The Apex Predator of the Great Voyage

If you give things away casually, how long will you treat them like a licking dog?...

The character of Pig's Knuckle, a virgin bitch, feels like she has been crippled by brainwashing. To be honest, if there is such a system, a normal person can do better than Pig's Knuckle. The standard one does not know about wretched development, nor does it know some IQ strategies. It only knows how to be reckless, and it is still the kind of recklessness that relies entirely on explosive seeds. Also, don't be fooled by the Hokage. The dagger must be used to assassinate Yin people (it is small and difficult to be detected). This weapon is definitely not used for frontal unparalleled use.

How can the virgin bitch protagonist survive in this messed up world?

To be honest, I really didn't feel anything from the cheats given to women. The looting points in the early stage are so important. At 60 points, I gave them the skills. What a guy!

The writing is good (´-ω-`), I have invested in it. Farewell pigeon, farewell pigeon

I have read nine chapters and feel that there are several big problems. The first author may be a novice and ignores the role of the title and introduction. The protagonist is an ordinary young man who is smart and passionate. This is different from the indifferent killing described in the title introduction. Secondly, the author writes in the Japanese manga One Piece world, but a large number of Chinese names and some items appear in the article, which is also a failure. The third reason is that the author may not have enough writing skills. The protagonist obviously won the fight without any injuries, but he still stuns him in a tough way and gave an inexplicable reason. This obviously lost the principle of the novel, which was cool. Fourth, the battle scenes and character descriptions written by the author are basically zero. You should revise them.

When the protagonist was framed, why didn't you cut off the venomous snake's head and take it with you? This would be more convincing. Don't tell me that you have no strength. You ate something to regain your strength earlier.

Let's rename the book "The Virgin Bitch in the Monastery"

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I've read over a hundred chapters and it's so toxic that I can't bear it anymore! There is such an awesome system. The talents, skills, and weapons are all written so awesomely. The qualifications and understanding are super strong. After a fight, I was pulled apart. Either I was caught or I was killed. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have died hundreds of times! Deliberately suppressing the protagonist for the sake of water numbers looks too frustrating 🙄🙄

Now the fans have started to recommend eunuchs? I'm so stupid

Summary: The male protagonist is just a virgin and a bitch. He goes around helping unimportant people even though he is nothing.

It's well written. I have good writing skills. The first part of the plot is a bit dull, but the second part is more interesting. It's obvious that there is improvement. Keep up the good work.

The scene from Niu Er's death to the protagonist's departure is too bloody. From the previous protagonist's IQ of 180 to the protagonist's negative 180, from the moment Niu Er jumped out to his death, the protagonist watched the entire process, neither stepping forward to help nor running away. He only ran after the person died and the decisive image created by the previous protagonist were completely two different people. The synopsis of the story is too bloody

Has the author never read fantasy novels? We can't stand this forced sensationalism. Anyone who likes your novel is on the urban romance channel

How unsatisfactory your life is for those of you who talk about Holy Mother and licking dogs! I've only read a few chapters! Can you be a little patient and look behind me? Besides, I don't think the front is a virgin.

Nothing on the profile, liar

Loot system? Do you want to play a Madonna protagonist? Play that

This is a book from beginning to end.

It's not a good book. Whoever invests in this novel will easily fail. The title of the book does not match the content. Especially at the beginning, a bunch of people turned against each other and it was so messed up that I didn't even know what was going on. The captain was gone.

The author is always afraid that the protagonist is too strong and the writing will be ruined, so he forcibly suppresses the pig's feet. The problem is, who will read further after all the dissatisfaction in the front? If there are no readers to support the author, unless he writes for self-interest, everything else will be cut off directly, and then a so-called enjoyable article that is not enjoyable at all will be left at the starting point. Why bother? Let's enjoy it first, most books will be eunuchs if they can't be written...

I finished reading this novel in its entirety, relatively quickly, but the general plot is in my mind. I have never read novels like sailing or pirates, and I found that I don't reject it after reading it. Personally, I think the author's writing style is passable. If no one reads it, it's because of his grasp of the plot. Come on, you are great To the brainless guy: Even if a novel has more than a hundred chapters, it may take the author a year to update it. If it can be completed and have a complete story, I think it is already great. But readers only need to spend a few hours to read it roughly. If you are just commenting just to complain about the author, there is no need. It is really leisurely and elegant. As the author himself said, if you don't like it, you just don't want to read it. Does the sense of existence mean that you feel inferior? Laughing to death.

These 17, 18... The protagonist has been miserable from the beginning. It was not impossible to slowly come into contact with the world on the island, but in the end, a framed plot was created to advance the plot and let him leave the island, and then the extremely scarce resources at the beginning were used and given away. Ah, this wave is for nothing.

Looking at the synopsis, isn't the protagonist just massacring innocent murderers while shouting injustice?

Read Chapter 3, No Love, advise the author to give up, don't waste time

Okay, I saw Chapter 4, and I felt it was okay, and then I realized that it's not the One Piece world, haha ​​🤤

Seventeen and eighteen, after writing these two chapters, you can basically say that this book is a masterpiece. . .