First Lord of Earth

The son of the starting plane turned stones into gold without any choice. Seeing what the author said about the market economy, I thought he was going to turn a large stone with several floors into gold and buy it. After working on it for a long time, I actually strengthened the skill, and I didn't care about strengthening it. I actually used three opportunities to strengthen a novice treasure chest. I almost feel hurt if I don't say a few words.

After reading only a few chapters, this book is the kind of novel that is fascinating to read but boring to read. Maybe the author pays too much attention to the problem of numerical explosion, and limits combat power through levels, and not only combat power, but also equipment, promotion medicines, and materials. All elements are blocked by levels. Once upgraded, the previous materials will instantly depreciate, and it will feel very fragmented to start over, so the fun of this type of novel is lost.

Author, the books you have written are quite good, but it is a pity that every time the late emperor collapsed before he started his business half way.

Recommended words: The author's last book made people laugh and cry. He had always written about games and lords, but turned to writing about weirdness, which resulted in him having to cut it in half! But this book still continues the author's best writing about games and lords! I believe it will be reborn again! In the book, the author sets human beings as the only "intelligent race", and all members travel to another world, and all obtain the privileged status of "Lords of Destiny". If you ignore the previous setting and only look at the plot behind it, then this book can also be defined as a game text, similar to a sandbox game. The lord has control over everything in his territory by collecting resources, making tools and weapons, building houses and castles, raising animals and crops, interacting with other lords, etc. These are all common operations in the game! But how to write a game article with characteristics and make readers accept it is a difficult problem! Then the unrestrained imagination in the article and the author's vivid description, as well as the arrangement of the plot progress and the distinctive settings are important factors that make readers feel "refreshed"! Author: Shi Yao Status: serialized, 100,000 words Tags: games, alien worlds, lords, farming Recommendation index: ★★★★★ Book recommendation in one sentence: When you dominate your territory, will you let yourself go? {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

... A fast-paced and somewhat mindless lord novel 1 It is obvious that there are too many cheats, which leads to a fast and chaotic pace. This cannot be redeemed by the plot alone. I can only hope that the author can exert more strength. , Don't just be too obsessed with it, unless the general environment is like this nb, otherwise just read it as a cool article 2 There is no problem for a literary figure like Wu Song. Another point is that the author's writing style is not very simple or bad. The main disadvantage is that the psychological state and image of the character do not focus too much, but focus on the prompts and chats of the official system. The indispensable part of the Lord's article is the creation of the characters. The author is too biased towards plot development and official things.

Alas, the idea is good and so is the plot. But his vocabulary is too small, and he especially likes to use the preaching word "you need to know". Very cheap, I really don't want to spend money to watch it

Is it enough?

From the beginning to now, the quality and reading experience have become worse and worse. I personally found the following points: First, chapters are always in a hurry and are not revised before being published. Secondly, after the founding of Baiyu Kyoto, the name Baiyujing was often mentioned. It was not called the Qianxia Dynasty. Even other surrounding forces occasionally did not call it the Qianxia Dynasty. If you must use it, you can add a suffix, such as You can start with the Baiyu Jingfu of the Qianxia Dynasty (after all, the Baiyu Jingfu can also be said to be a commemoration of the place where the country was founded), the Forbidden City, the capital, and other conquered territories can be divided into other prefectures. In the future, if the scope of influence expands, a state can be established on the mansion. Third, as for the arms, you can first expand them into an army based on the Yubai arms. The Yubai arms serve as the core special operations battalion of an army. When there are more soldiers in the future, you can form a legion. The intelligence type of Jinyiwei is not suitable for joining the regular combat sequence. You can build a separate intelligence department. Fourth, for the dynasty, the leader of the dynasty should call himself Gu. The title of the minister in the article is correct, it is indeed His Majesty. After all, this is a lucky dynasty, and there must be corresponding specifications that cannot be exceeded. Fifth, there is no careful sorting out of the rating of existing personnel, such as Zhuge Liang and Hua Tuo. I remember saying in the previous article that they have been promoted to the peerless genius, which is the Xuanhuang rating. Now they are still saying that Zhuge Liang was not promoted.

The more I read, the more boring it becomes. There are so many civil servants and generals added to the protagonist's territory, but every time he saves people or fights, the protagonist is the first one to go, or the protagonist goes alone. Since I am writing a story about historical lords, I will write less scenes where the protagonist plays, and more scenes of historical figures, counselors' strategies, and generals' killing scenes.

Your setting is really speechless. You were so awesome before the recruitment. After the recruitment, cats and dogs were able to pass several tricks. I finally upgraded, and just a random unknown person came to the same level. It was so ridiculous that it opened the door to the outside.

