Qingyun Xiantu

I posted a book about modern warfare before, which can be used as a reference for discussions in the cultivation world, but I didn't read some of the chapters at that time. Judging from the technology tree of this book, it may be a bit abrupt even if it is written. It can only be regarded as a suggestion for the author in a direction, and it is just an additional train of thought. I think this book can be dull, but it still needs to be rhythmic. Maybe it's just because it's a bit too dull. For example, the Qingyun Sect's master technique seems to have no obvious advantages compared to other techniques. All the exercises that other people practice are bought, and it is difficult for people to have a sense of involvement and not feel how powerful they are. Mining is a small gold-finger arrangement to make a fortune, but the industry has been led by others (Mangshu Industry). The author writes many things in detail, such as the recruitment of various spin-off professionals and the training of these talents. Although he wants to show a more realistic stage, it seems difficult to highlight the key points. Some actual data, such as how fast it can fly and how powerful it is, should not be too specific. It only needs a reference for comparison. It can travel more than a hundred miles a day, or more than two hundred miles a day. In terms of strength, make an assessment of the comprehensive strength generated by each realm. For example, during the Qi training period, it is the level of punching a tiger or kicking a leopard. It can also jump up and fly, and knows some magic. It is a little superman. But the destructive power may not be the same as the ten tons of destructive power on the fist. I am not very good at writing, so I am not very clear about it. The general meaning is that a person has ten tons of explosive power. When he punches, the place where he hits is the destructive power on his fist edge. Ten tons of pressure is concentrated in a small area. If your hand does not break, you can really hit! I think this is almost the limit of destructive power during the Qi training period. In this way, we can serve as a reference and set a benchmark for qualitative change in each realm! The author only needs to know the specifics in his mind, and there is no need to tell them. After they are told, the errors in the data will easily lead to bugs. But if the author has a more serious thought in his heart and has a rough idea of ​​these data in his mind, he probably won't be too far off in terms of data when writing it out, because visual effects can deceive you, fantasy can deceive you, and comparisons in data will never deceive you. How powerful do you think he is? After calculating his data in your mind, you will know whether it is suitable. But don't tell it. If you tell others to do the math for you, bugs will easily occur, and someone will tell you how about this? How about that, the front doesn't match the back or something, I know that's annoying, so I just want to give the author some ideas. However, I think the most appropriate suggestion I put forward is to cut the blue bar. The author has also been studying cultivation for 40,000 years. When I say this, I should be very clear about the benefits of cutting the blue bar. The difference between high-level and low-level is reflected in the qualitative change at each level, but there is no quantitative change! Only when low-level monks can kill high-level monks, the foundation of the sect style will be transformed into obvious combat effectiveness. Even if you send cannon fodder up, I will squeeze you dry! Although they can't run away from you, as long as I can hold you down, I can surround you with cannon fodder! Cultivation The idea behind the forty thousand year restriction blue bar is that the meaning of a monk's life is to burn. Every second of blooming power is burning life, compressing the power in the long river of life and burning it out in that second-by-second time, so wanton use of power will shorten lifespan. So cultivators will maintain themselves in the state of ordinary people most of the time, in a state of dormancy. But when they release their cultivation, the consumption of their vitality is countless times that of ordinary people. So the way I think about limiting the blue bar is that the amount of spiritual power you can use is not entirely determined by your strength, but by the endurance of your meridians. In daily meditation practice, absorb spiritual energy from heaven and earth to temper the meridians. The first thing is the flesh. The