Naval Rising Star

Just complain about this and read one of the paragraphs in the first chapter: "The sky in the world of One Piece is very blue, and the clouds are also very white, floating very slowly, like a gray-haired old man enjoying his happy old age." You taste it, you taste it carefully, this is a primary school student's composition, isn't it, are you having fun?

…What does the introduction you wrote have to do with the protagonist's personality? How can a character who reads~occasionally wanders be able to afford the heroic words in the introduction?

At first glance, I thought it was pretty good. At least this system didn't go against the grain and didn't destroy the original setting of Pirates. It was steadily rising. Suddenly, a clone of the captain appeared and jumped on the street. When I saw it, I immediately wanted to curse. Goodbye.

Not bad! Although the clone is a bit abrupt, it is within the acceptable range. It is just that the protagonist is too weak and has too few means! You can consider giving the protagonist a second template.

Agree. The original writing was okay. I thought the protagonist had a few more skills. Get a clone. Is it interesting to raise a thief to respect himself? You are strong only when you are strong. You can create a passive character. . . Bye-Bye. A lot of fan fiction. Why bother looking at yours if there are no highlights.

The protagonist relies on the power of cards to fight against thirty or forty million pirates, but instead of using a Devil Fruit to recharge himself to increase his combat power, he creates a clone. I'm really speechless.

The whole clone feels so strange,

Chapter 44: The appearance of the clone is a failure, let's see you again when we are destined.

Chapter 40 started to get a little bit addictive. It's a pity that the fire is going to be great. Bye-Bye

I saw using the clone... To poke the poison point... Isn't it good to set it as a loyal subordinate?