The Rusted Iron Crown

It was a bit messy, so I ran away after seeing a few pictures.

Advantages: The world setting and the extraordinary power system are very interesting. I personally feel that the design is rigorous enough. Although the use of too many uncommon words is indeed a bit middle-of-the-road, it makes me happy (laughs). At the same time, I can also see that the author wants to have a deeper intention. Overall, it is not so empty. Disadvantages: The writing style is uncontrollable and the narration is unclear, especially when two people are talking. It is really easy to randomly divide a paragraph into two natural paragraphs so that readers cannot understand who said it. There are too many irrelevant descriptions, and sometimes I get stuck while reading. Summary: I enjoyed watching it, but it seemed a bit tiring. (Since the author has the inspiration to write a book, everything is easy to say. In the future, he should pay more attention and practice his narrative writing when writing books)

Absolutely, all the critical posts are gone, but that's okay.

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. . . I was dumbfounded by the unscrupulous righteous protagonist and the villain who is not as ruthless as the protagonist.

After reading the introduction, I feel that the setting is "Silent Throne" + "Apocalypse Forecast" by Fengyue Niang. But I can't find the feeling of Western fantasy when I read the content.

Prostitution for a while, pleasure for a while (⸍ꔷ͈ᗄꔷ͈⸌)o

(Qi Miao + Feng Yue + Yin Tian) mixed low configuration version, very exciting

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