A Long Journey of Martial Arts

There are just too many repetitions, the same introduction over and over again, it's too wordy.

Why does every magic book add lizards to the Five Poisons? Toad, spider, centipede, scorpion, snake.

The author doesn't want to repeat many things many times, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.

Is it a plot of reconciling with the family and revitalizing the family?

This writing is too cliche, even to the point where it's basically a degraded version of the leader of the Demon Cult. I really can't stand it. Let's briefly describe it so readers can experience it themselves: the protagonist has a father who is just like the father in The Leader of the Demon Cult. He hates him very much. Then the protagonist and the leader of the Demon Cult He was assigned the same role as the character, and then killed his father. Up to this point, the general plot is basically the same as that of the Demon Cult leader. Then, later, we will skip the cliché shopping link and the clichéd beautiful saleswoman. Let's look at the following: He ran away like the Demon Cult leader, and then suffered a torture in the inn. It's an unnecessary vendetta, and then one of the parties bites the protagonist randomly, and then the other party comes to catch the pig's feet, and then the protagonist kills the people who come to the door, and then the people come directly to kill the protagonist, and the pig's feet fight back, killing everyone in the house, and then they take the treasure, and then the one who is killed The one who caught the biter gave another treasure, and left a legitimate daughter who became a sect. This routine is really too much. Reading the whole book, it feels like a tailor. Here is a paragraph, there is a paragraph, it is a familiar plot. To be honest, it is like picking up people's teeth and wisdom to become a tailor...

The setting is too casual. Your father is already a strong man in a prefecture-level city during his rest period, but later he said that the two Gangqi realms are not good in the world. It's simply

Brother, you can't even copy well. Your writing is so bad, it's like you have no sense of existence.

It's well written, I hope the author will keep writing. Compared with the Demon Cult Leader, the plot is not so low-IQ and illogical, which is better than the Demon Cult Leader. As for the writing style, many chapters always repeat the previous content, which is a shortcoming. But it is much better than the devil's leader's mindless ridicule and barren words all day long. Moreover, Chu Xiu, the leader of the demon sect, always killed the whole family, and some of the strategies he used were too childish. In his eyes, in addition to the enemies he wanted to kill all day long, there were some enemies he provoked inexplicably, or subordinates who had no sense of existence. All in all, in my opinion, it is much better than the leader of the Demon Cult. I hope the author can step out of the shadow of the demon sect leader and write his own style instead of borrowing from others.

You are still not decisive enough to kill. Alas, if you offend someone, just kill him immediately. Then run away quickly. Where is the first Atsushi family? You should hide next to the Man family who killed her. When the girl from the sect comes back, kill him directly. There won't be so many people chasing after him. If you don't have enough IQ, you can just kill the young master wherever the ruins are behind.

I keep mentioning the origin of Qigong method. Isn't it just to make up for the word count?

The writing style is not too good, and the plot concept is not enough... I want to write a wise protagonist, but the author really doesn't know how to portray it.

I'm speechless! Which martial arts master doesn't practice with concentration! The author is running around here and there just to code words and it's boring!

Knives, spears, swords, halberds, jade Xiao, iron fans, iron grips, and daggers can all be used as weapons. Why use a pen as a weapon? Every time I see a pen being used to hit someone, I think of something like Zhu in The Legend of the Condor Heroes, who uses a pen to click around during a martial arts competition. I feel so embarrassed.

I have read Chapter 32. Overall, the story is acceptable, the protagonist's character is also acceptable, and it is quite comfortable to read. But one thing is, damn, the author, are you a repeater? Over and over again, over and over again 🤓

The writing is so long-winded that it makes me uncomfortable to read. , I suggest you read Master Bai Jin's book to learn how to let readers experience it in concise and concise words. . . . Instead of writing everything down in a long and verbose way,

In fact, the word count could be reduced by half, and the plot would actually be okay. It's just too watery, repeating one thing several times, the number of words is watery. I know that authors make money based on the number of words, but no one will read your work. It's better to write better, more people will read it, it will become famous, and you will make money. You are picking up sesame seeds and throwing away watermelons.

I liked the previous poisonous skills, but when I switched to martial arts, I didn't feel like poisonous skills anymore. I just like to use poison. Although you are a demon martial artist, it doesn't feel like it. Demonic martial arts is just a blood exchange? There are no restrictions yet,

Overall, it's okay, but the writing is too trivial, making the plot seem draggy.

This book is similar to that of Chu Xiu, the leader of the Demon Cult. The basic structure is exactly the same.

What are you writing about? There are repetitions in each picture, and there are two or three more words in each sentence. The sentences don't make sense. The author should take Chinese classes for a few years before writing.

Author, you are a writer of novels, not a fish pond owner, so why don't you do this? What can be explained in one chapter has to be watered down in three or four chapters. If you want more water, you have to wait until it is released.

This book feels very similar to the setting of the Reborn Demon Cult Leader.

Is the author a repeater? The word count is always low

After watching a little bit, I couldn't stand it anymore. First of all, if your health is not good, why do you practice poisonous martial arts? ? ?

After reading the first three chapters, I don't want to read anymore. This is another plot that makes readers excited.

. . . I think this book can still be read without any thought

The plot is too weak. After a few chapters, there is no dialogue and a lot of local historical settings. I can only skip and read.

Chapter 180: Cultivation to Tongxuan. More than 300 chapters later, I haven't cultivated to a single level.

Why, Jin Yiwei's book has been sealed?

There's something wrong with going there and getting into trouble with the same plot.