My Journey Through the Heavens Begins with Love in the Courtyard

I really feel that the author's writing is very good. After Qin Huairu's dark side was magnified, I suddenly felt that this was a normal plot. I originally liked this drama and watched it three times, but it was just awkward. I didn't understand why Zhuzi could tolerate their family. I was so angry that I didn't want to watch it. Although the author's character Qin Huairu is scheming, IQ, and EQ off the charts, it just feels right, and I feel that the next pillar will lead to a big explosion and a big reversal. I really want to see the fate of Xu Damao and Qin Huairu's family described by the author. I also feel that the author's analysis of Lou Xiao'e is correct. I also feel this way. Anyway, this is just my personal opinion, please don't criticize me. I really like this drama, and I feel sorry for Zhu Zhu. I just want to see Zhu Zhu stand up. Come on, author! ! !

Being scolded means that you are going to be popular. Keep your original intention and write in your own style. Authors without style cannot become popular. Come on.

What the author wrote in this paragraph is to challenge a person's inherent three views. He has always been very disgusted with a person, and from a God's perspective, knowing what Qin Huairu has done, can the disgust really turn into an inexplicable good impression in a few months? In order to advance your so-called plot, forcibly reducing one's intelligence is the biggest unreasonable. What you wrote is all shit

To be honest, I came to see Siheyuan because I wanted to see someone with modern thinking and cheats beating the natives through all kinds of tricks. The result is that the author upgraded the White Lotus Qin Huairu, and the relationship with Lou Xiao'e was ruined even though he had a God's perspective. In the end, Lou Xiao'e's family ran away. He was still talking about having an affair with Ran Qiuye all day long, and when this matter was over, he would have nothing to do with Teacher Ran. Is this a reminder that good things will come to an end again?

Maybe I shouldn't have had too many expectations. I'm used to seeing all kinds of protagonists who destroy people all over the place if they disagree with each other, and suddenly someone so sad and stupid comes here. I really can't stand it. I was lucky enough to read the previous book, but I didn't expect it to be worse than this one... Although the author said there would be a climax later, I have realized that this is because the old writer is sick, and I am scared!

After seeing Chapter 10, I skipped to Chapter 90 and read it. The writing is really good. As a young person, I am envious, jealous and hateful For so many scoldings, it is really deserved I have known a theorem since the first day I wrote online articles. Internet articles are a development game. You can set countless hardships for the protagonist, including dead parents and running away from his wife. But as long as the protagonist has enough gains, everything is not a problem. The harvest is the key point. The harvest can be life insights, skills, treasures, or even friends and lovers. The harvest can make the readers who lead the protagonist feel that it is all worthwhile. To give a positive example, in Coiling Dragon, Lin Lei's first love girlfriend ran away, which alone would be a poisonous point, but Tomato backhandedly asked the protagonist to carve a stone sculpture, advance his spiritual power, and gain both fame and fortune, all... To give a negative example, it is also Coiling Dragon, Lin Lei's grandfather died in order to protect him, it is also a poisonous point, but there is no such thing here. It's rewarding, so - the subscription is crazy, Tomato will never dare to write this kind of plot again Look at the author again, after chapter 70, the protagonist has taken the initiative to do some practical things. In addition to the cooking skills picked up at the beginning, the harvest is just a vegetarian recipe book - this is the most enjoyable one You can only add more plots of practicing cooking skills and find a reason for the protagonist to reduce his intelligence, and it won't be like this. Some people say that this is writing about human nature, laugh... It's not that I despise the author, your thoughts have not touched the logic of human beings at all, and you still want to write about human nature. Although I don't understand those books, I know them. When Shan Fan writes a tragic book, even if the protagonist is unclear, he must have attractive qualities, such as Luotuo Xiangzi, alive... And starting from Chapter 30, what are the characteristics of the protagonist? I can't tell, the writing style is all about supporting roles, and even more so, the protagonist is used to set off the supporting roles... Okay, having said all this, I just hate it a bit, if I have such writing style~... Finally, after reading the single chapter about the author's sixth boyfriend, I suggest the author read more life wisdom from those great people For example, the wisdom of life, and other books

This book is generally of good quality, but I think the author may be a little too hasty. In fact, each story can be explored more, especially the supporting characters. I feel that there is too little emphasis on the supporting characters, their daily lives, the psychological activities of the supporting characters, etc. In fact, this can bring out the protagonist from various angles, instead of the whole book just telling what the protagonist thinks and does.

Isn't it okay to move out of the courtyard? Anyway, Silly Zhu has accumulated a lot of money as a chef over the years. What's more, you are a time traveler and you are not really an aboriginal. With the ability of a time traveler to foresee and foresee, wouldn't it be good to leave the courtyard and go out to live at ease?

Well written, keep it up.

An old bookworm spent two days and two nights reading 4 packs of cigarettes and two bubbles in his mouth. He finally finished it, but it was a bit short.