One Piece Odin Family

He was born in the same place as Kebi. Didn't he mention it? Let's get to know the future general, is that worthy? Oda knows how to use a hammer as the Pirate King!

I think the protagonist can give birth to a son, name him Odin Thor and let him eat the thunder fruit.

This Pirates fanfic is good, it's okay

There are many reasons why it is not popular. It seems that the protagonist is very powerful and can't beat anyone in terms of strength. Then there are all the people the protagonist suffers from. Kirby, just average. I will accept the high praise. Is there no one in One Piece? It always contains incomprehensible people, and I don't like the original Meisner. The protagonist is naive and writes about friendship and bonding. Are you writing as a native? It's ridiculous for time travel fans to write too many boring emotions.

The author is just making a headline. If you want to play Odin, you have to look like a god king. It's no longer interesting if the protagonist is so weak. It's even less interesting if the one named Odin is so weak. You still need to have the kind of early-stage force that slowly gets stronger, otherwise you'll be sorry for the name.

What the author gives to the protagonist cannot be called cheating. To put it bluntly, it is a kind of growth progress monitor. Wang Lufei is stronger than the protagonist in the same age group. Is the protagonist's cheating still called cheating? And the author thinks how strong are those who rose to the rank of lieutenant in the Sihai Branch through bribery? Don't write a Pirates fanfic for the sake of progress rather than combat power, especially if there is a so-called system failure.

The protagonist's health is not good. The physique of an ordinary person is 1, and the protagonist's level is increased by 0.1. Level 10 is the physique of 2 ordinary people. Level 100 is the physique of 11 ordinary people. Let's count it as 15 if you add the extra increase. A trained ordinary naval soldier has 10 power, which is only stronger than that of an ordinary person. Lu Qi has 4000 power, which is 400 times that of an ordinary soldier. It is approximately equal to whether the protagonist plans to upgrade to level 2000 or 3000? Or do you want to fight a general at level 5000?

Come on! So well written! 😁

Collected, very well written, good luck to the author.

The signing contract is already on the way, friends who want to invest can hurry up ~

Okay, it's well written. Should the protagonist take the physical arts route or the swordsmanship route, or eat devil fruits? What ability?

Very well written, but is that just one chapter today?

Yes, it's pretty good-looking, but it's a little lacking 🙂

I can't afford a reward, but I'll give you the recommendation votes every day

I don't understand the author's golden finger. Level 1 is equal to an ordinary adult, level 2 is equal to 1.2, And level 3 is equal to 1.3. Each level increases by 10%. I don't know whether your 10% is 10% of the first level no matter how many levels you upgrade, or more than 100% of the previous level. If it is 10% of the first level, then you won't reach the top level if you don't have level 500 or 600.

Washing pig's feet is too weak. You should be more modest. It's too high-profile.

No one will read this kind of writing, like this kind of revengeful heroine, this kind of plot arrangement, it all depends on the author, and it feels like there is no natural feeling promoted by the plot. It feels more like there should be tribulations, and then new characters appear, and the author arranges the tribulations, and they are going to die.

When will you get the fruits? The improvement in strength is a bit slow and the updates are also slow. In addition, the reputation does not have an unboxing process, and the increase is also a bit slow.

In fact, the author's group drama is good. If you come up with a better idea, you can create something original, and the fans will not have enough to eat. I like the book very much.

Good(✪▽✪)

Might as well wear it on Kirby

Can't sign the contract? I read some fanfics about vomiting. The first few fruit abilities can make a woman blush and her heart beats. Isn't this okay?