Immortality

I found the early and later stages of the masterpiece a bit boring. The author wanted to forcefully introduce various settings. Revolution? Republic of China? What a novel about cultivating immortality. Now it is written in the style of a spy in the Republic of China. I want to read a book about the revolution of the Republic of China. Why don't I just search for it. A world where great power belongs to oneself. What I want to see is cultivating immortals. I see that the focus behind is all about advocating ideas and letting the people stand up and make the decision. It's not that there is anything wrong with this idea being bad, it's very good and right! But I came in because of the early cultivation of immortality. This is not what I want to read. The book is too complicated at the end. I hope the author can think carefully about it. This is just a book! How much content do you want to write in it? Cultivation? Revolution? Republic of China spy? Not to mention how I read it, didn't the author find it difficult to write when he was writing it? And now that there is a revolution, the biggest threat to this book is the evil alien god. Are the evil alien gods still appearing now? The sect bosses are all outside the territory, so half of your revolution is complete. The sect boss, the evil god from outside the territory, will appear at that time, which is even harder to write. Besides, what is the use of your revolution now? The evil gods and demons are outside the territory, and the strongest group of people are also outside the territory to stop the evil gods. I think what the main character here is currently thinking about is that the road to revolution has a long way to go. It will take hundreds and thousands of years to achieve revolution. It is better to practice hard and rewrite the rules. After all, the root of the ugliness in this world is too high. The price of cultivation is too high. The demons and evil spirits from outside the territory cannot be cured by the revolution. Personally, I feel that the writing style of the book is very good, and the content alone is very good. When combined together, it feels average. I hope the author will work hard.

I haven't watched it for a while. I thought Yang Sui Shouyi was the beginning of the climax, but I didn't expect it to be a long tug-of-war. Being a disciple of Lingbao Sect should be a process of qualitative change, but unfortunately it is basically not reflected. This means that the feeling of powerlessness caused by the low strength of the pawns in the early stage is lost, and the sense of thrill is lost, but the protagonist is still a pawn. Over two hundred chapters, the world situation has basically remained unchanged. I think this is because the author has voluntarily given up his greatest advantage, his control of the overall situation. The protagonist is the core disciple of the powerful force, and generally speaking, he is the leader of the younger generation. However, the image of the protagonist who does not dare to show his face and only changes his waistcoat when trouble occurs is too cliché, and it also gives the author the freedom to cut off his own maneuvering space. The protagonist's reputation is at its peak, and there are powerful forces behind him. To put it simply, the trend is mine. If I don't take advantage of such a huge advantage, although there are always people trying to catch me, this is not a reason. In this part recently, the protagonist has done a lot of things, but figuratively speaking, he has finished the jungle area, stolen a few dragons, and the economy is so high, but without the idea of ​​building a tower, the protagonist is already the most C, and he is still waiting for others to C. It seems that the protagonist's actions now have no purpose, or are too general, and there is no clear path. He even has few ideas for exploration. He still doesn't know who to wait for to take him. I could have been a chess player, but I just wanted to be a chess piece. I think the problem is 1. The protagonist is obviously not a lone wolf, but he is completely written as a loner. The presence of Lingbao Sect is too low. The protagonist's basic profile is here, and the concept of power is not written at all. Lingbao Sect must fight for it, otherwise where would the resources and talent come from? Where is his layout? In terms of emotion and reason, it should have big actions, but why didn't it show any movement at all? 2. The protagonist is a complete headless fly. Just follow the enemy's rhythm. They have been making plans. How about you? If you want to save people, do you want to recreate the restrictions or do you want to know how your golden finger works and whether it can be copied? Why does the protagonist have no idea? According to what he wrote, the protagonist can already conclude that low-level mutations are a problem with the fundamental law. Why doesn't he try to prevent low-level mutations? The highlights of this part should be the combination of vertical and horizontal lines, drastic changes in the world situation, drastic reforms, and fierce friction between forces. Why did I watch the protagonist for a long time to clear the jungle. The sect has returned a long time ago. It should have been written from the perspective of ordinary people. Its reputation is at its peak. It has long been able to take advantage of the situation to raise its arms. It has long been able to pay attention to the most basic ordinary people. It has long been possible to advance the plot.

Why are you always living in the world? I just want to watch Cultivation, even on a daily basis. . . It's boring to be a worldly person all the time.

If this book is not popular, what book can be popular🔥?

