I Lost My Spiritual Roots and Became a Big Boss in the World of Immortality

This book is okay, much better than those books that only describe fighting and killing.

This book has caught up with the progress. I have to say that the writing was very good before the protagonist established the foundation, or even before the middle stage of the foundation. As a bookworm for more than ten years, I think this part of the writing idea is reasonable, the plot is relaxed and relaxed, the dialogue between the characters is not muddled, the characters are presented, and the plot is very efficient. I have seen the desert, and I am very surprised by the author's transformation. But since the middle stage of foundation building, it feels like a different person has returned to the previous level and habits. The plot description is a bit delayed. This does not mean that it should not be written, but it is a poor grasp of whether a certain plot or dialogue should be complex or concise. The plot conflicts and copy preparation have also regressed a bit. If you only look at the content of the two parts of the book, it does not seem like it was written by one person, because the ideas for describing the story are different. I agree with some book friends' comments that the protagonist's personality should be unique and should not be too vague. The character should be shown more through the protagonist's actions and dialogues, with a small amount of description and mental activities to assist. The supporting characters should also have distinct changes. Since we are going to write about the fairy world, then each world should have 3 to 5 distinctive supporting characters to set off the story. The supporting characters can live or die, and the length can be long or short (not too long). As long as it is well portrayed, it will be a classic! Finally, let's talk about emotional drama. From the desert, you can feel that the author is not good at describing this aspect. This is also a problem with most online novels. If you can write emotional drama well, you are a very high-level writer. Readers of the story can imagine and make various unexpected arrangements. However, emotions can only conform to the emotional rules of real people. It is difficult to write dialogues, psychological activities, and even eye movements of characters in emotional dramas. If you do not have superb writing skills, it is better not to write it well. This book still has room for improvement. It doesn't matter if it is slower. Make sure to update it once or twice a day. Spend more time thinking about how to better arrange the connection between the previous and later stories, and how to foreshadow the conflicts and copy more reasonably. This is more important. The story is not afraid of being cliche, and the copy is not afraid of repetition. As long as it has highlights and makes people want to read it, as long as the writing is as good as the first half, even if it is slower, a large number of people will follow it. As a reader, I can only talk nonsense. Whether it works or not depends on the author himself. Finally, I wish the author will write better and better. As a small support, I will continue to pursue it myself. Come on, Emperor Zhongtian Ziwei! Finally, I would like to mention that the previous method of counting the years by the ordinary calendar was quite interesting, but it is no longer available in the second one, which is a pity!

The author writes very well, but it is difficult for everyone to agree. I believe there are many readers who like you silently like me. But we don't like to argue, just like the way you wrote this article. Anyway, go for it. If you keep writing in this style, you will definitely gain something in the end. You know, many books start to gain momentum only after they have a million words, especially for someone like you who is slow to start writing. Come on, don't lose your mentality because of some ridicule, otherwise it will be really disappointing. .

Reading is very enjoyable, a rare good book😊

It's not like the old author at all, and I feel like he didn't write well.

I heard that there is no heroine, so it's nonsense. The basics of cultivating immortals and the law of wealthy couples. Old Devil Han had raised a cauldron even when he encountered the Ping Jing, not to mention that he and Ouyang were both off during the Blood Trial. Wealth is first, love is second, and law and land are the last. Nowadays, many people who write about mortal life are not good at writing, because they cannot handle the problem of Taoist companions well. Afraid of being locked up in a dark room? Just don't use Taoist companions throughout the whole process, and then the writing will collapse. Think carefully about how to write it.

It's just a waste of time. I encountered a monster attacking the village and saved a little girl. The little girl's parents were killed by the monster. The little girl begged the protagonist to teach her to cultivate immortality. The protagonist tested the little girl's spiritual root and it turned out to be the best supernatural spiritual root 🤔

Pulling the hips, this is not a mortal flow at all, the protagonist is an immature scumbag, and the first ten chapters are not only sad for spring and autumn, but also incompetent and furious.

If such a childish and ridiculous content appears again in Chapter 212, I will definitely delete the book and run away. The protagonist, a casual practitioner who has been in the spiritual world for thirty or forty years, can speak such childish and ridiculous lines is really eye-opening to me.

If I don't talk about anything else, let's just talk about this: In Chapter 10, the protagonist saw a villager from an ordinary fishing village bullying a little girl from the same village. He stepped in to support the little girl. It turned out that the little girl was the mutated spiritual root Lei Linggen.

Add some essence. The daily recommendations are yours. I don't have much money, but I can do my best to support you.

Stop writing it, I don't really like this plot. What does Lin Xiaoe have to do with the protagonist? Is the protagonist pursuing immortality and immortality? If so, don't mess with modern people's thinking. In the world of immortality, strength is all about strength, and you should concentrate on finding opportunities. Unless there is something in Lin Xiao'e that the protagonist must get, it is best to reveal the dark side of others, so that the protagonist can live longer.