body is tougher, and the second is to improve the compatibility with spiritual energy to improve your cultivation. When your meridians cannot bear the pressure, daily practice should stop, so damage to the meridians will affect your practice. This is reasonable, at least there are no obvious big pitfalls. Therefore, the pressure on the meridians is greater when fighting. While absorbing spiritual energy to replenish oneself, one has to concentrate on casting spells. Think about why the power bank cannot charge and discharge at the same time🙂🙂. So as long as the total amount of spiritual energy stored in the meridians is limited, and the ability to recover mana while playing is limited, won't the mana bar of a high-level monk be restrained? So the advantage lies in the upper limit. There is nothing wrong with high-level monks being more powerful than low-level monks. Therefore, every time a high-level monk is raised to a higher level, no matter what the advantages of high-level monks are compared to those of low-level monks, no matter what skills or talents they use, these are all false. There are always some advantages that low-level monks cannot achieve no matter what. For example, the mana is more pure, what is the use of the golden elixir of the golden elixir monk, and the Yuanying of the Yuanying monk. These are the characteristics that can be seen in every realm. Just add gold fingers to these characteristics. But there is no blue bar! But for the skill category, I think there is a general direction, the fire system has high group attack, and the gold system is mainly armor-piercing and assassination. They are not only sharp, but also have certain defensive capabilities. Wood type plays positional warfare and healing. The earth element is the main defense and strength, which is stable in one word. Water type returns blue, has certain healing ability, and is good at fighting protracted battles. The special type of ice is a derivative of water-based skills. It has water-based talents, but if you don't want to be a tool, you can develop into the ice-based system. Assassination is not as good as gold, defense is not as good as earth, and positional warfare is not as good as wood, but it has fewer weaknesses and shortcomings. Sometimes omnipotence is also an opportunity for victory. The wind element is all about speed and quick attacks, with relatively little burst damage and poor defensive capabilities. (But it can be matched, right? I will find an opportunity to put a powerful fire talisman on your face. In the world of martial arts, only fast ones can't break it!) The thunder element is the destructive power of fire, the fastest hit speed, but when it encounters an insulator, it is very touching. I can only try to see if I can light it? Or force it to split open! The group attack ability is not as good as fire. The fact that I listed this is my own fantasy. I think the attributes of the exercises should have their own characteristics. Until now, I have seen all kinds of exercises with various attributes. I don't think I can understand what is so great. Everyone is born with spiritual roots with different attributes. The spiritual roots with different attributes represent unique geniuses in each field. The future path is already destined to a certain extent, and they should have a more obvious shining point. The fire and wood elements are good candidates for becoming an alchemist at first glance, the fire and gold elements are good candidates for being a weapon refiner at first glance, and the wood and earth elements are good candidates for being an array mage at first glance. Water monks are obedient on land, and they can control the wind and rain in the sea. You can run away if a tsunami comes to you, but for low-level people, it means direct destruction on a large scale. Who can't control natural disasters? And it is also the easiest to cast spells together. A group of people take a boat to drive the water to a place. I think it is still possible to form a very large tsunami. After all, the flow of water can be said to be the most controllable, and it is not easy to hurt the water monks in your home. As long as you don't confront this natural disaster and just go with the flow, think about how rogue you can be? (Imagine, can there be such a disaster along the coast? This simple method should be easy for monsters to use!) I have basically finished what I want to say today. There is no organization. I will say whatever I want to say. I only talk about my own ideas. If the author can see it, please stay and say hello...🙂🙂