Wouldn't it be better if you just called the book's title Immortality to Differentness? The extra words are really superfluous, and it suddenly becomes cliché. The top ones have such long names, and they are not news headlines. It's a pity. The score should have been as good as before. If I hadn't been short of books, I read it again and couldn't find that it was a good book.

Author, can you change the way you write the dialogue between the characters? Whether it is to throw out clues or introduce the background, can you write it like a normal conversation? Don't be so stiff as if you are talking to the reader. I've seen this conversation too many times, it's very funny

I haven't seen such a good book in a long time. The description of the troubled times is so accurate, especially the latest Gao family, the Northern Qi Dynasty in history, which makes people hate it. It is a refreshing article, and it can be pleasant to the body and mind.

It's very beautiful and fits the scene of cultivating immortality in my mind. It's just that Fat Fish seems to be in poor health. He needs to take good care of his body, go to bed early, and then give me an update. Of course, the quality must also be improved. Will always support.

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. This book is strange and strange. A picture of all living beings slowly unfolds. The content is broad. Thank you Zhenyu. This is my first time subscribing in the official version, just to support you.

I'm afraid the author's update speed is not a eunuch.

The writing is so beautiful, I like it so much, but the update speed is too slow. I screamed while waiting, brother, can you speed up the update speed so that we can enjoy reading it? Come on, 😴

Damn it, awesome 6666666

There are too many things mixed in, and it is difficult to blend them together smoothly. It really tests the author's grasp of the structure. I write slowly, hoping not to collapse. It feels like it is not as delicate as the previous stage. Although I wanted to watch it quickly, haste makes waste.

All living beings are different, but I am the only one.

For the sake of struggle, for nourishment, for the Tao No need to be carefree Being greedy, angry and foolish Looking for great freedom Nothing but brain-intestinal flow At the beginning of the ancient times, chaos should be unleashed Demons and ghosts, indescribable Fire sacrifices are lit, and the first people pass away In the ancient world, the dining table of stars Should it be like this? The first fire never ceases Asking about one's destiny, one can feel the truth One heart and one liver, transformed into supernatural powers Like a demon, just for life br>Pay the price, get immortality Hoot about the ancestors, sacrifice to ghosts Leave blessings for the ancestors Thousands of years of karma, the alchemist's cancer The lifeless son, know the ancient scriptures Escape from death, acquire supernatural powers According to the life of the world, Lingbaozi (The cat meows too much, I will write it later)

I have been reading pirated martial arts novels since junior high school in 2004. This is the first time I paid for a book to read the original version! Come on, author!

A very good book, not brainless or pretentious

Very good, very good. Compared with the author's previous book, the thinking and writing skills are improved. Come on, come on, be optimistic about this book.

I have nothing to say in the extra chapter. The author knows very well, hehe.

Can Zhenren Xiao be made one of the heroines? dinersaiyyds

This book was finished when the author started to restrict the protagonist's cheating. Unfortunately, it was expected to open a small door in the weird genre, but it was directly reduced to an ordinary fairy tale.

It's a pity that this book, with its well-written ideas, is definitely better than the Weird Immortal. Immortal Fish Art, Hundred Bird Art and other methods of cultivating immortals are so eye-catching that they should not be written about saving the world. They have already saved Nanyue, but they are also going to save some demonic city. Wouldn't it be better to write more about the sect? Or maybe you shouldn't join such a strong sect. There is no sense of urgency in the early stage. If you join a medium sect, you will encounter all kinds of weird things in the sect. The master will soon become weird, and the sect will cease to exist due to the catastrophe. Anyway, this type of subject matter should not have a place like a safe zone. This is really well written by Weird Fairy

Looking for similar books. As long as everyone contributes a book, the world will be a beautiful world. The starting point is now a trash can. Treasure hunting is not easy. Share with each other.

It's such a pity that this book was a rare masterpiece in recent years. After the break, I continued to follow it for a while. However, after reading dozens of chapters, I found that the standard had dropped significantly and the writing was messy. I stopped reading it after that. It's such a pity. I hope I can read it next time.

