My Journey Through the Heavens Begins with Love in the Courtyard

I really think the author wrote it very well. After Qin Huairu's dark side was magnified, I suddenly felt that this was the normal feel of the plot. I originally liked this drama a lot and watched it three times, but something just felt off. I didn't understand why Zhu Zi could tolerate her family so much, and at one point I was so angry I didn't want to watch anymore.

If you're getting criticized, it means you're about to become famous. Stay true to yourself, write in your own style. An author without a style can't possibly become a big star. Keep it up!

The author is challenging one's established values ​​in this passage. Can intense dislike for someone—especially one with an omniscient perspective knowing everything Qin Huairu has done—truly transform into a complex and inexplicable fondness within just a few months? Forcing a decrease in intelligence to advance your so-called plot is the biggest inconsistency. What kind of garbage is this?

Honestly, I came to this story expecting to see transmigrators with modern mindsets and cheat codes using all sorts of outrageous tactics to crush the natives. But instead, I saw the author upgrade Qin Huairu's image, making her a pure and innocent character. Despite having an omniscient perspective, her relationship with Lou Xiao'e was ruined, and in the end, Lou Xiao'e's family left.

Maybe I shouldn't have had too high expectations. Having gotten used to protagonists who wipe out entire families at the drop of a hat, it's really hard to accept someone so gloomy and silly. Hoping for the best, I checked out the previous book, but it turned out to be even more depressing than this one... Although the author said there would be a climax later, I've already realized that this is just the old-fashioned literary youth's illness, I'm scared!

I read up to chapter 10, then skipped to chapter 90 to take a look. The writing is really good. As a nobody like me, I'm filled with envy and jealousy. Regarding all the criticism, they really deserve it. From the very first day I started writing web novels, I knew one theorem: web novels are essentially a simulation game.

Overall, this book is quite good, but I think the author might have been a bit too hasty. Each story could have been explored more deeply, especially the supporting characters. I felt there wasn't enough focus on them—their daily lives, their inner thoughts, etc. This would have allowed for different perspectives to highlight the protagonist, rather than the entire book focusing solely on the protagonist's thoughts and actions.

Why not just move out of the courtyard house? Sha Zhu has accumulated quite a bit of money as a chef over the years. Besides, you're a time traveler, not a true native. With your transmigratory abilities, wouldn't it be better to leave the courtyard house and live a carefree life?

Well written, keep it up.

An avid bookworm spent two days and two nights, smoked four packs of cigarettes, and drank two puffs of soda before finally finishing it; it just wasn't enough.