There's a Taoist Temple in the Mountains

In some cases, I am a somewhat violent person, but after reading this book, I felt that my body and mind were baptized by a peaceful and peaceful artistic conception. When I saw the chapter about the little golden retriever, I wanted to cry, and when I saw the plain but happy life of Lu Zhanfang's family, I subconsciously pursed my lips. When I saw Li Yun saying that "virgins are as obvious as ice floes on Coke," I smiled knowingly, and when I said "hehehehe," I also hehehehe. I thought this was a novel about fighting and killing, but every chapter is full of human touch. There is no fighting and killing, but it is full of Taoist chicken soup charm. In such an impetuous era, there are very few novels like this. I really hope that this book will be finished soon, so that I can stay up late to read it instead of waiting for updates. But I don't want it to end. I want to continue to be baptized by the charm and artistic conception in the novel. Ah, what a contradiction. Perhaps the word "most awesome in history" does not refer to how powerful Li Yun is. The word "most awesome" refers to Li Yun, the person as a Taoist priest, the Taoist Taoist priest, and his heart. As for those who disliked the book and found fault with it, all I can say is: Why is there such a big difference in brain structure between people? Is the brain broken? In short, this is an ambrosia that is delayed by the title of the book. PS: Use less of the illusion caused by the impact of airflow, and stunts. Use too much and it won't be funny.

I just don't understand why so many authors like to write about systems, and they also like to make the system so emotional. To put it simply, it's funny. Is the system the protagonist or the person the protagonist? He is obliterated at every turn or is the punishment for not doing anything for life. Your system is so awesome, why do you still need to find a loser as a host? You can just find a powerful person. Then the task of saving the world in your system will be a hundred times easier in an instant, directly from hell mode to simple mode.

The author is a typical non-religious person. Like most Chinese people (including me), they do not distinguish between Buddhism and Taoism, and they worship whenever they see a temple. There is a problem in the first chapter. The six paths of reincarnation, the past, present and future are all Buddhist theories. Such a simple mistake should not be made. You should learn more about the characteristics of Taoism when writing novels, and respect the local religion. I don't want to complain about the incense money either.

I was persuaded to give up. Once there was a system, everyone the protagonist met had a story. It was too far-fetched, so I insisted on seeing Old Man Lin. I couldn't hold on any longer, and suddenly left Old Man Lin at the age of 20. Old Man Lin had been waiting for 45 years, and she was teaching 20 miles away. She died 30 years ago, that is to say, she left well and hadn't seen each other for 15 years. Old man Lin was moved in the end, bah

Isn't this the same routine as the previous book? The protagonist obtains the system, and then suddenly someone comes to the shabby place where no one has come before. Then it happens that these people have problems that need to be solved. They find that the problem is supernatural, and then the supporting character discovers that the protagonist has special abilities. . . . This routine has been fixed, right? You don't want to change it. The most outrageous thing about this kind of book is that it has an ordinary urban background and nothing happened. When the protagonist comes out, it is like being released from prison. There are all kinds of monsters and monsters. Please either change the background setting or change the settings of monsters. It is really inconsistent. The protagonist has lived in The Truman Show before, right?

No matter what type you are, the structure of the story must be reasonable. If there are some mistakes or things that go against human common sense, you can't just say this is a parallel world and that's it. Even if you are from the world of gods and demons, who are you writing for? Show it to us, at least for social cognition. You can't go against the common sense of our world. If you really have your own unique theory, you have to explain it. You can't just say, "This is a fantasy novel, this is a parallel world," and everything will be fine. If you can't understand this, you'd better go write a novel in a parallel world.

How to say it? I accidentally read it when I was short of books. Let's put it this way, the whole book is full of poisonous points, but not too poisonous. It's the kind of book that you can barely read without taking a breath, but it is poisonous after all. Even if it is not poisonous enough, you will die if you eat too much. Bah!

The protagonist knelt down and licked her from the first chapter to the ending... It was all slapped in the face by others and then the protagonist knelt and licked her

I feel like I'm copying my old man. I need to be more familiar.

I can't stand it. Are you sure this is about a scholar? Rather, I write about helping people solve trivial matters.