Lord of Immortals

The reason why I was persuaded to quit by Lao Yu From the beginning of Secret Witch to Immortality to the current Strange Immortal, I have been pursuing each book for a long time, but I have put them all away. Lao Yu's writing is actually good, and he is sincere, but this update is too overwhelming, especially in the middle and late stages of the book, the amount of updates is so large that it is impossible to keep up. Keep it up. If you keep it up, you'll lose interest, and eventually you'll let it go 😫

This book writes that the world is full of demons and cannibals. Such a way to eat. There is no one else.

Chapter 10: Can you get such detailed information by eavesdropping on a couple's conversation? No one in the trial even gossiped about their parents in such detail

It's too watery and not friendly to the audience 😡. I was upset when I heard it. There were too many personal dramas for the main character in the plot. The language was straightforward and watery. You may not feel it when you read it, but you felt uncomfortable when you listened to it. By Chapter 9, I couldn't stand it. It was really watery! There is nothing wrong with the plot, but there are too many psychological details of the protagonist, and there are also plots where you knowingly ask questions and deliberately forgetting, which is really bad! I can't stand it! Poison for listeners! 😡

The subject matter is very good, the ideas and world view are also correct, and the writing style is really flawless. The only pity is that it was a little too fanciful in the later stages and was cut in half. If it could be developed into a complete book, I believe it would be very popular.

The problem I personally feel now that this book is better than the previous one is that the main line of development of one of his stories is not clear enough. There is no theme that can promote the development of the story very well, but the world view has been laid out and Ge Xian quickly upgraded to a cave equivalent to the previous book. But I don't have a very impressive plot. I was deeply impressed when the immortal Tao Qian fought against the fisherman, the beautiful corpse, and overcame the three disasters of Lingbao. He killed the demon king in Xiangrouji, then escaped the second disaster, and finally pacified a province. I deeply feel that he has a chivalrous spirit and can become the true king of evil. In the early and mid-term, I think one of his goals is to save ordinary people in the immortal world and restart the enchantment of the immortal dynasty, which promotes the development of the story. Comparatively speaking, Ge Xian is more unruly and cynical like Tao Mozi in the previous book, but combined with his talent for charm, I feel that the description is slightly insufficient. I don't know if the author wants to quickly enter the shaping of the world view in the later part of the last book. I always feel that I don't know what one of Ge Xian's inner needs is, to live a simple happy life. (Maybe he said it but I didn't read it carefully.) I don't know how to put it, but I feel like Ge Xian is like a rootless duckweed.

My favorite is Lord of the Secret Witch. I watched Immortality for about 100 weeks and can no longer stand it.

Rat: Twenty-eight constellations, virtual sun rat, barbarian, containing birds, eared rat, , treasure-spitting rat, golden-nosed white-haired rat. Cattle categories: Twenty-eight constellations of cattle, Taurus (no doubt, that's the name.), Xian, five-color sacred cattle, Biatie, Fei, Kui Niu, Kui Niu, flat-horned green cattle "Si", white cattle (ox demon king), prison cattle (bull head and snake body). Tiger: Twenty-eight stars, tail fire tiger, white tiger, Bifan, Lu Wu, Qiongqi (tiger with wings), black tiger of Xuantan, Zouyu, Tianwu, Pixiu, Qiangliang (tiger head and body). Rabbit: Twenty-eight stars in the room: rabbit, black beast, jade rabbit, Shesheka (purple rabbit), phoenix to support the king, and armadillo. Dragon types: Twenty-eight stars: Kangjin Dragon, Qinglong, Yinglong (Yellow Dragon), Panlong, Red Dragon, Black Dragon, White Dragon, Chilong, and Candle Dragon. Snakes: Twenty-eight-star horned snake, soaring snake, hooked snake, Ba snake, transformed snake, Xiangliu, singing snake, Xiu snake, fat snake, adder, nine infants, tiger dragon, black snake.

