The Forbidden Book of Immortal Dao

Thinking about it, in Uncle Bird's style, could the Milky Way be a Dyson cosmic cloud creation from a pre-ancient civilization's planetary system? Could the Zhou Dynasty's divination techniques be supercomputer-based analysis and deduction? Could the Jianmu tree of the Shang Dynasty be a space elevator?

After reading the first few chapters, what attracted me were the scientific Dao fruits of different schools of thought, such as the Righteous Dharma Heaven, and the powerful manipulation of electromagnetic forces in cultivation. I had absolutely no interest in the path of muscles.

Life Cluster system? Silent Kill fans are ecstatic!

It's incredibly pretentious, highlighting a world where everyone is a riddle-maker and doesn't speak like a human. It borrows the premise of Zuo Diao, but fails to capture that tenacious spirit and the unwavering courage to carve out a path with a single punch.

If you had just updated your posts more regularly, you could have been making a living as a writer long ago!

Heavenly Demon Weapon Stealing and Formation Technique! Don Armor!

It's too difficult to read. Can't it be more straightforward and easier to read? The premise of Silent Killing was quite good when I read it. Its straightforward and hard-line style is also a major characteristic.

The background and setting seem good, but the protagonist's personality is a bit too extroverted, which is a bit of a letdown. Yakuza-style protagonists are usually ruthless and taciturn, but this book's protagonist starts off as a crooked-mouthed dragon king, his pretentiousness feels unnatural, he talks too much and is too flamboyant, and he even likes to sing... This... This is a bit different from what I imagined, leaving me feeling somewhat lost.

The reading experience is terrible; some parts that could be expressed in very simple and ordinary language are deliberately convoluted. 🤔

The writing is quite good, but after reading seventy-seven chapters, the protagonist, having absorbed countless Daoist scriptures... Only manages to transform into a mechanical body with flesh and blood attributes, either growing larger or having its mechanical skeleton turn into a steam engine, then using its fists to fight monsters... Or using weak mental magic to influence mortals...