My Fairyland Connects All Heavens and All Realms

Very nice! ! ! Support! ! Should the author take the portal of the protagonist's fairyland world and travel to Marvel a thousand years ago and take a place in the ancient Kunlun in Devouring?

Most of the plot is copied from the previous book, except for the name of the pig's feet, which was directly copied and pasted. This author is so smart (▼ dishes ▼#)

The beginning of this book is pretty good, about going to all the worlds to show off, collect followers, and strengthen yourself. At first glance, there is no doubt that it is a fun story, but when I connect to the first Yitian World, I feel that the protagonist has no real character at all. There are a lot of repetitive words, and it looks very boring. When the protagonist flies down with his sword, and everyone in Yitian kneels down and shouts about the immortal, there is no sense of satisfaction, but an indescribable embarrassment. I suggest the author write an original world. This kind of fan world collapses too easily.

I'm sick of reading Jin Yong's time travel novel! ! Isn't the original world delicious? ? ?

It's best to write about this kind of original world, and there are also Jin Yong type worlds to write about. I really want to persuade you to give up. I'll stop here. I can only give you suggestions. It's up to you whether you want to or not.

I'm so tired from reading. There are more than a hundred chapters for Yitianshui. How many chapters should I write for Projection of All Heavens and Worlds? Can you finish it in your lifetime?

After reading the first 3 chapters, I feel that the setting is really good. When I see Yitian, I immediately feel like a good guy. Why are you writing this 😅

It doesn't matter if you drive high and low, just write it well, but after reading more than ten chapters of Yitian, it is really watery, and there is a long story of Yitian, and the description of the protagonist is still very boring. There are various exclamation points, and the focus is always on describing the protagonist's immortal temperament, but in fact, as written, it gives people the feeling of a juggler performing a chest-breaking performance.

In Zhutianliu, I have no problem writing about Jin Yong. After all, the audience is huge! The problem is that it was not written well!----First of all, we must realize that there is a problem with Lao Cha's world view! He was also anti-g at the beginning. Otherwise, can we do it together with Ni Kuang? Later, I just took advantage of the situation. ----This explains the problem very much. Secondly, we have to keep pace with the times, right? Back then, when Lao Cha's books were popular, the quality of readers was still low. Mainly middle school students. Nowadays, middle school students are busier than scientists! Times have changed. Even for online articles, everyone's requirements are quite high. Third, what Lao Cha has always been obsessed with is that he wants to go to Peking University and Zhejiang University to get a history degree. Why didn't it succeed in the end? Obviously, his level is not good enough. Therefore, Lao Cha's book is far, far away from the word "rigorous" (either in terms of structure or system). For example, as far as I am concerned, no matter how you wash it in "Yitian", that Zhao Min should die! There are various reasons, such as age, beauty, and different stances (the most damning one is "national integration"). Never watch it.

When watching this kind of videos, you must read the catalog first 😅

Personally, I just read the beginning of this book, but it has a lot of flaws, just the problems I found in the first few chapters. The author here writes about immortals, so it is obvious that a problem arises. The belief in immortality and incense is of no use to practitioners of immortality. Instead, it is a burden because there are too many causes and effects mixed in. When I first read this book, I was a little surprised. After all, there are quite a lot of articles about farming and cultivating gods in the divine space recently, but there is basically not much about cultivating immortals to open up blessed lands and caves, and then evolve into the world. As for the author's book, it is obviously the divine realm of practitioners dressed in immortal jade. Human beings are exactly the same. If they even insist on changing it, they would change the divine power to immortal energy or something, and add an infinite stream, or a heavenly stream. So I said goodbye.

The writing is too poor, typical of opening high and going low

It looks so awkward, gods want incense, and immortals should bring luck. It would be nice to just accept the main characters and supporting characters in the small world. Now in this setting, what is the difference between the Immortal Alliance and the Western Divine Alliance?

I seriously doubt that there is a kind of specialized writer in the starting point, and a bunch of roughly the same ones come out of one type.

Can't the Eastern Yanhuang Immortal Realm be changed to the Eastern Immortal Realm? This looks a lot like selling national sentiments

The beginning of the Immortal Era was 15,600 years ago, and as a result, a world with low martial arts was flooded with more than a hundred cards.,, It was really unbearable.

Let me make a suggestion. The author can take a look. Looking at the catalog, it is not as well written as "I Became a God and I Preached in the Chat Group". The martial arts writing is so long and the martial arts writing is bad. It must be fast-paced, otherwise the results will definitely be poor. The martial arts is overdone. Fantasy novels and fairy tales can be longer. Yes, you can write popular novels (do you dare to write The Other Side of Deep Space, and Holy Ruins has not been completed for long), and you can ride on the popularity. Although you are also a fourth-level author, there is still a gap. After writing so many books, you must make progress. You can't stand still. The "Projection of the Heavens" written by Pei Tugou is well written and has an original world. The second book "The Great Dao Ji" has a fan list of 990,000. {"NickName":"Light Ink Green Shirt","UserId":215626703}

The creativity is pretty good, but the level is not that good.

The most ridiculous way to describe martial arts is as first, second or third level. In fact, it's like academic performance. A score of 90 or above is first-rate; a score of 80-90 is second-rate... This can only be regarded as a ranking in the world. Since there is innateness, the only difference between the martial arts realm is the acquired and the acquired. Several tiers are ranked. If one has more talent, the system may only be classified as second-tier or first-tier.

It looked awesome from the front, but in Chapter 89, I started to exaggerate. I wrote more than 100 TMs in a martial arts world. It was really awesome. A god wasted a lot of time in a martial arts world. It was also fierce.

Hahahaha, the God Transformation stage is equal to Dou Wang. Let's not talk about other aspects of combat power. Let's talk about the golden elixir that can fly in the air. I remember that in Dou Po, it seems that Dou Wang can only transform his fighting energy into wings to fly in the air. Such a comparison is instantly lost.

You set the beginning so grandly, and ended up writing more than a hundred martial arts pictures. Who can stand it?

Forget it if you wear low martial arts, it's not a big problem, just do it step by step, but I really can't stand the verbosity. Every character and event has to be introduced from beginning to end. Other than that, I just pretend to be boring at other times. I don't know what I can read about it.

No wonder I got poor grades. I read twenty chapters and all introduced this and that. I have no idea what to learn. . . Speechless. .

Can this fairyland be understood as the Kingdom of God? Originally, all the heavens and worlds, the geniuses from all the worlds gathered together, concentrated in your personal little fairyland to compete for beauty, but the author, Yitian, wrote more than a hundred chapters. Maybe what the author wrote is different from what I thought. Abandoned. It is said that all the worlds are the result of a world of martial arts. What is left after so many chapters? A very good subject has been written to waste.

It's my favorite type, but it's too written. In Chapter 160, I conquered an Etian and conquered an orc plane. I had 30 years of stable development in the orc plane, and nothing happened. The resources accumulated every day were useless. Mainly Kokaku didn't do anything else and just kept staring. In the meantime, he could use the accumulated resources to develop his own fairyland and develop a few more planes. It's a lot of precious time in the early stage. It's just a waste of 30 years without doing anything. I'm sorry for the bad writing, but the complaints are messy.

It's so long-winded that I can't stand it!

Fellow Taoists, I have just started reading this book. Is there a female protagonist? If not, I will withdraw 🙂😰

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that the protagonist was no longer up to par, and started to feel uncomfortable. Then I looked at the table of contents and wrote more than a hundred chapters. . Abandon the article decisively

It's so poisonous that the economic system collapsed at the beginning Zhu Yuanzhang can let you do this~