This post collects all kinds of traps, including characters, monsters, names of sects and forces of Buddhism, Taoism and Confucianism, all kinds of exercises, magic weapons, and array names that you think are awesome, as well as spells, supernatural powers, and even elixirs and talismans. The author will use them according to the situation. Once adopted, there will be a special note which book friend provided it 😁

A foundation-building pill, in exchange for a twelfth level of Qi refining, and a Qi-refining master. An elder recruited from outside has already established a foundation. Can the master still ask this foundation-builder to do things in the future? What is this for? Even if one Foundation Establishment Pill fails, if it fails the second time, will it be useful if the cultivation level increases during the Qi Refining Period? The previous book was not so difficult to build the foundation, but the plot of this one is poisonous to people 😒😒😒

I hope there is a sect-protecting spirit beast that can hold a little bit in its mouth, hee hee

Go, go, go, now that you are full time, you will update every day🐶

Came from the desert. There is a difference between this novel and the desert. The setting problem is huge. Obviously it is a time-travel novel, but the protagonist is still a beggar when he was a child. What a lot of suffering it has been. How childish and naive the protagonist is, it would be better to write about an aborigine. He hasn't been severely beaten by society. Is it the world background or the cruel cultivation background. Moreover, the wealth is not revealed, and the protagonist's layout idea is really naive. This character still writes the senior brother as the leader. The protagonist's strength upgrade and the auxiliary sect look better. The world background setting of the book is quite good. Gaicai Dynasty, Xiuxian Family. Kaijiang Order. Maybe it's better and more in line with the protagonist's personality. It's about feeling the protagonist's character, the background of this world, and his position. Out of place.

I am an old book friend, but your book is uninspiring. I don't have any golden fingers. It is too ordinary. I want to give up the book countless times. I saw you asking for votes, so I tipped you 1,500 and gave you two votes. To be honest, Desert is very well written. Really, Goldfinger is also reasonable. This book is too ordinary. It's so difficult to build a foundation. It's a shame to write about it.

Many people asked why no one read this author's new book. I had been following Desert at that time, and he would not update as long as it was a limited exemption. He always said that he was a small author, and would lose data once he was exempted. Desert, his own son, would not update the extras. The data of the new book is so bad, and his character will most likely be cut off. So I will not pursue his new book anyway. That's what I think.

I left those words in the book group. I don't know if the author will read them. Anyway, they have nothing to do with me, but I still want to say the last few words. As an author, you should think about writing better and better books, instead of relying on the popularity of old books to write the same old routines. Old books attract popularity, and everyone hopes that you can write a better next one, rather than having the same problems as the old book. This is called not correcting mistakes after knowing them. After the incident of digging a hole in a good plot, the average decline will occur in a few days. Why is this? Anyway, I don't see the author's intention to change in the new book, so it is still the same. If you are not popular, don't blame the readers who have high expectations for you. The higher the expectations, the greater the disappointment. Other writing is poor and has various problems, but everyone will not have high expectations for it. As long as it gets better, you won't be disappointed if it gets worse. But yours has good prospects and hopes to be a high-quality book. But if you don't look for problems yourself, it's okay if the routines are well written, but there should be fewer problems. Especially the problems that have appeared in the previous book have continued to this book. I think, author, you think this book is better than the previous one, but I think the prospects of this book are not as good as the previous one, Desert. Just like the reader who replied to you said, this book is not worse than the previous one. Don't you think this is the expectation of this new book given to you by the book friends who were attracted to you in the previous one. I still hope that the author can write a better novel, but at the very least, he should not bring the problems that often occurred in the previous book to the next one. My expectations for this book are gone, so I'll leave my final expectations to the next one, if you still write it. Goodbye, everyone

This author really has a bad hand at playing cards. He left aside a good chapter on cultivating immortals in the desert and the fairy world. He insisted on writing such a thing, but ended up not talking about it. He was also a eunuch. This is a typical example.

"Nine Transformations of the True Spirit" and "The Supreme Immortal Road" are my favorite family novels about cultivating immortals and farming sects. I hope this book can reach such heights.

I feel that this paragraph is a bit poisonous. The author mentioned earlier that the protagonist is a time traveler and has any management experience. However, the attitude towards things is too naive. First, he believed the opening order without any brain, and then he was asked directly without even preparing for the questioning. This is simply speechless. This is too poisonous. I hope the author will consider it carefully and not make the protagonist look like a novice in the future. After all, the protagonist is a time traveler. After decades of living in this era of information explosion, how can he still act like a novice?

