The Assassin He Chunxia

Summarizing the first hundred chapters, "Assassin He Chunxia" is currently good enough, with a high ceiling. The author, Shi San Bai Qian, is very imaginative, crazy, and romantic. He is a genius writer. He has a professional background and strong skills. Therefore, he seems to be able to handle various themes and writing methods. However, his prose is the only one (so strong that it is exaggerated). Most of the others are second-rate. Two obvious weaknesses. The author's plot design is top-notch, but his control is very poor. The rhythm often gets out of control, and he relies on dazzling skills and hard power to get away with it. The Nanjing chapter and the Wudang chapter are all full of creativity and imagination, but they all exploded and collapsed at the end, and they came back hard. In fact, the author has obviously received professional training, and his story line structure and plot arrangement are very orderly. Everyone imagine a curve chart. A normal story slowly reaches a climax, and then lowers to the climax and ends. But both of these stories did not end well at the climax. Instead, they continued to fly upward, then exploded, and came back abruptly. This is a sign of poor control. Another point is the serious lack of experience in writing online articles. This is actually difficult to catch because the author's hard power is really strong. But inexperience means inexperience. For example, in the case of Eagle, there are as many words as water in this plot, and there will be no less water. The author wishes he could finish ten words of content for you one word at a time. Writing a long novel requires continuous transitions, and a large number of relatively relaxed readings are the rhythm of online writing. Use the rhythm of writing to compare the eagle again. The eagle is walking and the author is flying. Obviously, Fei looks more tired. This is a joke. What I want to say is that the words written by veteran Internet literary masters like Ying Ying and Tang Jia San Shao may be very white and watery, but they are oily and experienced enough, and the words they write flow very naturally. There is a reason why routines in routine writing have endured for a long time, because routines are the writing method with the highest limit and the most suitable writing method for online writing. The author's writing is very anti-conventional. I can actually understand that he is pursuing classic, but there is a saying that he likes to read and see. In fact, everyone likes to see those that are more vulgar, low-key, and down-to-earth. The author is still in touch with the local spirit, don't just do all the tricks in the sky every day. Write plainly and normally. In fact, Internet readers are very tolerant. There is no need to be excellent in every chapter, so slow down the pace. The author's writing temperament, Taoist cultural background and martial arts are a perfect fit. In time, he will become a popular writer. You just need to persist, martial arts will only become more and more declining. The author is only twenty-three years old. It is not easy to write such things. I used to think it was weird to have some new elements that were not there, but the author convinced me with his imagination that new does not mean good, but in an era when chivalry is at its end, using new to break the situation is very valuable. Hold on, just hold on.

Dedicated to everyone who is still willing to love martial arts. This will be a beautiful dream. Let's see you in the world

It's not a cool novel, it's not a novice novel that can't be read without using your brain. It's an extremely hard-core martial arts novel, and the reading threshold is very high. Thirteen retains the bad habit of creating paper books, and also paints traditional Chinese paintings, pursuing minimalist freehand blanks, which is his writing style. If you don't understand it, don't read it. Reading doesn't need to be so profound. Thirteen is very similar to the cartoonist Fujimoto Shu. He is free in creation, unconstrained and crazy. He still stubbornly blooms warm flowers in the darkness where no one can see him. For niche things, let the niche see the beauty and be moved.

Let's list the poisonous points first. Most of the poisonous points of this book are concentrated in the first nine chapters, because Thirteen did not expect to publish an online article at first, and wrote it completely according to the physical book. The expression form of the script, the extremely concise language style, and a lot of foreshadowing are left blank. The amount of information is explosive, especially in the fifth chapter, most people will be confused when the interpersonal relationship comes out. The first nine chapters cannot be greatly changed, because they set the tone and give people a sense of the real world. They will silently bring your emotions into this sincere, dark, and extremely gentle world. A book friend's rating is more fair. The first ten chapters are 7 points, the first volume is 8 to 8.5, The second volume is 9+. I give the second volume a 10 points for a masterpiece. The second volume of Thirteen is written like crazy, metaphor, deconstruction, satire, stream of consciousness, montage, cyberpunk, traditional mythological universe... It combines some elements that are impossible to appear at the same time in an exquisite structure. It is strange and beautiful. It is different from the grass like Voldemort and Lin Daiyu. The blend of Thirteen elements is architecturally beautiful, cold, tight, real, and romantic. The only bad thing about the second volume is that it is martial arts and no one will read it. Shisan and I know each other realistically, and I know that he is not a madman. He is calm, restrained, and has the alienating arrogance of traditional intellectuals. The first time I met him, he was seventeen years old. He was very poor and lived in a basement. He had to walk through a long corridor full of garbage and sewage. When he opened the door, he painted a room full of lotus flowers. The last time I saw him was five years later. He was a Taoist priest who performed life and death rituals for people. The epidemic had just ended. He could no longer bear the negative energy and decided to go down the mountain. He was lying on the sofa with his legs crossed, his eyes overflowing with vicissitudes of life and exhaustion. He said that I want to be a martial arts writer. This is the love of my life, so be it. "How do you live?" This person suddenly said arrogantly, life will not be more miserable than what I have experienced. Oh, that's really awesome. In an era when chivalry is at its end, we really need someone who loves it enough and writes well enough to stick with it. I believe he knows very well in his heart that the paper era has passed, and the online literature market will swallow up and bury this book, which is also the case. "Can you handle it?" Thirteen dug out several notebooks, a handwritten prequel of 800,000 words, and 286 character biographies. The existing outline of the trilogy alone was enough for him to write for ten years. Oh, that's really awesome. I am honored to be the only reader who has read those notebooks. I can spoil two points. First, Zhang Zhouzhou is not a time traveler. Second, the second extra chapter "Sword Language" is about Li Qinglan's autobiography. It will be the best martial arts short story in the past ten years. If you click in and see my shallow and sentimental hydrology, then congratulations on discovering a treasure. This book is really good-looking and engaging. It is worth putting in your collection.