Horse Category: Twenty-Eight Stars and Sun Horse, Yingzhao, Pit, Horse Body and Dragon Head God, Jianma, Fan Shan, Xiehu, Shehu, Tianma, Zishu, Lushu, White Dragon Horse. Sheep categories: twenty-eight constellations, ghosts, golden sheep, Sheep, Sheep, Sheep body and human face, Haechi. Monkeys: Twenty-Eight Constellations Water Monkey, Fire Monkey, Unbranched Qi, Lingming Stone Monkey, Red-necked Horse Monkey, Cobra Monkey, Six-eared Macaque, Jufu, Yu Tamarin, Zhu Yan, Macaque, Monkey, Changyou, "Terrorous Upright Ape"😋. Chickens: Twenty-Eight Constellations Pleiades Chicken, Taodu Tian Chicken, Fusang Jade Chicken, Baoji God Chen Bao, Far Flying Chicken, Minnow, Ou Zuo, Fu Cuo, Qi Qu, Nine-Headed Pheasant, Chongming Bird. Dogs: Twenty-Eight Constellations Lou Jin Dog, Huan Dog, Howling Sky Dog, Shanhui (jun, I can't type this word.), Listening, Jian, Panhu, Fudou, Tiangu, Nine-eared Dog, Mastiff Daili. Pigs: Twenty-Eight Constellation Room Fire Pig, Dangkang, Bingfeng, Cunning Man, Li Li, Meng Huai, Flying Pig, Golden Eyed Black Pig (Zhu Bajie), Red Eyed Pig Demon, Fengxi, Pig Dragon (Pig Body and Dragon Head Anlu Mountain), Smell the Bulldog, Centipede, and Indestructible Beast.

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When can we return to the world view of Lord of Secret Witches? I've been waiting for two copies! Isn't it just that I was hit by the secrets of the same period? It's better than writing these two rubbish books 😐

Do women in this world have a litter of eight? Even if there are so many monsters in a small county, those monsters eat people so frequently. If women don't have a litter of eight, I can't imagine how many humans can survive.

The background set in the novel is too gloomy. If the devil is so rampant, how many living people can there be? A country with a population of tens of millions is home to hundreds of thousands of man-eating monsters.

There is a monk named Xingyun in Jingxing Temple, who is the leader of the monks in the temple. In the early autumn of one year, the temple was preparing for the Bon Festival. Everyone was cleaning the temple halls to prepare for Buddhist services. Monk Xingyun saw a wax sculpture of a very beautiful "reborn" woman in front of a Buddha. She was holding a lotus in her hand, as if she was flirting with people. Monk Xingyun joked with his family, "If there is any woman in the world as beautiful as her, I will marry her." When I returned to the temple to sleep at night, I suddenly heard someone knocking on the door at night and saying, "The Lotus Lady is here!" Before Monk Xingyun could remember what he was joking about during the day, he said, "The official regulations are very strict. Now the temple door is closed, Madam. What are you doing here?" When I opened the door, I saw Lady Lotus with a maid, who looked like a fairy and was extremely beautiful. She said to Xingyun, "My boundless fate has enabled me to serve the Great Perfect Wisdom Buddha in person. Unexpectedly, hearing your words today made me think of the world. Now that I have been demoted to the human world, I am willing to make a bed for you and get married. , Have you forgotten it now?" Monk Xingyun said hurriedly, "Although I am ignorant by nature, I always remember the Buddhist precepts. I never know you, why do you say these lies?" The Lotus Lady said, "You saw me in the Buddhist hall this morning and told people that if there is a woman who looks like me, you will marry me. I still feel this. It's your sincerity that makes me sincerely surrender to you." He took out the metamorphosis statue from his sleeve and said, "Look, am I lying to you?" At this time, although Xingyun was suspicious and scared, he was fascinated by the woman's appearance and said to Lianhua very happily, "I will give it all! However, the monks and laws in the temple do not allow it, so you can't live in the temple for a long time." Lianhua laughed and said, "I am a fairy, who can mortals find me? Don't worry, I will never hurt you." So the two talked cordially, Lianhua was affectionate, and her words were soft and affectionate. After a while, she blew out the candle. At this time, there were some children outside the window, who had been eavesdropping. After a while, I suddenly heard monk Xingyun shouting. It sounded very painful. People outside quickly brought lights to look after it. However, the door was bolted on the inside and could not enter the house. I could only hear the sound of wild beasts tearing flesh and gnawing bones from inside the house, and I also heard a man with a foreign accent yelling. Said: "You are a bald monk, you let people shave their heads and become a monk, and you dare to have evil thoughts. If I were really a woman, I would not marry a bald donkey like you!" The people outside quickly told the monks in the temple, and after tearing down the wall, they saw two yakshas with hair standing straight and teeth like saws, and they ran away roaring and jumping. Later, some monks saw two yakshas in the mural on the wall of the Buddha's throne. They were the same two they saw just now, and there were still blood marks on their mouths from eating the karma aggregates. Inspiration materials for Big Head Fish