This book is such a shame. The World of Immortality is so well written. The struggle to survive when human dignity is trampled is powerful, epic, and connotative. After the results, the author himself abolished the good situation. First, it was the time cycle. The situation that Tao Qian had so difficult to create, the immortal world was stable and prosperous, but it lasted for three years. Three breaths or one breath appear many times in the article. Is this time enough to fart? The second is calculation. So many big guys are calculating and calculating. For example, Tao Qian destroyed the alchemist and finally said Duobao had already calculated it. Then I want to say, you have already calculated it. Why did you go there in the early stage? The third is human-animal hybrid. Senior sister Xie Lingji is so good. The other female protagonists are also good. The result is later stage. It had to be perverted. A cat came from nowhere. It was originally a supporting role, but it turned out that it had to be written as the heroine, and it had a huge background. It was so disgusting. The fourth was combat power. Originally, according to realm, Tao Qian was crushed by his peers, but in the end, he had to fight across a big realm, even with a junior level. The enemy had to be a perfect level, and all kinds of masters were behind him to protect him, so what kind of fight was there? The fifth is Taoism. The Tao body can be basically immune to external infections, but later it became useless for some reason, and it is basically the same as the ordinary Tao body. The same is true for Taoism. If you change the name, it will be more powerful, but if you use the original name, it will not work. It is useless to practice.

It's tasteless, but it's a pity to abandon it. After reading about 100 chapters, I started high and started low. After Lingbaozong, the pace slowed down again and I liked to write vulgar things. The author really wants to write a sex scene every two chapters. Every time I meet a woman, I write about her ambiguity, but I can't fall in love with her. Is the author a eunuch?

Thinking that the savior is really a talent, this style has long ceased to be popular, and it looks like a virgin. The more you watch it, the more boring it becomes. After reading this volume of Magic City, you can say goodbye, and the hole in the fairy fish volume has been filled.

It was very good in the early stage, but it went downhill after leaving Zongmen and then got worse and worse. The author did not grasp the balance between Cthulhu and Xiuxian. Because there is a natural conflict between the Ke system and the hierarchical cultivators. There is too much emphasis on levels. The attractive feature of the Ke series is the unknowable and indescribable sense of fear. This aspect of Taoism is handled very well. The big boss in it does not have very personal characteristics. It just has that vague feeling, so the author insists on assigning levels. There is also the bad-to-bad master Duobao. The author insists on creating a feeling of grasping the overall situation and everything is planned? What do you want to do if there is such a dick thing in a Christian novel? (I saw Catwoman was pregnant and went to get the Black Lotus and then stopped watching.

Now that I see it, I feel that this book is a pity. The setting is very good and has the potential to become a god book, and the author's writing style is also above average. As long as the plot is better written, this will be a solid masterpiece. But when I see the protagonist now, I feel like a middle-aged young man who can't figure himself out. The protagonist's biggest golden finger is his own special soul, which can exempt him from part of the cost. The protagonist worships the Lingbao Sect, obtains the Lingbao Taoist body, and is exempted from a considerable part of the price required for practice. There is also Mr. Yuan from the Secret Demon Sect as his teacher. He possesses two supreme sects and possesses countless techniques and secret techniques. As long as you practice with peace of mind, immortality is within your reach. Even if you want to change the world, it will be much easier. But the author wants to write a protagonist who is as witty as a demon. Let the protagonist change the world with his own ingenuity. It can only be said that the idea is good, but it has not been written down. The author cannot describe how a tactful person thinks. You can only rely on background settings to forcibly reduce the enemy's intelligence. There are millions of words, and I can count the scenes where the protagonist fights head-on on both hands. It's a good story about a protagonist who can rely on his golden finger to practice hard, become a strong man in the world, and save the mortals in the world. But the protagonist is overestimating his abilities, but he is also full of passion. If you can't do it yourself, you can only trick the people around you. In reality, people like this are avoided. So the main character is very unlikable now. I hope the author can finish this book. I also hope this book can bottom out. This is purely a personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

It is necessary to increase the concentration of Ke system. The essence of Ke system cultivation should be how to use various tricks to avoid transfer costs. The principles need to be written down in detail. It's not just about using a certain secret method to reduce the cost and achieve a magical skill that has improved a few realms. This will only lead to mediocrity. And because the protagonist has a different soul, he can not only be exempted from the cost, but also automatically know the specific price. So how do other ordinary people know the cost of practice and avoid it? Is it simply relying on human life or some eye-catching ingenuity? This is actually very interesting and can be expanded upon. The protagonist has met many practitioners along the way, some of whom are erroneous and alienated, and some are normal. However, the protagonist's understanding of them is only superficial. In fact, he has no idea how they practice. I hope the author will add some content on these aspects. I personally think that the most enjoyable part of cultivating immortality is not to improve your realm, but how to practice.