My Martial Arts Will Hang Up

The protagonist's character is well written and he must take revenge, but I feel that Goldfinger is of no use later on? Upgrading also requires enlightenment or elixirs.

Is this finished? Although I haven't fully ordered it yet, there are a lot of typos in the first few chapters.

After reading it, tell me your thoughts. I feel that the author is weak because the settings did not focus on the performance. The protagonist practiced a lot of messy things, which were of no great use. It was grinding in a game, but it was much better after the modification. The setting was based on the basic skills and laid a very good foundation. After that, the real skills were much faster, and now he is awesome. The skill of setting up the subsequent plot is gradually revealed. It can be said that although it is pretty and old wine is put in new bottles, the writing has a unique flavor. The protagonist and supporting characters have normal IQs. The story is refreshing and not brainless. The setting is complete and it is worth reading. I can rate it as four stars out of five. Good luck to the author with great potential!

I can't stand it anymore. Every time I hide, those bullshit friends are bullied, and then they come out to save them. In this cycle, I just write them all to death. Since I don't owe them, I have paid them off long ago, or just stop writing them. Personality is also an issue. I always want to flaunt myself as a person with a bottom line, decisive in killing, and reasonable, but it is always the opposite.

People, you have to be flexible in your thinking. If you can't find a white crane, you can ask someone who has a good picture of a white crane.

This book is not popular because I wrote it myself. The book is also called "The Adventures of My Infinite Matryoshka Doll, My Talent Is Too Good That I Have Been Hunted by People, Killing the Young Ones and the Old Ones, and My Brain Is Not Good"

The protagonist killed the witch, doesn't that explain the problem? Can't we wait until the conflict becomes stronger to take revenge? You have to kill a group of people when you are weak. You have no background but you have talent. Why not use your talent to kill them? In addition, I have practiced a skill and can also tell the origin. What is unclear about it? You can practice in a small city at the beginning, but when you get to a big place, you are not afraid anymore. If you kill the witch, who can force you? On the contrary, the protagonist is bent on colluding with the witch, and has no intention of proving himself or using his background. So what are you trying to do by joining these forces? Just those few exercises? You don't kill that witch who tricked you, but you insist on killing those who may be reasonable at least. It seems really awkward. It's never too late for a gentleman to take revenge, or at least get rid of the hatred on the surface first, and then find an opportunity to kill in secret. This kind of hatred will be made openly. If you really kill, you won't be retaliated against later? It feels so awkward to forcefully push the plot forward.

The Wanjian Canon is extremely rubbish. It consumes a lot of money, has low intentions, is difficult to practice, and has little power. It controls so many swords and its power is so dispersed. Is it really useful to masters?

What can I say? The plot ahead is tight. , Smooth and makes people feel quite comfortable. In the middle period, the protagonist is the number one troublemaker. He forcibly derails his intelligence and relies on the largest intelligence bureau. Then he has no intelligence at all. Others rely on shouting for information. After killing the demon girl, it feels like a different person. He can explain but does not explain, forcibly conceals it, and then is forced to death before he can think of it. Explain, there are people blocking me from killing, and there are people who have the opportunity to kill. I said before that killing people and grabbing treasures is very dangerous. If you don't do such a thing that goes against your conscience, you will start to do it later. Everyone you meet later is a conspiracy theory. Everyone is trying to frame me anyway. The key is the protagonist's IQ. Framing and using him requires no brain at all. After all, the protagonist has a Root strength, kill is all, kill the young, kill the big, kill the big, kill the old, kill the old, kill the whole family, the protagonist is still using his brain in the front, but after he can hide himself in the back, no matter who he is, just kill him at every turn, and it's over. For example, a core disciple of the first sect first provoked the protagonist's team and had a fight, but no one else had the intention to kill. , Just wanted to fight, but was stopped by his very awesome senior sister. When we met later, he was being chased, and the protagonist blocked the way. They fought, and the protagonist killed him without thinking about the consequences. He was stopped by the chaser. The chaser said that if you kill him, everyone will die. I just taught him a lesson and didn't dare to touch him. Later, the protagonist only knew how to kill. It became more and more weird and the three views were inconsistent.

The biggest problem with this novel is that as a modern person, you don't know how to use your own background. You can't kill others if they have backgrounds. The protagonist can only watch being disgusted. If you kill someone, you will be hunted by others. If you beat the younger one, you will come. If you beat the older one, you will come older. The protagonist has a background and others don't care. He can do whatever he wants and kill how he wants. Isn't this very funny? Then why are you joining the organization? The protagonist is the prince's person. I joined Xiu Yi, and the dean of the martial arts academy was also very optimistic about him. However, when I performed a task in my own territory, the team leader was still my boss. As a result, I was done openly by a young master of the Yu family who was not even a cross river dragon. Things like this often happen again, especially when the woman has already explained it clearly and has to pursue the mission. Then I don't know what your background is used for. Everyone else's background is useful. Your background is just background.

I finally understand why this book is not a big hit. It's because although the plot is generally good, it is poisoned every once in a while and then forcibly promotes the plot. For the latest plot, I jumped from chapter 350 to chapter 500, and was directly poisoned by this talent conversion. You know that killing the emperor will have backlash, but you still kill him? Can't you cripple him first, put it on your body, and then escape and kill him again? Even if you don't kill the emperor, can you just depose him and run away? Anyway, the consequence is that you will be hunted. If you don't kill, at least you will be justified, and the hunting intensity will definitely not be strong. Can't you come back and kill again when you are stronger? In this situation, the protagonist may have to offend the Yuhua Sect, and you also released the devil. It is true that the protagonist's brain and character are worrying.

