Myth Begins with the Young Boy’s Art

The author's writing style is very good, but it is too watery. Regardless of the supporting role, he must be introduced from head to toe with the treatment of the protagonist, even if he does not have a role in the next one. Moreover, too many synonyms are used to describe one thing or person, and there are too many ideas that associate one thing with other things. This way, too much content that cannot be prioritized will greatly affect the reading experience. It is tiring to watch.

After reading tens of thousands of words, I can't figure out the protagonist's personality at all. I have no idea what the main character is like. It tastes like chewing wax. Selfish and overbearing? Our Lady of Mercy? An immortal hero? Is it easy to be rich? Muscle violence maniac? Cold and iron-blooded? Martial arts fanatic? The author has too little experience and shallow writing skills. The protagonist has many thoughts and things to do, skills, expressions, and inner monologues. . They are all self-contradictory and illogical.

Water people can't stand it. Practicing martial arts is more difficult than giving birth to a child. You need to be innate at the beginning and you still don't have innate talent now. You can't even advance to level 1. You've been collecting thugs, looking for beautiful women, and plotting to show off your lower IQ. He has a system, an identity, and resources, but he is worse than a dog.

It can be seen that the author does not care much about grades. Otherwise, I wouldn't be writing about the conspiracy of aristocratic families under the cover of Golden Finger's cool novel. No matter how the plot of the battle of wits is written, what do you want the readers who come in to think? The key is that Gaowu World is really putting the cart before the horse when writing these things. After a long battle of wits, a strong man suddenly appears and overturns the table. What do you think we should do? How can I put it, it's like a meat dish, there is only two pieces of meat, and the ingredients are piled high with vegetables. No one will spend money on it, right? If you specialize in vegetables, just order vegetables. What kind of meat should you order? The author's writing style is absolutely passable. Why are the results so low? It doesn't offend the literary youth, and it doesn't have any poisonous or private content to disgust the readers. If you want to achieve good results, you still have to change the plot. Don't mix up the main ingredients and auxiliary materials. Only by keeping the priorities clear is a good work. To put it bluntly, the protagonist holds a golden finger and is willing to fight for power in a stinking quagmire like a big family. Is there something wrong?

The traitor Bai Yangna abandoned the book. This person killed at least seven of the protagonist's men, right? Is a life for a life enough compensation for him? Bai Yang's child is pitiful, but the other seven families are pitiful when they lose their husbands and fathers? I really don't understand where the protagonist's childish thoughts stand? Killing such a person requires a psychological struggle. The seven families I serve for the protagonist are not worth it! Following the protagonist is worse than a dog

I really gave up and kept chasing this book, but it's not ordinary. If you write like this, you won't be able to finish thousands of chapters unless it ends unfinished. A dragon city knows that it is a big threat to itself, but the protagonist just refuses to kill him. He is always afraid of this and that, and does not have the blood of a martial artist, so he resorts to small tricks. Everyone is here to see the martial arts duel, not to see your conspiracy and intrigue. Forget it, the author is not very good at updating, one chapter a day, how many years will it take for me to finish reading your book? I really can't chase you anymore, so I'll say goodbye.

The protagonist's overall IQ is that of an ordinary honest person. Not only is he indecisive, but he is also told how cunning and ruthless he is. It makes me really frustrated to death. It's not like he is not reckless enough because of his IQ. The protagonist is an ordinary person who is both intelligent and bloodless. The author insists on making him appear to be very smart and decisive in killing!

I started reading this book when it only had a few dozen chapters, and then gave up because it was too slow and slow. Now that it is free, I read it again. Sure enough, it still has the same flavor as before. After more than 300 chapters, the main character has finally achieved a breakthrough from a small thing he acquired, to a big one. The key protagonist has become a small thing the day before in the first chapter. I read the dozen or so chapters where the protagonist breaks through the acquired achievements, and there are several chapters that talk about when he will break through the innate. A conservative estimate is that if the author keeps writing like this, it may take five to six hundred chapters. After all, there is still a Dzogchen the day after tomorrow. Alas, I don't know what the author was thinking.

I advise all readers not to read this author's books in the future. They are full of nonsense.

Except for the two early novels, The Hero and The Catcher, the subsequent ones are worse than the last. I hope this one is better and can bring out the author's original skills.