Who Made Him the Pirate King?

I have seen the latest chapter, let me briefly share my thoughts Advantages: It is very detailed, or very sophisticated, and is different from most of the unfinished original works. Whether it is the division of strength, character setting, fruit development, characters and event background, it respects the original work more, and details every private setting and guess. In the test, relatively reasonable "evidence" was given The character design is good. The protagonist does not set an overly cold or funny personality for the sake of "distinct characters". Overall, he is not a good person, but he has principles. The original characters have certain extensions and changes, but there is no obvious OOC situation. I understand that whether it is the view of the Revolutionary Army or the Navy, there are relatively sharp comments on the descriptions of some events and characters that are obviously problematic in the original work but are covered up with passion, for example, "Have the Revolutionary Army changed their feathers?" Disadvantages: The clone vest can add fun, but the significance of its existence lies in the reaction of everyone after not pretending and the feeling of pleasure at that moment. The common way of writing the vest flow is to discover the "truth" one by one, which can be exciting in stages and suppress a big one at the same time. The biggest fear is holding it in for too long. Every time I feel like I'm about to explode. It's very uncomfortable to not be able to get over the emotion. Especially if you repeat it too many times, it will become boring. You won't feel anything until the real climax comes. Although the rhythm control in this area is not serious so far, the author obviously has no intention of changing it. At least so far, the value of the non-vest "crew" is not high. The casting is indeed not very evil and has development potential. However, it is difficult to write a novel as a group portrait. Moreover, the combat power has been upgraded to the present. The other crew members are still at the level of three- and four-star novice villages. When they develop, they will be invincible and useless. At least for the current purpose of recruiting crew members, apart from becoming a "big ship group" and the number of water characters, I have not seen any actual value. The battle scenes are averagely written. To be honest, the visuals are not strong, but this is a problem of writing skills. I am just a bad reader, and I don't know how to make it better. Finally, there is the issue of combat power, which is also a common problem in pirate novels. If the game is too high, it will end too quickly, and the combat power will obviously be stronger. The character will be as stupid as if he has no brain, but if he does not strengthen the boss, he will be said to be disrespectful of the original work. Especially in the setting of Devil Fruit, there are always readers looking at it and thinking of a way to develop abilities that is incredible. Even if the author sees it, he cannot use it. After all, the character will basically be invincible and end on the spot. At least so far, I have not seen any fan fiction that can solve this "common problem", so generally writing according to the original outline and ideas is the best way.

Raise the soul fruit to 8 stars and steal the soul from Auntie's corpse.

In terms of storyline alone, it is the best of all the pirate fanfics I have read.

Proof, let Yixiao deal with Kaido. Let the protagonist deal with the aunt. Kill Big Mom quickly. Go catch Kaido again

Doppelganger vest text. The official chapter begins to play with the clone vest.

It all depends on how high the moral level of the protagonist is. Jesus abandoned his wife and son without any conflict and killed him directly. Usopp and his mother didn't blame him, but you did a good job. Please use this moral level to treat everyone. The navy's top brass must kill at least nine out of ten. You'd better not be soft-hearted when facing the three generals of the Warring States Period, Garp.

The supporting characters are almost all robots from the protagonist. Others will believe whatever the protagonist says. It's really too boring to watch. You can consider that he has been poisoned and died and retreated.

I couldn't stand watching Kidd being killed, especially since the author also said that Kidd hasn't committed any crime yet, so he won't kill him. . . Can you create something that regularly kills civilians, and now it's so harmless? He was so harmless to humans and animals, and then after going to sea, he began to massacre civilians on a large scale. Do you believe it? This must be a split personality. This is as magical as a monkey suddenly jumping out of a tree and building an aircraft carrier in two years. This kind of person likes to kill the weak. See if he fights the red hair in the future, instead of hitting the red hair with his ultimate move, he will go to hit the old, weak, sick and disabled under the red hair. . . . . Whoever is a strong person with a little ability does this, he just likes to do it, and he is very happy. You say he is harmless now, do you believe it? Now 2 years from the timeline, Kidd has already gained a reputation. Kidd himself has a domineering look. Even Kaido is not convinced. You can accept him if you ask him to accept him. It's not easy to accept Kidd, which is why there is such a big controversy.

Don't think about suppressing your combat power once you have enabled the plug-in. It has already been raised. If you suppress it any further, it will only show that there is something wrong with your IQ.

The writing of this book is not bad, but the plot is too bad. The protagonist wears a vest from time to time, and then explodes the vest from time to time. If it weren't for the Devil Fruit, it would be common sense to only eat one. The protagonist has been hunted by the whole world for a long time. The protagonist doesn't have any of the three ancient weapons, so he dares to take it. The war, and then the self-destructing vest on top of the war, I am really not afraid that the world government will pay a big price to give you a King of Heaven. The protagonist is really floating, especially in the entire book of Sakaski. He has never appeared except for talking about it. There is no Sakaski in the time and space where the protagonist is, right?

It's too much. Just write it well. It's full of resentment like a resentful woman. What kind of rubbish is it? I just keep worrying about Nikanika. I'm already writing and I understand that the characters are only for plot service. I'm still complaining like a resentful woman. Disgusting Lese

Needless to say, the author's level of updating is really amazing.

It's too watery, I don't want to subscribe anymore, it feels like I'm spending money to make myself sick🙄

What use are the few points I feel bad about to others? The protagonist is both a father and a mother. The protagonist also has an awkward personality. He can't stand those rotten people and the rotten world, and he doesn't do anything (if he has the ability). He just acts to make himself stronger, but he also likes to criticize others from the moral high ground and leave an explanation for his own behavior.