This kind of book title is a bit off-putting. Why are there more and more strange book titles like this in Qidian.

When flowers come, people can meet Let's discuss. We all hope that the protagonist and Xiao'e can meet again It's also possible. Let's discuss which novels with hateful partings are the most unforgettable 😭😭😭

After reading the introduction, I didn't want to read it. The waste spiritual roots can be directly persuaded to retreat. If the waste spiritual roots can rise, then anyone can rise, which is boring. The only plug-in that can save the dead spiritual roots is not clearly explained, so I can't see it.

The setting of Wasted Spiritual Root is not pleasing to the eye. There are already too many texts with this qualification in the mortal stream.        ，，，        ，，，，

Let me talk about my thoughts after reading it. I actually prefer the darker side of the story about cultivating immortals. After all, the world of immortality is too big, and it is not a legal system like reality. Therefore, we should respect the strong and kill low-level monks if they don't like them. Well, it means that low-level monks should be more humble when facing higher-level monks. In addition, the monk surnamed Ding is a bit of a failure. It is too normal to refuse to save him. It would be good if he didn't add insult to injury. Remember to hold grudges, but you are ready to take action as soon as you return to the sect. Are you too idle? I already have the Foundation Establishment Pills, so I don't want to think about Foundation Establishment at that time. What kind of immortal are you cultivating? Once you have established the foundation, you can kill the protagonist casually. The world is clamoring, all for profit. Even if it is about face, dignity is nothing. When your cultivation level is high, you can have everything! There is no conflict of interest, you and I are both on the same page. If you stand in the way of my building the road, everyone in the world will be my enemy. Personal opinion!

Anti-theft, why is it called anti-theft? Don't you need to eat to write a novel? (●) Some people naively said: Why can other authors steal such good results? I just want to say, haha, you only see the good side, have you seen the bad side? There are so many books at the beginning, but not one ten thousandth of them are popular. There are also many good books that are also anti-theft, but this anti-theft is divided into time periods. After the end, the anti-theft disappears. You say you don't want to order it, but Xilibala comes to greet the author. If you think the anti-theft is troublesome, you don't read it. If you want to read the free one, will you read the free one?

This is not the flow of mortals, this is the flow of useless people

I think Desert is well written. Please write according to the outline and don't listen to other people's nonsense.

Oh my God, if your grades are even slightly unsatisfactory, you will want to do something. Just keep doing it. If you have a bad reputation, who will pay attention to you?

It's a pity that my points were wasted on a eunuch

This kind of author is just here to cheat money💰. We readers pay money to read books. How can such an author just be a eunuch and not care about the readers' feelings? How can you be a eunuch and write an ending, right? I used to write comments in a large size before but they were deleted. Now this is a small size. I just want to express my feelings. If I write a novel, I have to give an explanation to us readers who have spent money, right? You can just express your feelings, but what about the money we spend?

The author's previous node diagram, I don't know if I can post it

Why did I go directly to this place when I searched for science to cultivate immortality?

I'm speechless. Scientific cultivation of immortality and scientific cultivation are all yours.

Has the entry been bought out? I searched directly and found this. How disgusting.

This book pollutes the label, so I will recommend a few novels about scientific cultivation of immortality: "I Cultivation of Immortality Scientifically among Mortals", "Into the Cultivation of Immortality", "Cultivation of Coders" and "Nuclear Powered Sword Immortal"

There is a recent book shortage. Do you have any good novels to recommend? I am currently reading this book as well as "The Mortal's Biography of Immortality" and "The Monk's Family". As everyone knows, "The Monk's Family" is almost 3 million words, and I feel it is okay. The author's writing is very exciting, and the adventures are one after another. Looking at the later stages, the articles are not messy, and there are more than a thousand chapters now, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the map is getting bigger and bigger. I just like this kind of grand world view setting. What is commendable is that as the map becomes larger and larger, the author has also made the various supporting characters very fleshed out. It tells a family story, probably a novel about a group of cultivators. I think this is more difficult to grasp than a novel with a single protagonist. It is not easy to get all the way to this point. I thought it would be a trap at first, but so far, the plot constructed by the author is very rich and the reading is very smooth. The character descriptions are just right, including demeanor, dialogue, appearance, etc. The copy tasks of the article and the main tasks switch naturally. A small problem is that in some chapters, the family ranks are inconsistent. The author can make these basic settings a dynamic item, so that there will be no differences as the context goes. In short, the writing is very good, the setting is grand, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are full, and the reading is smooth and natural. I recommend it.

Watched it on the evening of November 23, 2022