good to have a personality. Good. I don't know if the author was affected. The scenes are deliberately reduced. The IQs of all supporting characters in the entire article are online in the early stages. They don't seem to be able to think at the end. There are many techniques that no one can crack except magical powers. Forcibly add a halo to the protagonist. I can understand this. After all, magical powers don't cost money. However, what is known is that. Currently, even the first level cannot kill the protagonist. But the protagonist is between the first and second grades. It can't kill Yipin either. Using Shenzu Tong, you can instantly return to the Snow Mountain Sect. He has magical powers and can conjure magic, and he is indestructible. It can be said that unless a large number of first-class players attack together, it is possible to kill the protagonist. However, the protagonist still has a immobilizing spell. It can be said that you are basically invincible and will not die. The female supporting character, Young Master Li, is described as extremely smart but has never accomplished anything. Everything is a relic. The author has previously written that the protagonist does not interfere in the affairs between the princes. He slapped himself in the face several times and kept interfering. All the princes couldn't believe that the protagonist was cured through a woman and benefited themselves, so they obeyed the protagonist's words. I can tolerate this too. The specific Taoist masters of each demon sect are also completely brainless. The only role is for the protagonist to give a way. They go. Then he was seriously injured and dying. The protagonist saves. Speaking of this, I remembered what I mentioned before that you can't save the dead. Later, every time, his heart was broken into pieces and he died and then was resurrected. I can tolerate this too. But I really can't stand that from now on, his supporting character has no personality at all. No IQ. I don't comment on the quality of the book. You can watch it or not. All I can say is that food is useless. It's a pity to abandon it. An opening chapter can make a good book. Later. I gave up anyway. Well written, it deserves a reward from me. Tsk. It's a pity this book

In one sentence, women are thankless. If a woman whines in front of you, what can you do? I can only slap her and scold her a few times. But if it's a man, you can just break his legs, blind or cripple him. Obviously the latter is more satisfying, so unless you can't avoid it, don't write about women. If you really want to write about it, then trouble, add a little plug-in to this woman. We don't want to see vase-like women with pendants on their thighs. We hope they have an effect on the protagonist. For example, if the protagonist kills people, she digs holes, and if the protagonist wants to make money, she will give him money. In short, she must be somewhat useful to the protagonist, and it doesn't have to be about strength. The women in The Naming Technique of the Night either provide information or provide power like Li Changqing. Su Yu is basically invincible in the later stages of Tribulation of All Races, but the heroine can also provide research results, but there seems to be basically no heroine in Eagle's book. Determined to kill, not afraid of trouble or looking for trouble, proficient in Buddhism, not a dog licker, not a holy mother, respected and worshiped by others. If you reverse one of these conditions, you will lose a large number of readers. Think about it for yourself, how many readers you have gained by doing the reverse. The White Robe Controller is my favorite book, so take care of yourself.

The author writes the character of the protagonist inconsistently. Earlier, he wrote that I just want to live forever, see the quiet valley and have a peaceful mind, and become a great man who lives in seclusion and purifies the world. After the change, the protagonist is as impatient as a businessman who is eager for quick success or a young man who has just come out of the world. The first part describes how the protagonist is calm and how he hopes and cherishes his long life, and the second part is all kinds of saucy operations. It is completely unlike the author's own mentality of surviving life and death. The author has ruined the protagonist's character based on his experience.

Is the author definitely writing about Buddhism? I read the first dozen chapters, and then there was a monk and a nun. What did you write? It's also affectionate and affectionate. If I hadn't known that it was about nuns and monks, I would have thought it was about something else, a novel about cultivating immortals. There is a female green tea lotus, and a male who currently seems to be licking a dog. There are so many monthly tickets. I really wonder if they are fake?

I don't really like being the protagonist who licks dogs. I already do it in life. I don't want to do it again in novels.

1. I feel that the author has not experienced women much, and every book has an aura of being a bitch. To be honest, when your career is successful and you have endless money, let me ask you, is it easy to change one hundred thousand dollars a week? When you have experienced hundreds of women and heard too many stories about family misfortune, marital disharmony, admiration for GG, and all kinds of love stories, when you have sex with all kinds of women and it is as simple as peeing, will you still lick it? Licking is for temporary needs, such as Sichong. Licking is just a rustic love story. He just spends a small amount of money and time to experience different toilets. When he gets tired of it, he will change the toilet. Do you think he will really invest a lot of resources into it? 2. The author has never truly experienced the life of a superior person, nor has he truly mastered social resources. What is power is the right to decide people and resources. In ancient times, it was just a golden saying. One word can determine life or death, let alone women. I have read the author's books for many years, but I couldn't put them down after just a few pages. The portrayal of human nature is not profound. It feels like I want to write but can't write well, and I feel like I am forcing myself to write. Some authors just don't write if they can't write. Human nature has two sides, black and white, both Buddha nature and demonic nature. With a sharp blade in hand, the murderous intention arises. When you have extraordinary power, you will naturally regard all living beings as ants. In modern society, if you look at those war-torn areas, you will know that if you only hold weapons, that is, foreign objects, you will be lawless. If he had extraordinary power, the world would be in chaos. I am not saying this to ask the protagonist to destroy the world. But as a strong man, a king, he should have his dignity, and the strong should not be insulted. So the author has never had a king's heart, but he writes about a king, so he can't stand it. The idea is not clear! ! !

