Starting from Hong Kong Comprehensive Attack

How can you write a Hong Kong variety show without pictures? ? ? ? ?

Those who know this title are writing about Hong Kong variety shows, but those who don't know think it's about writing about the style of the Republic of China.

The pace is too slow, and the background introduction is too long-winded. Don't reveal so much at once. It can be added appropriately to the plot. Although it is Gaia's favorite cub, the characterization is not enough, and it feels a bit tasteless.

Hong Kong TV series has been in the starting point and has been enduring for a long time Although there are many similar characters but there is no identical plot Each author has his own unique opinion The path taken by the author includes the connection of plot characters I think it is quite good, which means that the author is true Understand But it's too wordy, the author can read it from the beginning The characters' psychological activities, ideas, including plot explanation It's like watching TV, there is a narration from beginning to end It's too wordy, many places should be mentioned in one stroke It doesn't feel real, giving people a sense of The feeling of being unable to be immersed For example, the content of a chapter should be about the protagonist doing things or chatting There are some things that you should let the readers know the importance through the plot For example, the police academy medal, but you lost a lot of money Who got it, how important it is, and what it is specifically One chapter is big Part, two-thirds, is all about the plot It's very superficial, the more you watch it, the more uncomfortable it becomes, the more you watch it, the more uncomfortable it becomes Be more concise, less plot explanation, psychological activities Focus on description, what the protagonist is doing, communicating with people or doing things, don't always water the plot, it will be annoying

After reading Chapter 18, the plot of the story has not changed at all. It is all about the introduction. Do you need an introduction?

The whole article is about introduction, introduction, introduction. Do I want you to introduce it? Who hasn't watched Hong Kong TV series?

I have also read the author's last book, but I have read only a small part of it and have not finished this one. How can I say that the plot design is not bad in the Hong Kong comprehensive section, and I can read it, but the writing style is too strong, with an ancient feeling of pretentiousness and slapping Long Aotian in the face. The author may want to write that the protagonist is awesome and smart in every word and action, but the overall style is leaning in the direction of Long Aotian. The writing style needs to be strengthened or the writing style needs to be strengthened or changed. Overall, it is readable. But it doesn't give me the urge or idea to spend money to read it. I'm just curious about certain plots and subscribe to those chapters individually.

It's still the police force. I'm a little disappointed.

There is too much nonsense, and the early transition is too long. I will be thinking about reading it tomorrow, but after skipping it, I will feel even less.

What the hell, after reading fourteen chapters, the plot progressed a little bit, and it was all repetitive introductions over and over again.

The biggest problem is that it only writes about your career, without any emotional drama. Do I watch Hong Kong TV series to see you write the plot of the movie?

The staffing is quite good. For the whole contrast, you can just lead the three younger brothers to kill them without making any mess.

It's so cool. Introduction to the previous ten chapters.

Wang Jianguo, the three of them described too little. His ability is so strong, if he is not able to stand alone under the protagonist, now I feel that it is useless.

Can the author's heroine look like Jackie Chan, Wu Jing in Killer Wolf, or Donnie Yen? Every Hong Kong drama has the traditional female heroine, but it's too boring and doesn't offer anything new. If you want to do something different, make it different. Only special ones can stand out from many novels of the same type.

What you said in the comment area is quite right. If you revise it carefully, it will be good. I can't read it now. You can refer to other popular Hong Kong novels.

So are there any women in this book? !

It's so similar to Sir Quan's book. I'll consider it again and re-imagine it. I still support you.

I remember that the author has a book by Jin Yiwei, but why can't I find it? It seems to be called starting from Jin Yiwei and pushing all the heavens ~ has it been deleted?