Huangxiu

What about the protagonist? Why do you always write about incarnation! I want to see Ascension. Wouldn't it be nice if the incarnation didn't appear when needed? Why is it all him.

The relationship between the characters is too confusing, and Golden Chapter 3 explains too much.

Come on and update, it's not enough.

Write less female characters. There are several female protagonists, the guards are female guards, the opponents are female opponents, and the sects they help are female sects. I'm really convinced. All the friends I made were women.

A weakling with pig's feet, he blinded his golden finger in vain, he tried his best to accumulate physical mana, but in the end he could only beat others at the same level. He could not beat others at a small level higher than him. He was like a bitch when doing things, and when others insulted him, he gave them a few superficial wounds, which was considered as ruthless revenge on others! ! ! !

After reading Chapter 7, the hierarchy of the royal family is so messed up that I can't even see it. At first, Pig's Foot's concubine told Pig's Foot about respecting the 13th prince. I thought it was Pig's Foot's 13th uncle, but it turned out that this 13th uncle was the Emperor's 13th brother. . . Is this still called the 13th prince? Do you know what a prince is? The son of the contemporary emperor. And the elders of the pig's trotters talk about "fourth", "ninth" and "tenth" all the time. Those who know that "fourth" refers to pig's trotters. There are no names. Maybe the author thinks that it's okay for the elders to call the younger ones the older ones, but it depends on how many generations there are in your family now. It's best for the youngest generation to use the younger ones if they're not married. Do you know what the servants of ordinary merchants call their masters? The first generation of the head of the family is the master, the next generation is the young master, and the next generation is the young master. The normal way for elders to address the next generation is by their younger generation or by their first name. Unless someone in your second generation is married, they will address you as your older generation. This means that the second generation has grown up and started to run the family. But it should be more about calling names.

To be honest, the subject matter of the book is okay, but the style of writing your book is exactly the same as the previous novels. There is nothing new. You always describe how talented the protagonist is. As a result, more powerful geniuses will always emerge, and then you will steal treasures from them, then upgrade, repeat this process, and then you will be a licking dog, licking this and that. Give up, give up

It's really outrageous. There are female characters one after another, and all of them are geniuses. There must be so many talented female characters. There is so much preparation for the protagonist. If a female character comes out at random, the protagonist will be beaten. The female characters must be written in such a bad way. The sects in a country always look down on the prince. The prince, a duke's son dares to scold the prince. I really don't know what I am writing. It's really embarrassing to see that the protagonist's frustration is always interpreted as wisdom. People on the street praise him when he becomes a grandmaster at the age of 23. The protagonist is still looked down upon when he becomes a grandmaster at the age of 20. Now he meets someone who is younger than the protagonist and has a better cultivation level than him. Then there is the woman who is younger than the protagonist and has surpassed countless people in just one day. It's fascinating to watch. It's obvious that she has a weak understanding, but in the end, she is a genius? Extraordinary understanding?

There is no big storyline, and I can't stand it after reading one or two hundred chapters. Very contradictory. While he kept writing about the protagonist who was greedy for life, fearful of death, as timid as a mouse, and had delusions of being persecuted, he also wrote about how powerful he was, and how he made a big splash in everything and shocked the whole country. While writing about how difficult upgrading is, the protagonist is prepared to endure it slowly. At the same time, he writes about how the upgrade speed is ten times faster than others and still feels slow. He thinks about how to upgrade quickly every day. While writing about how powerful the enemies are, he also writes about how he keeps sending treasures, messages, and credits to the protagonist when he encounters them. This is still the kind of feeble-minded behavior that he rushes to give away.

A grand master is a grand master. The protagonist is not happy yet. You just wrote at the end that the princess will be promoted to grand master. Isn't this a bit inappropriate? It feels like the protagonist has become her fault. The sense of satisfaction brought by all the protagonist's current achievements is suddenly destroyed 😥

The protagonist holds his fists and smiles when he meets everyone. No matter what other people's attitude or tone is, he will always look inferior to others. No matter how others provoke the protagonist, even if they want to fall in love with his fiancée, they will still laugh after meeting. I don't know why they are laughing there every day. Every time I take revenge, I have to be ridiculed by others before I give him a bruise. Basically, I have not killed a few people. The plot is already bland enough, but the protagonist is not at all happy here

What's going on, the protagonist and the heroine are about to get married, but at this time, they suddenly said that they want to be a saint for ten years. This poisoned me to death, it was simply disgusting. Just don't have a female protagonist.

It's rare to find an old author who has made no progress after writing for so many years.