After testing the poison, the pig's feet were completely unlike those of a monk. He would kneel and lick a woman, and use his lifespan to save her after just a few meetings. He also kept saying that they were friends, and the other monks couldn't say anything about her. Really, every woman has a description of her appearance and how beautiful they are, which makes the author feel vulgar.

It's okay to write about other things. I wrote about a monk who couldn't live without a woman or couldn't write it. The woman appeared in just five chapters. The key is that the protagonist's talent is full of dog-licking points! Once, there was a matter related to their orthodoxy, and the protagonist was very angry when he helped her. Later, the girl said that she would not ask her for help, and the good guy immediately used Shou Yuan to save her? The key point is that these two women are quite greedy!

Is this a book written by a great god? It is true that it is both upright and established. I want to use the identity of a monk to create an indifferent and otherworldly image of the protagonist. As a result, all I see in the whole story is an image of a flower monk who has six impurities and is forced to be indifferent to the actual inner restlessness and is devoted to the world of mortals. No matter how much natural beauty you write and how to set off the protagonist in detail, it is all in vain. All the temple monks in the book do not have the image that a monk should have. Especially the female characters in the book are created to be astonishingly poisonous.

To be honest, the most attractive part of this book is the setting of the world. The various miraculous skills are very interesting and can indeed arouse the desire to watch. However, the character setting of the protagonist is not flattering. You will feel inexplicably uncomfortable watching it. If you think about it carefully, you feel that the protagonist is like a licking dog, licking every girl, including his apprentice, enemy and junior sister. Anyway, any girl who is beautiful will definitely receive special care. As mentioned earlier, who had a particularly strong character and did not want to be given special care, but within a few chapters, he was able to accept all kinds of help from the protagonist with peace of mind. Also, the women inside felt that all of them were invincible, so I acted in various ways. Anyway, the protagonist would help, and the protagonist would not let her die. Anyway, the protagonist would be resurrected even if she died. Anyway, I would wantonly offend people I couldn't afford to offend, because the protagonist was protecting me, and she would definitely not be the one to suffer in the end anyway. Now the protagonist's friends and apprentices all endorse the protagonist. Such kindness is hypocrisy and evil disguised as kindness. Disregarding the talk of cause and effect in Buddhism, Buddhism says that there are eight major sufferings in the world. Birth, old age, illness, and death are all human beings. The protagonist is always one who doesn't want to die and that one doesn't want to let his soul be lacking. Isn't this nonsense? Even Buddha cannot guarantee that everyone will live a satisfactory life. In a word, this is a holy scripture. Be cautious when entering the pit. I would like to say something to the author: everyone has their own destiny, and nothing can be forced. In every classic novel, there are various shortcomings and various difficulties. If you want a novel to be talked about by people, the protagonist is destined to suffer setbacks, otherwise it will be no different from a pool of stagnant water.

Seriously, Mr. Xiao, please change your style. The male protagonist is like licking a dog. I really want to read it, but can you please give me your opinion? This book makes me depressed. He licks women as soon as it comes out. It's totally out of character.

Author, let me chat with you for the rest of the day. The current social situation is very different. Men in their 20s and 30s have seen enough of these little fairies who think they are self-important in reality. The lickers have also begun to reflect, right? You have been writing books for so many years. It is not my turn to teach you how to write novels, but changing the heroine will not have a big impact on your plot. I don't know how old you are, but maybe you think it's fun for a young and beautiful girl who doesn't know how to act with dignity or ego to be flirty with you. I'm sorry, but quite a few women just want to vomit when they see this kind of woman.

I read a few chapters, and the beginning is all about a nun. If you like it, read it. Anyway, after reading it, I just felt that my blood pressure in my brain increased. I kept talking about the jade hands and the body fragrance. I originally planned to read it carefully, but the protagonist was revived. At the same time, he emphasized that the protagonist is pure and celibate. The next second, he let the nun come to have tea with the male protagonist, who was so full of tea that he vomited.

God-level skills, others become gods after practicing them, but the protagonist becomes trash after practicing them. In the realm of martial arts, others are one level above the other, and the protagonist seamlessly switches between the first level and the hundredth level. Summary: I practiced loneliness, wrote about loneliness, and watched loneliness.

Do you have any recommendations for novels about real monks? Guys, be careful not to be arrogant or impetuous, not impatient or impetuous, and cultivate yourself to be clear about your own body and mind. Those without women are the best.

It's so bad, it's nosy everywhere, it's written as if everyone will die without the protagonist, no one in the entire emperor is useful, and as long as she is a royal woman, she must be sick, and only the protagonist can save it, so the emperor is all trash, all the same old routines, one after another.

Read 10 chapters. It feels like a monk falling in love. It's just weird. If you choose this subject, and the protagonist is a monk, you should be a good monk. What does this writing mean about this woman? The word affectionate is used between nun and soul. Is it appropriate?

Buddhist scriptures can't do it Personnel affairs can't be done Tutors can't do it Killing is not done with ease Sparing others is not done with ease Preface and afterwords are inconsistent A hammer in the east and a stick in the west It all depends on the author's mood There is no theme There is no main line either The style relies on nonsense The content is based on hydrology