More than five hundred chapters have not yet broken through to the first level.

The author has a soft heart, but he will actively absorb the appropriate opinions from readers and is willing to modify the article and correct typos. However, I will delete some useless negative comments. Some friends even left a message saying that they will definitely not subscribe. What do you want me to say? I can only delete the comment and say goodbye. Of course, I also saw the encouragement and support from many friends, and I was really grateful and touched. In a word, I am just a low-level writer and don't know anything about operations. If you have any comments, I agree and I will change them. But if you think it's terrible and can't be read, it means you are not the audience of this book. You can just delete the book and leave.

I just want to know, if such a waste is chosen, what will the protagonist watch? As mentioned in the first post, the accumulation of knowledge is very important in any world. Since you hung up, what else have you done besides hanging up? You have learned dozens of technical skills, why don't you study them? Why do these exercises allow you to practice inner breath? You say that you have poor talent and it is ineffective to practice by yourself. This is not a problem, but the question is why don't you take the initiative to study these things? Aren't these basic things important? I just think that other people's exercises are good, so why not create my own? As we have said, in the early stages, they are all mortal bodies, and all the techniques are similar. Why not find out the advantages and disadvantages of those techniques and integrate them? Because hanging up gives you plenty of time to look for these things, why not look for them and still have the nerve to say that you worked hard and relied on your own talent. Lu Shengshou did work hard. He didn't just rely on Deep Blue. Didn't he work hard? What is the protagonist doing here?

The protagonist is written to be so useless, and the protagonist's plug-in is randomly installed on the natives of this world. It feels much better than the protagonist.

The first few dozen chapters are average, but the later chapters up to 100 are pretty good. Ever since I entered the Blood Demon Secret Realm and obtained the "Anti-God" bloodline, I obviously felt that this book had gone astray. When I got to the seventh-level master realm and accepted the sword test, I obviously felt that it was forcibly suppressing the protagonist's strength. If I had been hanging up for ten years and came out of the ninth level, why bother reading 200 chapters. As for the book after arriving at the Imperial County and meeting the Crown Prince, it was obvious that it was in trouble. It could be called a collapse of blood. Later on, I even suspected that the studio had ghostwritten it.

Things have started to change since that Qingluo appeared. It's a bit forced to advance the plot. Even if that woman comes to the door, wouldn't it be enough to make an oath of heaven that I have never even seen your brother?

Can you keep getting stronger by practicing low-level martial arts? Can't show off some of your talents and wait for others to recruit you? Don't get me started on those things where people are jealous of people who are too talented and are feared and hunted down.

The protagonist, Goldfinger, has no sense of existence. The name of the book is a bit misleading. The protagonist's realm is too strong. He has crossed 5 or 6 realms to kill people. I thought it was a cool article based on the title, but it turns out that the protagonist's realm is 1 and his combat power is indeed 100. It's very depressing

The protagonist sets up a fighting arena and comes out! Chamber of Commerce + Arena, there are gambling, rewards and tickets.

Was this written by someone from the studio? Probably after escaping from Daqian, the writing style suddenly changed, changing the map → killing people and grabbing treasures → escaping. In the early days, the academic style was clearly very good, but suddenly it changed to the escaping style of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger ten years ago? An average of one "licked lips" per chapter? ? ? Not only the protagonist, but also the supporting characters and villains like to lick their lips? It was clearly laid out in the past that most of the fighting style was majoring in fists and palms and minoring in thunder swords, but suddenly he changed to majoring in kendo? And the sword or the great road is stronger than the natural ways of earth, wind, water, fire and thunder? The title of the book is Hang-up, but the plug-in is almost never mentioned in the later stage and has no sense of existence.

The writing was useless in the middle period. Let's replace it. I started writing randomly when I entered the Demon Slayer Division. It wasn't fun. I didn't feel like I was killing people for no reason. There was no main line. It was tiring to watch. Haha. Personal opinion.

The writing is quite good, but the author should avoid pitfalls in the future, such as writing less competitions or trying to avoid overly long chapters. There are more than 30 chapters in the new book and now one competition takes up more than half, which will make people less expect the growth of the protagonist.

The rhythm is just right and looks very comfortable

This little book should be renamed "The Adventures of Others", this "other" appears more frequently than the protagonist🤢🤢🤢

I have recently been condensing the content of the first volume. If the content is not coherent, just refresh it. In addition, this book will have leapfrog battles, as well as battles to crush high players and defeat low players. Combat effectiveness is determined by basic cultivation and martial arts realm, rather than simply being summed up by leapfrogging. If you don't like it, don't join.

Isn't it too stupid to write about being exposed by the martial arts token? They all disguised themselves and concealed the token, but you don't know how to put it away?

This novel is so depressing. The more I read it, the more I want to scold it. If you can still finish it, you are also a talent.

The chapter about Ten Years of Sword Training was very bad, and obviously suppressed the protagonist.

It's too watery, and the world view is just like a joke Join a martial arts gym, and you will be taught by the martial arts gym. After that, no matter what force you are, if you are talented, you will treat it as a seed, and there will be a county-wide competition. . . Martial arts schools are like government offices in this worldview.