Myriad Worlds: Back to the Nineties

As a long-time reader, here's some advice for the author: Before your writing reaches a level of complete control, you still need to focus on character development. Simply put, you need to revolve around the protagonist, making them the core of the story and using their experiences to drive the plot forward.

The main character is that kind of greasy middle-aged man, who doesn't match Murong at all.

I'd like to see your movies, TV series, and novels. I want to watch "Nothing But Thirty". Haha. When starting a new book, you should write about what you are good at. A renowned author of urban fiction tried writing fantasy novels, but failed after only one hundred chapters. You could consider movies or TV series like "The Journey of the Heavens," which I enjoy watching.

I usually prefer reading on the Qidian website, but I came to the app specifically to leave a comment. The author's writing is good, but some parts of the plot are just unbearable. It's fine if A'Zhu doesn't suit your taste, and it's fine if you don't want her, but could you please stop mentioning so-and-so all the time...?

I never saw this book in previous new book recommendations. I only came here this morning because I saw it in the comments section and was just looking to make money. I feel that the plot and writing are good, but the book seems to lack popularity and promotion.

Author, your writing is good, but the premise has a problem. Fulfilling the wish should also align with the original owner's personality. Isn't the reason we watch these urban dramas so much because the characters are too honest or too saintly, always giving in and playing the good guy, which is frustrating to watch?

Keep up the good work, author! I really like worlds like Ordinary World.

The heavy rain batch is gone. Keep up the good work and get that batch over here. 😃

Why didn't you tell me you're starting a new book?

Actually, it's not bad, but there are two problems. First, the characters in the book are sometimes very emotional. I think the author might be too immersed in the story and complains all the time. Secondly, the explanations or settings are a bit tedious; too much rambling just gets tiresome. Also, the descriptions of emotions and expressions feel a bit forced.