Pirates: I Loaded the Game Board

The writing is pretty good, the settings are pretty good, and there are some flaws. There are no other problems. I hope you won't be fooled. Come on,

If you can be popular, I will eat Xiang. When the time comes, Aite, I will live stream it.

Originally, I was confused when I saw the Superman type, the ghost fruit transformed into the animal type, the human fruit, the phantom beast species, and the god of death form, but now I see that you are the great prophet.

I read a few chapters and felt very confused. I am a professional swordsman, and then I raised a ghost devil fruit that increases intelligence. I spent a lot of skill points to add the physical immunity that comes from eating elemental fruits. I was a little confused. Then I relied on explosion output and then created skills. Just think about it. I think you are just a third-rate person who knows basic swordsmanship. Swordsman, why can you create skills, and you can also add points to TM? It means that you can name the slash and it will be a skill, and then add points, explosions, etc. I won't say anything, but what you add points to add is not ghost creation. Why is it so fancy, and you have already named it? Shouldn't there be a skill like forward slash that can add points? There is also the O'Hara Library, which I stayed in for a few days and then left. It means that these are just a few professions. In fact, these are not bad. The main protagonist's intelligence swordsman and flower skill points are added with a material exemption. It is too confusing. At least the whole system is a hodgepodge. The most annoying thing about playing games is that you are the protagonist. The most enjoyable part of reading this kind of novel is that you are an adult. System and then cross levels to kill people? It's like the Reincarnation Paradise. Professional skill titles are superimposed on each other. Then the protagonist adds strength and physique in the early stage, and intelligence later. The most taboo thing in playing games is half-heartedness because a Devil Fruit changes one's system. It really shouldn't be done. If you decide on a Devil Fruit at the beginning, forget it, and it will suddenly happen halfway. The choice of fantasy is really confusing, and the protagonist has limited energy. It is very confusing to add a swordsman and use the fruit for a while. It is better to use one to the extreme. According to the author's setting, the ghost fruit online should be very high. Using all the resources to pile up devil fruits or swordsmen is a very considerable profit, and writing the game flow is the most exciting. The point is planning. Planning your own future will help you gain opportunities and be one step ahead. However, the author has a small plan but not a general plan, so it is very confusing in the early stage. You don't know what the protagonist is playing, and it is easy to persuade him to give up. The early stage of Super God Mechanic also shows that this system will be very strong, but you You may know how to develop a system that matches your own wishes, but the readers don't know. You have to tell the reason why you eat the ghost fruit and your future bug abilities. Otherwise, you will eat the fruit and add an inexplicable superhuman body, and then create a bunch of skills by yourself, uh... And then eat it. Setting, the forward slash created by third-rate swordsmanship is called a skill and can be added with points. The bombs you create can also be counted as skills. Why can't you add points? Moreover, an assassination ability can be used for head-on confrontation. Looking at the game flow, the most important planning is not included. It depends entirely on random encounters to obtain abilities. , Improve his ability. To be honest, why is he better than the player? The player has a strong ability to obtain information. He was born in Shuangyue Village and which village gained the foundation of swordsmanship. Then he showed his swordsmanship ability with the master and his daughter. Then he joined the navy to learn armed domineering. He learned the ability by gaining favor with swordsmanship masters in the navy and completed the mission. Get points for other swordsmanship abilities by asking around, then find Hawkeye, Shanks can gain the favorability ability, a bunch of swordsmanship abilities plus a Devil Fruit that can enhance the swordsmanship ability. It is no more terrifying than the protagonist online. You must know that players can gain favorability and increase points by adding points. Isn't this better than the Ghost Swordsman?

Chronicle

The ghost fruit is also a failure. It's not that it's not useful, but it's just not handsome. As someone who plays DNF and loves Sword Soul the most, you can't be strong but you can't be handsome. It's really hard to think of something like a ghost as a cool scene. Needless to say, natural fruits come with their own special effects and scenes. Magneto Fruit, just look at the scene and you will know that Magneto is also very handsome. The Piaopiao Fruit will first hit you with an island, the Shock Fruit will shatter the space, and the Gravity Fruit will give you a meteorite at the beginning. Isn't this cool? Looking at the ghost fruit, the gap is too big.

White Ghost

It's amazing. Oda hasn't released the Sun God yet, but here the Moon God has been released more than half a year ahead of schedule.

The player has enough descriptions in the early stage and there is no trace later. Also, it is supposed that the player's immortal alien aunt would be very interested, but the aunt has not collected players at all. She puts the player in the book or marries the player to try to give birth to an immortal child. Author, you shouldn't have written about players in the first place

. . . . . . I accidentally tipped 5,000 starting coins. I originally wanted to give 100, but I didn't pay attention and the system automatically tipped 5,000.

Why the hell does it feel like the Hokage's Hatake is 50/50, and it's 50/50 with everyone else

It's been more than a month since I opened the book, and no one knows the secret. It is agreed that exposure is prohibited.

In the end, he was still a false god of death. The soul fruit was not fused, the Shishi fruit was not found, and Im was not killed? ? ? ?

