Naval Rising Star

Just look at this part, which can be easily found to be a complaint: "The sky in the world of One Piece is very blue, and the clouds are very white, drifting slowly, like an old man with white hair enjoying his happy old age." Look at this, really look at this. This is like an elementary school student's essay, is this for real?

... What is the relationship between the synopsis you wrote and the protagonist's character and actions? How can someone who is described as occasionally carefree and irresponsible be worthy of the grand pronouncements in the introduction?

I initially thought it was pretty good; at least the system wasn't overpowered and didn't break the original One Piece setting. It progressed steadily. Then suddenly a captain's clone appeared, and it was a disaster. I immediately wanted to curse. Goodbye.

It's alright! Although the clones feel a bit abrupt, it's still within acceptable limits. The main character is just too weak and has too few abilities! Maybe they could consider giving the main character a second template.

Agreed. It was actually quite well-written. I thought the protagonist would have a few more skills. Adding a clone... Is it really meaningful to raise a thief for personal gain? True strength comes from within. You could have added a character with passive abilities... Bye. There are plenty of fanfictions out there. Why bother reading yours if it's not interesting?

The protagonist was fighting tooth and nail against pirates worth 30-40 million gold using the power of his cards, but instead of gaining more power by using a Devil Fruit to charge his energy, he created a clone. It's truly speechless.

The whole clone looks really strange.

The appearance of the clone in Chapter 44 was a mistake; see you again someday.

The problems started to surface after chapter 40. It's a pity it didn't become a huge hit. Bye.

Seeing the use of clones... Hits the nail on the head... Wouldn't it be better to set subordinates to have high loyalty?