It's boring. He has no conflict of interest with the protagonist and just kills him. I thought that in the pirate world, red-haired people don't kill civilians. It's much better than some pirates. I used to watch Rayleigh and torture red-haired people and it was interesting. Later, I watched more killing Rayleigh and Straw Hats and tortured the red group for no reason. It was really boring. If you have the ability to do the world government yourself, there is no pattern at all.

The title of the book was too confusing and I almost missed a good book.

Damn, I ran away. What the hell is written next? I'll go. You can reduce the damage and slow down the protagonist's progress, but you can't make the protagonist brainless. I'll go! God damn, here are a few more rings. Chapter 26 is under the general, and the title and introduction are clearly written in the direction of developing figures. They should be getting more and more complex, and even come out later, and they will be stupid. But this second-rate author actually started to level up. The key is that your template itself is more suitable for invincible writing. Come on, shouldn't you increase the level and then start creating two-dimensional characters based on the characteristics of trophy draws?

Don't be stupid. The World Government knows the details of Xiong very well. It trades with Xiong because his physique is suitable for being a template for human transformation. Whether it is becoming a Shichibukai or treating Poni, it is based on the elimination of Xiong's thinking. This is what the Five Old Stars value about Xiong. The Shichibukai cannot be replaced by whoever defeats them. Those who do not meet the requirements of the World Government will be forcibly erased. Another result

The protagonist can obviously push through alone, but he travels thousands of miles to help Rona, Mei Kid, Robin, Big Bear, and Ace to become a crew member. I cried to death. He also cooperates with Hawkeye Moriah, a sand crocodile who is 10,000 times weaker than himself and still feels that he is powerful all day long. When the protagonist opens the clone vest, he looks like he is going to single-handedly kill the five old star Im. In the end, his teammates are just like vases and the role of 666.

In SB novels, the identity must be revealed but not exposed. Things that should be solved in a few chapters have to be delayed. It has been hundreds of chapters and the identity has not been exposed. I made a lot of vests and found a few oil bottles as crew members. How fun is the word count? If you don't know how to write, stop writing and stop it. Fortunately, it's free of charge. Everyone, please read it for free. Spending money to read this kind of thing will really make people's blood pressure high. This author is really the King of Pirates.

Just a few chapters into it, the protagonist got a ring that can absorb unlimited devil fruits (not afraid of the sea). To be honest, when I read novels, especially fan fiction, I really don't like this kind of golden finger that overrides the setting of the original work. Breaking the settings of the original work will generally break the original ecology at the same time.

True ink takes effort to open the ring. According to this logic, you have to spend a lot of experience to open the ring and then upgrade the ring. Collect fruits. Upgrade the fruits again and again, 4 or 5+. Experiments to extract various garbage fruits to do experiments will slow down the progress. You have to find a doctor to paddle. Oh my god~ Nine-Tails Fruit, extract three waste fruits, and make a whole chapter of Enero. The second chapter also explains that the reason behind the meaninglessness of water everywhere is the flaw of the setting Limited to a maximum of 3 rings, uniqueness, true, fake, fake, upgrading experience step-by-step upgrading realm multiples. One main character and two auxiliary characters, nature, animal, and superman. According to the characteristics of the plug-in, it should be Neptune. Because the plug-in is not affected by the sea water and cannot win, I drag him into the sea. You failed to set up the experience requirement for upgrading the protagonist. It's too low. It's a no-brainer and all the points are filled up. There's no way to level up. I'm afraid the leveling up is too fast. Modern people may not be able to awaken Nika after getting the rubber fruit. But modern people must be stronger and upgrade faster than the protagonist when they get your hook, instead of being a headless fly who wholesales rings and collects fruits. A person can make flowers out of just one piece of fruit, but you can make water out of so many fruits. One ring can still be seen, and two rings are filled with water... The final result is also a success. You don't know how the protagonist's mentality in the later stage can be overbearing. He looks down on Lao Sha but doesn't know that you are not as good as Lao Sha. Especially the so-called White Dragon title. I know that the protagonist of this book cannot do without playing in the mud. The end is not that I don't like it, but if you have tools and don't know how to use them, you have to play with the most expensive ones... Summary: When your ring can be copied and upgraded, and the upgrade experience is still very low, it is already destined to be a Long Aotian plot. Eat a fast food and enjoy it, don't get drunk any more

Although I've finished reading it, I still have a common problem among Pirates fans. It's all about fighting monsters and leveling up. Pirates is a hot-blooded comic. Your whole system has to fight monsters every day to upgrade your data. There is no sense of passion at all. If you want to fight wits, write a wit-fighting manga. The protagonist is as calm as an ice cube. In the same way, the enemy is also pure stupidity There is no evenly matched battle, the heroism of the sea man is invisible, and even the growth of the character's character cannot be found. Don't write about Pirates, you write about Conan, even Xingyue will do.

Two updates a day, for who to read? It seems like we look down on it. 🤓 Let me tell you the number, 20 updates a day, who is in favor and who is against?

How to say it? Obviously one person can penetrate it, but we have to recruit a group of people to look after the house. I didn't even know that recruiting those people has a hammer.

It's so speechless at the end, everyone will be accepted, right? And the combat power will be maxed out with just 100 chapters.

Didn't I say there was a new book before? Is there a book?

There are so many vests with so many abilities. If you develop your clay fruits well, I can still watch. There is no point in having so many fancy multi-abilities.

Xiao Haibing publicly insulted the Tianlong people...

The plot suits my taste, but it's a pity that I can't find a female protagonist