I recommend everyone to read this Pirates fanfic. From Impel Down to the Multiverse, the author is a tech-savvy fan who has turned into a fanfic. The main character has developed the chain fruit to link genes and taken the tech-savvy route. In it, various clones fight in vests and fight in a comprehensive comic. The author is worthy of being a tech guy. The settings about the origin of the three ancient weapons, the Moon, the Ancient Kingdom, the Celestial Dragons, and the Devil Fruit are really 🐮🍺. I have read at least dozens of One Piece fanfics. Maybe the writing style is not the best, but the various settings are the most complete. It feels like Oda filled in the holes.

Real hammer, the rubber fruit is actually the Renren Fruit, Phantom Beast Species, and Nika Fruit~

What I don't understand the most is why it's not enough to upgrade from 80 to 100 and 101 when it costs tens of billions of experience. It only costs 6 billion to upgrade. Isn't this just an obvious downgrade? Looks disgusting. The most important thing is, why don't you upgrade when you are over 100 levels? There are not many people with a higher level than him. The only ones who do it are to brush it once a year. The big head is obviously to collect the players' wool, and the level is not important.

First of all, regarding the fruit, I forcibly blew the ghost fruit, but the advantages of the blown fruit were not as good as other fruits, and the ability settings were not well written (the author is like a person who has never watched One Piece, and knows a little about everything). There is also a task for players to return 1 million Baileys in life. Regardless of whether it is a closed beta or not, it is difficult for first-time players. You may not know that any pirate with some strength in the future will have a bounty of tens of millions. Other than that, the author couldn't write anything interesting and it was boring.

Ah~~~Drian

Starting from Shanks, I don't want to watch anymore.

Supporting role/player/partner. Specific requirements: 1 name/code name, 2 identity occupation: NPC/player & specific occupation, 3 abilities: Devil Fruit/Haki/Taijutsu/Swordsmanship/? , 4 Activity areas: Four Seas/Paradise/New World/Red Earth Continent, 5 basic character traits, 6 personal experiences (not required) The ones currently confirmed to have been included in the outline are: 1: White Lion Gu Liang, identity: NPC/Fighter/Pirate (slightly modified) 2: Singer: Elizabeth Arden, identity: NPC, Sound Fruit (original: Sonic Fruit, slightly modified) 3: ID Golden Spirit, identity: independent master player/superhuman type·Blood Fruit (original: vampire fruit, slightly modified) 4: ID Mizore, identity: casual player Very interesting, not yet determined, I don't know how to insert it into the plot, there are: 1: Keti, identity: chef 2:? ? , Lucky fruit ability user 3:? ? , Bandage fruit ability user, the name needs to be changed (and I don't know why this post has been blocked, I can't see the specific information) 4: ID Maruya, the post is missing... Important reminder: 1: If you sign up as a player, don't expect to be able to What good fruits are there, especially when I actually saw more than one mention of player + fantasy beast species... And once the player dies, the devil fruit will definitely drop. You can imagine his/her fate Important reminder: the player's appearance rate will not be very high, and there will not be much interaction with the protagonist. One more reminder, although the player ID can be taken at will, the NPC will also be aware of the problems. Of course, this is a matter of opinion. If you are willing to give a Western name, you can give a Western name, if you are willing to give a network name, you can give a network name, if you are willing to give a Chinese name... It's too funny. "D", "Roger", "Monkey" and other words with obvious identity characteristics are prohibited from appearing in the ID! ! ! 2: Don't act like I'm begging you, just sign up properly, just throw in an ID or name, and then say "anything else", why don't you just write a book yourself? 3: It's not impossible to have animals and fantasy beasts, but you can't have some mythical beasts with Chinese characteristics... You can have blue dragons and nine-tailed foxes, after all, they have been drawn by Oda; You can have white tigers, Yamato-chan Mom has some clues, after all, she has white fur + beast fangs + beast daddy (although I personally prefer her to be the Renren Fruit·Phantom Beast Species·[Ghost/Prajna] form) Other special mythical beasts are left out, but the foreign mythical beasts are okay. As for [Bat Fruit·Phantom Beast Species·Vampire], don't even think about it. Redfield himself has to rely on Robin to read the ancient text to obtain the Devil Fruit, so how can anyone else get it? Above. No. 6.20, Chapter 60, Moria died and the Shadow Fruit was vacated.

Congratulations to EDG

? ? ? Why I ordered it five times.

I looked at the ending and the extra ending and realized something was wrong. . . It's really the second time in so many years that I've encountered an operation that's finished but not finished ()

Is this a harem? When I see the Kingdom of Flowers, I always feel like the female characters in the original novel have to wag their tails to make their presence felt.

Chapter 40 extra? ? ? Well... It's over, but not completely over...

Final Thoughts A good fanfic. Imitate the routine of a ejaculation master. The problem is that it is impossible for a fan to constantly open new maps like the Mecha Master, because the world view of the Pirate World has already expanded, causing the player's level to be completely unable to keep up with the protagonist, and the player will basically disappear in the later stage. Overall, there are no obvious poisonous points. In the early stage, I quickly achieved the "pseudo-invincible" state with the help of the game panel, and there was no plot to suffer any loss. Later on, he also grew up from a "pseudo-invincible" who was 50-50 equal to everyone, to a true invincible. But I don't know why there are no sexy comments.

That's all, don't dislike it!

I've had it for almost a month and it's really cool to watch it once.

There are not 150 people fully booked yet. I feel a bit miserable. It looks pretty good, so there is no big problem.

The protagonist's tolerance for the navy is too high. After several failed attempts to capture him, the protagonist did not kill a single marine.