The male protagonist is portrayed as a child, with no trace of a second-generation person. He is very superficial, expresses emotions and anger, speaks louder than his head, is too straight-forward in character, and speaks too plainly. Is this really the material to be the leader? Also, how did Master choose the leader? Does having good spiritual talent mean that you are good at business? It is better to let the senior brother, a person with management and social experience, take over first. The protagonist learns and grows first, and then the senior brother dies due to serious injuries. The baton is handed over to the male protagonist, which gives a more sense of growth and handover of responsibilities.

I don't understand the author's thinking. In a dangerous place, a wasteland area, he doesn't want to develop high-level combat power when he goes shopping, but instead spends half of the sect to support a person with the lowest combat power. I really don't understand the protagonist, and the person who is reborn is really poisonous, so poisonous that it's disgusting! It stands to reason that you should read chapter by chapter and rarely abandon the book, but this poisonous point is too much! ! ! 😡😡

After reading Chapter 20, I found out that in the author's description, he always likes the protagonist to be awakened, rather than the protagonist knocking on the door and always passively discovering that he has made a mistake again, even if it is only a small mistake. There is not much else to say. After reading Chapter 20, the only thing that showed the protagonist's skills was the conversation with Senior Sister Guo.... In short, my personal suggestion is to beat more and wake up less, otherwise the protagonist will appear to be very incompetent.

This kind of colonization and extermination of intelligent life is unacceptable to me anyway, and the protagonist has no objection to this kind of behavior. It is probably because he grew up under imperialism and has not been influenced by socialism. Isn't human empathy a basic requirement of a civilized society? As an invader, the protagonist is more barbaric. And the chapter on cultivating the Tao and cultivating the mind is complaining about my aunt in the first book. Anyway, I was poisoned by my aunt in the desert book. I can't hold on to this book anymore. I feel like both of them are supposed to be good books, but they always have weird and poisonous points.

The protagonist's personality is too straightforward, and he has no palace. He can't express his emotions and anger, and he can't bend or stretch. He is not a good candidate for the leader. With such a good talent, isn't it good to cultivate honestly? Being a leader does not slow down the speed of cultivation. I have seen so many sects, and generally the leaders are not the highest. Not as good as senior brother

I won't write the Desert Fairyland chapter, so I insist on writing a new book. If I don't listen to the readers' advice, I'll just throw away the new book.

Bad books encourage people to quit. The author can be called a poisonous person and a bad-finished monster. Every book has a lot of bad points and the book is a bad one. He deserves to be on the street for the rest of his life!

I gave a reward of 1,500 points and it said that I would receive two monthly votes. Did I vote for the monthly votes directly? The new fans are so awesome, are they adding MSG to encourage them?

With 10 years of reading experience, this book written by the author is destined to be short-lived

The problem with this book is that the protagonist is a time traveler but his IQ is not online. Because the netizens reading it on mobile phones are all from this era, and all book friends know that the protagonist has problems, then there is a problem with this book.

A book I really like, The Eunuch.

Luckily, so am I. Infinitely reincarnated family cultivating immortals and farming style. The real name is "The Ascension of White Matters", also known as "The Ancestors Harm the Eighteenth Generation". The fake book "Ascension of All Times"

Coming from the desert, I was originally disgusted with time-travel articles, but the desert felt pretty good to me, so I came to see Qingyun again, but I didn't expect to travel back in time again. Author, wouldn't you be able to write a book if you didn't travel through time? The story was well written and very delicate, so I tolerated you talking about your family and yourself at the end, but in the end you became a eunuch. I was so convinced.

I said before that women are as lustful as tigers, so you just spend money to buy exercises for your junior sister 🤔 It's fine if your junior sister has good qualifications, but the problem is that she's not that good, and it's worth spending so much money 🤔

This final outline should be deleted and can be kept until the author becomes more developed and then continued.

It's a pity that we can't continue farming.

This book is very good. I hope the author will continue to write it, or else it will be removed from the shelves and written on this subject again. It is uncomfortable to read it here!

After two years of study, the author has the potential to write a good book.