My Years as a Storyteller in Teahouses and Taverns

The author's pace in this book is too fast, and he pulls out a lot of gods at once, which is too abrupt. The beginning is particularly good, with a secular atmosphere that is hidden in the city but not a market atmosphere. However, in the end, he writes a lot of battles at once, which completely deviates from the main content of the previous part-storytelling. It makes readers who originally thought storytelling interesting very uncomfortable and can't get up or down. I suggest the author not to be too hasty, to lay out the world view bit by bit, not to bring in so many gods, and to write more about daily life and less about battles. Of course, as a relatively new author, the article is not bad, but I still hope that the author can polish it carefully and give full play to his strengths in writing about daily life, instead of blindly pursuing battle scenes. Encouragement! I hope this book gets better and better

After reading Chapter 34, the protagonist doesn't have a clear understanding of cheats. First: The storyteller mentioned Erlang Shen, and the Heavenly Eye came, and so did the Roaring Heavenly Dog. Even an ordinary person would have some guesses and associations. The protagonist didn't even think about it, so forget it. He mentioned splitting a mountain to save his mother, and even Taoshan came out. The gossip had already reached the protagonist's ears, but he still didn't take it seriously and thought it was a lie to deceive the public. I'm surprised. The beginning of this book states that this is a world where fairies and demons dance wildly. Is this so ignored? Also, for Xi Fangping's part, the protagonist was found, but he still didn't take it seriously. The civilized point is that the protagonist's reflex arc can circle the earth. Really, ordinary people who know a little bit about using their brains will make guesses and experiments based on the above things. Why does the protagonist have a head just to highlight his height? Second: The first half of 2021 is almost over, and the steady wind at the starting point has almost disappeared. How can we still leave the stability here? Living in troubled times, a world where fairies and demons dance wildly, and there are cheats, do you still want to grow slowly? Really check out the rhythm control of the corpse stitcher next to you. Learn something and don't be ashamed in order to make money! Third: Not doing his job properly, deviating from the main line, with a lot of branch lines, which is of no use. Except for talking about Xi Fangping in the beginning, and then talking about Nie Yinniang in a 1V1 with the boss lady, it's still the same. Let's learn from the corpse stitcher next door. At least he didn't deviate from the main line. I seriously suspect that this is also a falsehood.        ：，，，，，，，，，，，，，                ，！

Hateful! There has been no update for fourteen hours! Three hours of sleep a day is enough! Get up and update soon!

After reading the first fifty chapters, except for the first half of the first story, which was told publicly in a teahouse, the rest were told privately to a certain person? This is not a storyteller at all. If you stay at home all day and tell stories from the Wordless Heavenly Book, telling thousands of stories, wouldn't you be instantly invincible when you come out? I feel like this setting of the storyteller is wasted.

It was a bit interesting before Chapter 60 But that's it. Before Chapter 60, it really felt like a bad Ke Qiyuan in the early stage. Of course it was just a little bit, not enough to be immortal It's a pity that the whole episode collapsed after Ba She appeared. , A demon who secretly absorbs yang energy and hides from the court He actually singled out three immortals and was undefeated Even if the power of the immortals is suppressed to the ceiling of this world But hiding from officials on the front foot, Is 1VS3 on the back foot serious? It's ridiculous to have ceiling-level combat power Do you need to hide! Although this kind of invincible trend has been popular recently but it's such a pity

Already tipped✓

I also expected this book to be a god, but the plot turned out to be just like this

Do you recommend TJ books for daily reading?

Chinese thin dog, barking dog

Even if the Eight Immortals were reduced to immortals, they wouldn't be able to beat a snake three times against one, right? It's been so long since you became an immortal, but you're still Laojun's disciple and you haven't learned anything? The more you live, the more you pass? Outrageous, see you again