I have never read the author. The more I read the writing, the more familiar it becomes. This kind of pretentious indifference, independence from the world, the mentality of a virgin, and the protagonist who protects the world must be Xiao Shu, white robe, monk, little eunuch, and now there is a prince, not bad, not bad

Why do all your books praise women so highly? In Jin Yong's book, in other books it feels like the protagonist will die in the end by a woman.

It's so bland that it doesn't look like a novel. It's like reading a government document.

Isn't the entire royal family pure waste? A woman named Huang, even if she has the best qualifications in the world, is already perfect at the same age as the protagonist. What else can these people practice?

Both the Virgin and the nanny. It's hard for you. Wearing a dragon robe doesn't look like a prince, a time traveler who can't hold up the wall with mud.

Your books are very strange. I like the ones I like very much, and I really can't stand the ones I can't stand 💔. Sometimes I feel that the main character is very frustrated. I fell in love with the Taoist priest in Jin Yong and watched it several times. At that time, it was relatively normal to treat the heroine, but now it is too much to treat her just for fun. In ancient times, not to mention the royal family, even the landowners took a few. This is for the purpose of reproduction! You see why there were so many children in ancient times. In addition to labor, at critical moments, boys could protect the family when they grew up. The village will bully your family if they see the old, weak, sick or disabled. This is also the reason for the deprivation of the family.

Shennong is here: The author is an ancient author. When I was still in college, I read Jin Yong's "The Taoist Priest". I liked it very much at that time. After so many years, the author's books still have the same bland taste. The writing style is simple and the logic is online. There is no big problem. I will read it when I think about it.

There are too many small points. The protagonist is either high-profile, directly high-profile to low-profile, or else he is low-key and hidden, instead of the feeling of being too high and too low. Moreover, the storyline is inconsistent. A skill that has not been practiced for so many years has been practiced by the protagonist. Moreover, this is a world that advocates martial arts. Even the emperor advocates martial arts. Why don't you even want to meet the protagonist? Moreover, the progression of the plot is too bland, anyone can step on the protagonist, and the author wants to portray the protagonist as a gentle and humble person, but I only saw the feeling of hypocrisy.

This is the first time I read a book that uses a doppelgänger as the protagonist and ignores the protagonist. I gained a lot of experience and admired it.

It's a pity that it's not that exciting. From the beginning to the end, I feel like a loser of a man who is several decades old.

What did you write? It's a mess.

Three golden chapters, there are so many poisonous points, one heir, Kangxi imprisoned the eldest brother Yinzhen for 26 years, during which 11 sons and 9 daughters were born. Yongzheng imprisoned the 9th elder brother Yinzhen for ten years, and gave birth to 11 sons and 6 daughters. These two people participated in the fight for the legitimate son. Hate is not forbidden to choose a concubine. It is outrageous that Prince Ning was just implicated and imprisoned for 30 years. During the period of confinement, he gave birth to two children with no problem with fertility. The protagonist molesting the maid shows that the atmosphere is open. In 30 years, a normal number of offspring can exceed 100. Second, the princess's IQ is impressive. As a housewife, she is still the kind of resentful woman who is not a good wife. She has no city to speak of and does not meet the setting of winning a palace battle in Tianjia. After 30 years, all emotions of winning have been smoothed out. Normally, the only son should be reminded that his status is awkward and he should be careful with his words and actions to avoid being plotted and cut off. 3. In the world of high martial arts, everyone is like a dragon. The streets are full of warriors. The down-and-out prince's palace is full of innates, and there are many masters. The prince of the prince's palace teaches himself martial arts? The prince was imprisoned for 30 years because he was not welcome to practice martial arts. Would he not care about his sole heir? Such a good resource only had 7 floors in the first 19 years, and in the next year it only increased by 20% of the number in Novice Village. Waste among waste! This is still the world of high martial arts. It seems that the author is also a writer from Heaven. Has he regressed or is he too lazy to think about it?

Author, you should write about martial arts in the heavens. Your handwriting is fine, but the martial arts system is not popular. If you go from gold martial arts to Huang Yi's martial arts to heaven and then ascend to Huang Yi's Broken Void Immortal Martial World, it will be easier to write than your original work. Many people will read it, and you will earn more. I haven't been able to read your book, but I always click on your author to see if you have opened a new book. You should open a book twice (you have opened one book for too long, and there are not many persevering authors like you. I feel that you have your own style but are too far away from the readers of martial arts novels)

Why do I feel inferior to Yang Shen? 😢The main character's name and kung fu name are not enough

I still like the Taoist priests in Jin Yong's world

Haven't you noticed that time passes too slowly? I have read more than 400 pictures. I calculated that the time has not passed a year. What do you think, author? Is there any time correlation?

Why don't the practitioners in this book have flying skills? Being able to ascend, live for tens of thousands of years, and have high-end settings such as space gate teleportation, why is it not worthy of flying? !