One Piece: Randomly Reborn

Can the protagonist eat multiple Devil Fruits? Although eating more than two Devil Fruits will result in death, the protagonist's cheat ability is rebirth, and he does not lose the fruit's power after rebirth. So, if you're bold enough, could you try eating a few more Devil Fruits and then be resurrected?

Just avoid adding unnecessary plot points like in the previous book. Those problematic plot points don't require exceptional writing skills (for example, Pigsy is easily perceived as annoying, but he's portrayed very successfully in Journey to the West), so there's no need to touch them. Just follow a similar plot, write the story you want—interesting and without any negative elements—that's enough.

It's a shame that no one reads it after only 5 chapters. Honestly, the author should start preparing for the next book. 🙂 Keep it up, this is just practice!

Many One Piece fanfics like to give the main characters names that are hard to believe, and Devil Fruit abilities that sound completely out of place in the One Piece world. Using characters from the original One Piece manga as companions and their Devil Fruit abilities from the manga is much better, isn't it? Constantly distancing yourself from the source material just feels awkward. Of course, this is just my personal opinion.

Why reveal the secret in Chapter Five?

I suggest some revisions. First, even the weakest Zoan-type Devil Fruit user could still board the ship by chopping down a tree and making a simple ladder, just like an ordinary person. Second, Chapter 5 is too toxic. You practically admitted to being a time traveler, killed a Celestial Dragon, and still used your old name.

I thoroughly enjoyed the first four chapters, but the fifth chapter was too discouraging. 😅😅😅

Could the protagonist eat two Devil Fruits, one in his soul and one in his heart? The Rumble-Rumble Fruit is just too delicious!

Here's a suggestion: if you rescue Robin early on, it's best not to get involved with her. After all, she's a troublemaker, and having her around isn't very useful; it will only attract the World Government's attention and could easily lure Aokiji. Without a strong connection like Luffy's and without sufficient strength, recruiting Robin will likely result in a terrible death.

I couldn't even finish chapter 5, and this is supposed to be psychology? Ha!