How to put it, you can write about the human race, you can also want the protagonist to become stronger, but why do you have to give the protagonist a reason to take away human beings to help the world? Doesn't cultivating immortality rely on fighting? What you get is your creation. What I can snatch away and strengthen myself is my ability. It is good to clearly write a protagonist who knows what he has done and does not make excuses for what he does. He has a clear mind. It must be interspersed with humanistic care. Hundreds of thousands of people are polluted and others let you purify. How do you think about fighting for your own interests first? You go to seize other people's flesh and blood treasures but use them to eat too many people. I can't bear to use them as a cover to find an excuse for myself? Don't you think it's too much of a double standard? Could it be that you are also entangled in blue and silver? The whole character design is a mess. The protagonist is completely a treacherous egoist. It's okay for you to write it like this. There are many more articles on Qidian. Com than this treacherous, despicable and egoistic male protagonist, but your double standard of pretending and refusing to admit that you still set up a memorial memorial really disgusts me. There is a long way to go, so take care of yourself

The idea is good, but why the author wrote a protagonist is strange. The ideal is too lofty. In an era when it is difficult for people to live, to have such high ideals, to be honest, is difficult even for time travellers.

Originally, the background of this world is very cruel. I know that the protagonist wants to talk about humanity, but the prerequisite for talking about humanity is that you must be strong enough. While criticizing the practitioners of this world and talking about humanity, you are practicing the magic of this world. It is true that you are famous and double-standard. You are obviously a noob, what kind of literary youth disease is it?

The opening chapter of "Eternal Life" is really amazing. The Secret Witch is a bit white, has many loopholes, the writing is obviously poor, and the character design of a weak high school student is not likeable!

Ordinary people in this world must be like wild monsters. They will automatically refresh themselves when the time comes. Otherwise, how would there be so many people to eat?

After reading the beginning, the author's writing style is good. If he really can't write fairy tales, he should try another track. I'm going to read your first book first. The Witch is very cute.

This is too nonsense, this logic level, unless people are just spreading their beans to make soldiers, otherwise they would have died long ago. There are only 100,000 people in a county. Chen Dao had to eat a bowl. This is just the county, the people above still have to eat. Otherwise, if he is in charge and doesn't eat people, why should he go up there? Suppose a superior can only take 10,000 per county, so 100,000 people can't get enough. Even the leaders above can't get enough.

The settings written by the author at each start are basically only refreshed on time to satisfy the population. In the mid-term, in order to make up for the water pressure, the number of words is scribbled here and there. The later stage is basically the traditional late stage of Xianxia, ​​but because there are too many things written in the early stage, if one hole is not filled in, it can only be regarded as unfinished.

Keep up the good work, the last one was very interesting in the early stages, but the updates were too slow and I couldn't catch up. I'll read it again after it's finished. In the past two years, weird themes have become more popular, including "The Lord of Mysteries" and "The Strange Immortal", as well as some unknown ones. The author has several books with his own style. I hope the new book will be a big hit and the author will become a great god.

Everyone knows that if you can't beat him, then he joins, so he becomes a monster. They don't want to, but what can they do? Your protagonist is aloof. You want power but don't want to change, so you can only cheat. The typical part about why not eat minced meat and Gao scolding Xiaochuan is the best interpretation of the protagonist.

I picked up a picture from the Dragon King Speaking of whether the protagonist wants to practice the 12 signs of life, can he find a temporary magic weapon or something to store the strange breath (it is recommended to be called demon breath for short) and then train it for the younger brother to fight and kill more of the same kind, or store some messy breaths, refine or mix the whole crystal or something like a trading route?

The two books are two big ones. At least the beginning of the last book was good.

It's well written, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch

It's a pity that a good book is poorly written or has no outline at the end.

Sure enough, pig's feet were thrown into the street, what kind of succubus setting did pig's feet have at the beginning,,, such a supporting role setting was put on pig's feet, hahaha

In fact, the setting of this book is better than the new book in all aspects. The only bad thing is that the author ignored some loopholes in the world view. In fact, all the author's books have some problems in this regard, but this one is particularly obvious, and the plot progress also seems to be fast.