Thirteen was afraid that everyone wouldn't understand and his explanation would be too spoilery, so he invited me to explain some of the plot. "Criminal He" has a total of three timelines, divided into Past Line, Story Line, and Real Line. These three lines will be merged into one at the end as time progresses, forming a true, dark, and gentle picture of all living beings in the world. These three lines are all intertwined with the fate of one person, He Chunxia, ​​the heroine of "Assassination of He". Past Line consists of seven extra chapters, but the predecessor was an 800,000-word manuscript. Thirteen is lazy, so it will be updated slowly along with the plot. (Post related works, free of charge) Storyline is very controversial, because Shisan is so well written, and the story line alone is a very good work. There is a problem here. All the characters are vivid and real, but all characters, including the protagonist, serve the plot, but they are not used as tools. Thirteen is written in a gentle, romantic and ruthless way. The true line is actually a hidden line. Except for Chapter 60, it is just a few touches inadvertently, but it is very important. The introduction of "Combination" is the first story of the hidden line. Thirteen's story is too complex to be summarized simply, but it can probably be like this Past line: Westworld Story line: Age of Awakening plus The Matrix Real line: Blade Runner It is recommended that you read Thirteen's prose "999 Lines of Poetry" first. "Cut me open, the sword is still there" perfectly embodies this person's style, he is talented, but his brain is really... Shisan's imagination, madness and imagination are reflected in. In this way, "Lord of Mysteries" gives everyone a world of Cthulhu mythology. Shisan deconstructs the traditional Chinese mythology and creates a martial arts world that is both oriental, science fiction and with a strong Taoist color.

The only thing I don't understand is why you think classical novels are old stuff. Can you please stop misleading others? The little white texts we play now are all leftovers from those played by the ancients! Can't you study hard and read more? If you have the time to read the unofficial histories of the ancients, you will know how ridiculous your so-called advanced writing is! Nowadays, Xiaobai's writings are just copied! What else can you say about Xiaobai's imagination? The concept of time travel was proposed by Zhuang Zhou thousands of years ago, right? Ascension and immortality are also proposed by Taoism, right? Even the so-called true energy, eight extraordinary meridians, and martial arts moves were all proposed by the ancients, right? Are you still talking shamelessly about being backward? I really don't know how high the sky is and how high it is!

First of all, I recognize the author's talent, but I don't think the author's thinking is right. This is obviously a good enough story. Why add weird settings such as multiple time and space, cyberpunk, etc., Is completely superfluous. The second volume was originally of Fengshen quality, but it turned out to be nondescript. With such a large layout and complex human nature in the struggle for power, such excellent things were clearly written, but they were brushed aside casually. A bunch of low-life people were beheaded in front of the people for the sake of the common people, and all they got in return was cold looks and disgust. The low-life people were so frightened that they were dying, but they didn't say a word. Describing human nature from such a profound perspective, the author, in order to set the so-called pace, discards all the good things after writing them in a few strokes. Isn't this just neglecting the basics and chasing the last? Martial arts is first of all a popular novel, and it is for the public. It is true that the author has used his imagination to create new things, but the niche and crazy ideas are of no help to the entire subject of martial arts. No one can learn from and imitate it, and it cannot be passed down from generation to generation. So the author thinks that he is the guardian of martial arts. Isn't it contradictory? If you tell a story well, this book can become a god. I hope the author will think about it carefully.

Real friends. I like He Xiaoyun very much. Thirteen's paintings are good, I never thought that Thirteen would write so well. It keeps getting better and better. It's like watching a TV series, and the comic has a strong sense of déjà vu. I particularly like what He Xiaoyun said. The good things from our ancestors will never die, they just change their way and spread to the world. I once dreamed of traveling to the end of the world with my sword, but today I just hope that I can have a dreamless night and have a good rest. At first, I just thought that the Thirteenth Society would be a latecomer to Jin Yong Gu Long. The former wrote all the chivalry, so what would happen no matter how good the writing was? Until recently, Thirteen Thirteen's unbridled imagination finally broke out of the fixed thinking of martial arts, locked down what he could do as a human being, and let his imagination bloom freely under the stars. The words written at the beginning of the volume turned out to be serious. When I saw the sentence "I'm not dead yet," I was really moved. Come on!

There is a saying: It is a big mistake to write a stream-of-consciousness martial arts at the starting point. If you post it on Douban, the result may be completely different. Just look at the results of Tianxia Daozong.

Readers who have read the first two volumes will know that as long as Thirteen plays normally, this book will be a masterpiece. What does it mean to perform normally? You can move forward by walking, running, biking, or flying, but Thirteen will take off in place while shaking his hands. I don't know how to evaluate it. This is the most imaginative, imaginative and romantic novel I have ever read. These three are most based on reasonableness and logic. There must be something wrong with Shisan's spirit, and there must be some things that normal people cannot write. Good-looking, reasonable and logical, it's a terrible thing to take off while waving your hands, but it's just super good-looking anyway. Thirteen's setting about death and the part that deconstructs religion are so romantic. That's it, crazy batch thirteen!