White Robe Steward

If one person plays multiple undercover roles, he might as well have several clones 😭 , every time we arrive at a new map, there is always a supporting actress from the new sect, and then it becomes ambiguous, and then the problem comes again. The author portrays the protagonist as a single-minded person, which is really speechless, and the plot is very dragging. When you change sects, you can practice one-step skills to the full level. The key is that you want to be a beast. Why practice so many other schools' skills? It's very confusing. If you want to combine the skills of hundreds of schools and create your own skills, it's okay.

The role of Zhao Ying is the biggest failure

I was really convinced that Gu Litong was deposed and expelled. This kind of high-level officials let him go just as they asked. Aren't they afraid that he would become a hostile force? Only the male protagonist can think of such a mentally retarded problem? Daleiyin Temple is also very powerful, and it costs a lot for an abandoned disciple. How could he be a monk with such a murderous and violent spirit?

Otherwise, the author should modify the previous currency! I just read it. In the first few chapters, 300 grasses were saved and the servant was rewarded with 10,000 taels of silver. However, one grass was only sold for 10 taels of silver, resulting in a loss of 8,000. That boss is so good. Later, it was mentioned that the servant's salary was 10 taels of silver per month. Wasn't that a reward of 1,000 years' salary? ! (I won't tell you how the pig's feet will develop in the future, but it's not up to standard here.)

To be honest, the biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist is too versatile, including deduction, alchemy, formations, swordsmanship, Buddhism, light industry, and spiritual beast martial arts. The protagonist has learned too much, and he keeps saying that he can further improve in these, but the protagonist is not written to practice these. Going to the Demon Realm is obviously to stir up trouble, but once you have feelings, you immediately change your attitude The power to protect the lower realm is obviously enough, but you keep fighting against the Asura Realm Every time you get a promotion, you will be beaten up. You keep running around but don't have time to practice your original martial arts. If you can't threaten the protagonist, you will threaten the heroine.

I have read almost 2,000 chapters and can't stand it anymore. The protagonist is so weak that he has to be pooped and pooped on his head in various positions. He really has to work hard to reason. What's the difference between this and taking the initiative to open his mouth to accept it. I just want to feel good when I read a novel. The more I read this book, the more disgusting it becomes.

I didn't realize until halfway through watching that Zhao Ying disappeared at the beginning, why she suddenly disappeared, and the boundaries between realms were too blurry.

There are too many maps, a single plot, and a lack of through-line appeal. The story is about learning martial arts - women - learning martial arts - killing people. There is no new idea. The character of the protagonist is becoming more and more blurred. He only follows the example of his predecessor Yahui and only inherits it. Have you exhausted your talents?

After reading the beginning, this book is quite interesting. If it is made into a TV series, Wang Dachui can play Zhuo Feiyang, which is full of joy.

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than two thousand chapters. There are too many pitfalls in writing and designing a long novel at the same time. It is written that the author doesn't know why, It is an infinite flow of martial arts novels that I don't know why.

After reading more than 700 chapters, Pig Trotters and Xiao Shi spent the most time together. After flipping through the ending, I discovered that she was not the heroine. I got drunk and gave up.

After reading more than 170 chapters, I am a little confused. The protagonist does not owe the second lady anything, nor does he like the second lady, but he is willing to die for the second lady? ? ? It's a bit baffling. If you were the third lady, I might not be too resistant, but the protagonist not only owes the second lady nothing, but the second lady owes the protagonist the grace of saving his life. I feel that the protagonist has lost his humanity and become a bit wantless. This really makes me feel less involved, so I can only say sorry. I gave up this book, goodbye.

Dear author, your writing of martial arts is really in the same line. I feel like the plot can't progress unless something happens to the woman the hero likes, Xiao Feng's A'Zhu, Yang Guo's aunt, Wuji's Zhou Zhinuo, Ling Gu Chong's junior sister,

I have read it all, but there are several points that were not completed and ended suddenly. For example, 1. The Immortal Yin Mountain was so powerful at the beginning, but then it was destroyed, and how it returned to the fairy world and rose again was not clearly written 2. The two spiritual beasts placed there in the Hundred Thousand Mountains ate spiritual grass and were upgrading. The protagonist no longer knows how many years he has been in the upper heavens, since he has not woken up yet. 3. What is the relationship between the hundreds of thousands of mountains in each sky? 4. What are demons, asuras and gods, and what world are they in? 5. How old is the protagonist? 6. Isn't there a thirty-three-level sky? It seems that we have only explored the 7.8Th level 🤤 There are too many questions.

The recommendation vote was originally for Thunder, but it was voted for Baipao. This is so stupid! 😭

Chu Li's basic plug-in Kurong Gong, Eternal Power, and you can also open a farm. Da Yuan Jing Zhi, his mind and clairvoyance, his ability to secretly learn martial arts is like the Beiming Magic that absorbs other people's inner strength, uses war to support war, and keeps upgrading. The story has ups and downs. Although some of the twists are a bit ridiculous, this is the story.

I'm surprised. In the first few chapters, it was written that Ci'en Temple could not leave the temple for ten years, but after a few chapters, he ran out again? Really speechless

It seems that this book is almost 3000 chapters long and I haven't killed any beautiful women yet.

The first part of this book is well written, but every chapter in the second part feels confusing.

Let me tell you a little bit: The front of the book is pretty good. It starts with killing the emperor in the middle. A villain dies over and over again, then resurrects, and then dies again. How many chapters are there to salivate over?

I read part of it earlier and can't stand it anymore. Damn, I can teleport. These are top-notch skills. They are so awesome that they want to go to heaven. They are still around the second lady every day. After all, they are also time-traveled. In this modern world with advanced information, what kind of women have not been seen? After more than 700 chapters, I have not slept with a woman. Why do labor and management still need this time-traveling? Why do they need so many golden fingers?

I wouldn't be able to stand it if Xiao Shi married Prince An, it's annoying.

Xiao Da's new book Super Brain Eunuch, everyone is welcome to read it!

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I don't know how I finished reading it. The whole book is bland and has no highlights.

It looks good. It's the first time I've seen a finished novel in recent years. Of course, there are a lot of flaws 😁 Keep up the good work, author ✊✊✊

I'm Chu Li, are all my old friends still there?

The new book "Daqian Changsheng" is on the shelves! Everyone is welcome to give advice!

The author's writing style is really suitable for writing martial arts. The character of the protagonist is also very realistic, and the description of the fight is also very comfortable. It is understated and full of character without losing its excitement. I like it. But the description of the supporting characters really needs to be strengthened. Fortunately, problems in this area seem to be rare in the new book. Come on