When I saw Chapter 143, I really couldn't stand it anymore. After reading the table of contents and comments, I felt that the comments were much more exciting than the novel. I feel like what readers have said, this is a brainless Lord game article and the pace is very fast. It's like walking on an assembly line. Unboxing and upgrading alien races and aliens. The tribe is like a variant that grows young and grows old, constantly looping, and it is written as a single player. When there are other lords, they are either SB or wow. The protagonist is awesome. Everyone in global travel has god-level talents. Is there really no one in the protagonist's area who is more powerful? How about you, a college student who just graduated? Even if you are the protagonist of this book, you are indeed very good. The other people are not very good. It feels like being hung up and beaten by a foreign race. Also, the protagonist always ends up. The generals summoned by you, the lord, are all here to do miscellaneous soldiers. There are also those who are not lords and have no explanation after they go to other territories. The summoned heroes feel like they are playing a game with everyone. Like NPC, there are many things that could be written about that are exciting, such as the collision of historical figures from various dynasties, the development of various lords, some farming, some fighting, some doing business, some doing art, some lords not dealing with each other, some joining together, all kinds of things, and if the alien race is too strong, can't some forces of Chinese culture and history descend? For example, there is competition with some emperors. For example, the Emperor of Ming Dynasty has Zhu Wuli Tianxia Zhuang who competes with the lords of the earth. Or there is Liu Bei's force in the Shu Kingdom and some people who turn their talents into personal talents to seek refuge. These are beautiful things that collide. There are too many things. I don't know why the author didn't write about it. I just wrote a simple drawing card and explained it, and then developed it on a stand-alone basis. The development of the territory was just mentioned in one stroke. The author's writing method may not be suitable for readers like me. I wish the author good luck in the future. I'll flash it first.

I really couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 160, it was completely meaningless. If you want to highlight the strength of your personal force, don't write about lords. Since you are about lords, you should focus more on wars and the formation of troops under your command.

I can only say that the author's writing is quite good, but his results are dismal, for a certain reason. Who is Lu Bu? Although he is not a positive character, he is as famous and powerful as anyone else. Just because the person who is not the protagonist, although he seems to be powerful, is set off by nameless minions. When he meets the protagonist, he loses in various ways. Or does he lose several times in a row in a single challenge, and then loses to a foreign race in the ring? Even if it was about being attacked by a sneak attack, it would be too depressing. Not to mention meeting a saint for the first time, an unknown alien saint who was suppressed by the will of heaven and earth and was unable to exert his strength was beaten and killed like a dog. He didn't even cause any injuries. He was only one rank short, even if he was in a great realm. It shouldn't be like this. The understanding is to show the power of the saint, but Lu Bu is not a little Karami like Hua Xiong and Pan Feng. He shouldn't be used as a background board like this. You must know that this unknown saint was immediately backhand and was pressed by the will of heaven and earth. He knelt on the ground and couldn't stand up. It's not just that the protagonist's camp is strong to make people feel better. This description of exchanging lives for lives or even exchanging lives for injuries will not feel like this. Even a strong man like Lu Bu cannot leapfrog and fight, which highlights the power of the saint. It was originally a climactic conflict sequence that caused the death of the top master, but ended up being killed in an instant. Anyway, I didn't feel much tragic and happy. Even if he was resurrected later, he was inferior to me.

You guys are really hungry, it's so good, I didn't even finish reading five chapters.

Blowing the Ming and suppressing the Qing, a typical dynasty fan As a modern person, I can only say that except for the Spring and Autumn Warring States, the Five Dynasties and the Ten Kingdoms, and the late dynasties, these great troubled times. There is nothing to brag about in other eras. I can't say I hate it, nor do I like it (nor do I want to deny or fabricate the history that already existed) I don't know why so many people like to praise the stinky feet of the feudal dynasty, as if they like this to be superior to others😅

When I saw Wu Song and Hua Rong in the introduction, I immediately lost interest in watching them. You know these low-class people, right? In China's thousands of years of history, there have been so many great figures who stood upright and claimed the title of ancestor! Whether it's real or fictional, there's so much that can be written about it, but I just want to pick out those few minor supporting characters who don't fit in with the rest of the world! It shows how shallow your knowledge is and how low your level of appreciation is!

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the author should just write about the game directly. Lord farming is based on folk customs, systems, and management. Your book is a typical online game leveling and treasure-hunting article. Territory is a burden to the author, and you haven't even written anything about it.

The setting of your eternal land is not as big as the solar system, right?

It's a bit outrageous that some character attributes and characteristics of love and love can overwhelm famous heroes and historical heroes.

I have read Chapter 358. It seems like I am reading a pirated novel. A lot of sentences are not fluent, there are missing words, and sometimes even the punctuation is wrong. Did the author not check it after he finished writing?

I can only say that the replacement of the eternal kingdom is not considered

The writing is good, except that it is slow 😰 It is recommended to slow down the pace. What I mean is to wait for the attack and defense. I also recommend that not too many gold characters appear in the first wave. You can divide them into 3-4 times Gold can also be related to gold, and you can engage in competition. For example, if everyone is related to the same person, what should I do? Either a battle, or a task completion, etc. Just like drawing cards in the game, you can also have regular activities. If someone draws the card away, it will no longer appear.

After reading the introduction, I was a little confused. Humans are the only intelligent race and there are alien gods.

The author writes very well. I particularly like this type of book, but the updates are a bit slow. Come on, I support you.

Reading a cool article made me depressed. I'm just hammering here and there, and writing a novel without even an outline. Qidian charges so much to allow these junk novels to be put on the shelves.

It's really not as good as "The Eternal Kingdom" written by Lonely Drifting

Queen Victoria is actually more powerful than Emperor Qin and Han Wu in fighting gods. In fact, Queen Victoria appears for the first time. This tendency of the author is very problematic.

The author will come up with a few more chapters, and the feeling is gone as soon as I read it.

Chapter 1: Persuading people to quit is not as good as staying in the eternal kingdom

I keep recruiting people and don't do anything. The people I recruit have no sense of existence when they fight. Anyway, I just keep recruiting people. It's boring and useless. There are more recruiting plots than fighting plots. After reading dozens of chapters, I get tired of it 😒😒😒😒