Myriad Worlds: Back to the Nineties

As an old book fan, a message to the author: Before your writing power reaches the level where you can do whatever you want, you still need to write about people. To put it simply, you should write around the protagonist, take the protagonist as the core, and use the protagonist's experience to promote the development of the plot, just like you wrote around the protagonist in the early stage of the "Siheyuan". In the later period, the protagonist is hiding and farming, which makes the supporting characters feel very happy! I hope the author can sort out the priorities!

The protagonist is that kind of greasy uncle who doesn't match Murong at all.

I want to read the movies, TV series and novels you wrote. I just want to see thirty. Haha When you open a new book, you should write about what you are good at. There is a master who writes about cities and he writes about immortals. He wrote a hundred chapters and became a hit. You can think more about movies, TV series like Zhutianliu, I like to watch them.

I usually prefer to read it on the Qidian webpage, so I specially come to the app to comment. The author's writing is good, but I really couldn't stand some of the plots. It doesn't matter if A'Zhu doesn't suit your taste, it doesn't matter if you don't accept it, can you please stop mentioning who it is for so and so... I can't hold it back. I haven't watched the TV series "The World of Humanity" and I don't know what the plot is like. The last sentence of this novel talks about how Qiao Chunyan is the protagonist, but within two sentences she becomes someone else's wife. At this point, the more I write this comment, the more I feel that something is wrong. You, the author, must have something wrong with it. Other novels written about the human world are about Zheng Juan before she was raped. You...

I have never seen this book recommended for new books before. I came here this morning after seeing the review in Just Want to Make Money. I feel that the plot and writing of this book are good, but the popularity promotion seems not enough.

Author, your writing is good, but there is something wrong with the setting. To fulfill your wish, you need to be more in line with the character of the original host. Isn't it because the characters of men and women in urban dramas are too honest or too virginal, and they don't know how to repay kindness with kindness and repay grievance with resentment, always giving in and being a good guy makes people feel frustrated? You complete the task in line with the character. Isn't this embarrassing? I think the protagonist always gives in and does not pursue change in order to fit the character. This is what makes me feel so frustrated. What I want to see is change, rather than using the unknown to only improve living conditions and then being wronged or dissatisfied with some things. This is very boring. I mentioned it because of your good writing skills. This character-matching mission is a big failure. I hope it can be corrected so that more people will read it. Urban Infinity has a smooth writing style, so there should also be changes that conform to modern people's outlook, otherwise it would be half as enjoyable. Anyway, I read a lot of urban infinity novels, or I generally read them in the infinity genre. I have never seen a depressing infinity novel that has a good score in terms of comfort. I have written so many because the author's writing style is good among the infinity novels I have read. I really hope the author can think about whether this is the case.

Come on, author, I really like worlds like the ordinary world.

The heavy rain is gone. Come on, pull that batch over 😃

Why don't you tell me that you've opened a new book?

In fact, the writing is okay, but there are two problems. First, the characters in the book are sometimes very emotional. I think the author may have gone too deep into it and complained at every turn. The second is the explanation or setting. If you talk too much, people will get bored. The description of emotions and expressions is a bit too deliberate. In fact, these two problems can be classified into the same category. I think your spirit, the author, may be not very good and a bit depressed. From the first copy to the end of Zhou Bingkun's copy, I only saw this, and I felt impetuousness revealed between the lines.