Pirate Sky Dragon

The current book is completely different from the previous ones. If you don't want to write it, don't write it. It's just hard water. It's already the strongest group of people. Luffy is still a child. I'll see how you want to water it. Now that we have cooperative relationships with the ZF Navy and Pirates, how can we advance the plot without conflict points? The biggest flaw is that the protagonist wants to cooperate with everyone. Without enemies, there is no conflict. Is it possible to rewrite "I am invincible in the world of pirates and live a warm daily life" later? Or the protagonist forces NT and insists that he is unhappy with the cooperation and wants to do it all over the world.

Weibull has been weakened. After understanding the blood factor, he is a suture monster, a mad dog with a very violent personality (genetic defect) It can only be destroyed with stronger violence.

The connection point between the air and sky channel and Qinghai can be thought of as an entire island or base, and sent troops and a few powerful subordinates to guard it.

What was written well before was immediately broken after Roger was executed. The two fights with Sengoku and Kizaru did not describe the power of the fruit at all. Note that no matter what the setting is, the author just did not write it out. What I saw was that the war started, the protagonist got bigger, the protagonist's dragon body was punched away, and then punched away again, the protagonist was kited, the protagonist vomited thunder, the thunder and lightning was easily crushed by the opponent, without causing any damage, the opponent made a move, and the protagonist's speed couldn't keep up. The protagonist was hit, and the protagonist was beaten painfully... To put it simply, in the two battles described in detail since the protagonist got the fruit, the protagonist was against the wind the whole time, and was beaten, chased, hung, and beaten in various ways. There was no highlight performance at all, and no damage was done at all. Perhaps in these two battles, the protagonist's most glorious performance was summoning thunder to clear a wave of unnamed soldiers? Or is it a wave of big-tailed wolves relying on the data to transform into a body? This problem was okay during the Warring States Period, but just after escaping, Kizaru was beaten again immediately. Different suppression but the same headwind. After seeing it halfway, it was already unbearable. Some people may say that they are so weak because they are facing Sengoku and Kizaru. This is one reason, but this does not prevent the author from not writing about the power of the fruit. It can be said that 90% of all the sense of expectation created from the introduction to the previous twenty chapters was lost in these two battles. In these two battles, what the author showed me was not the towering sky dragon of the Three Illusion Gods in the game, but a flying 100-meter snake, which was beaten in various ways, without any of the style of the Three Illusion Gods. The main reason why this problem occurs is that the author chose the wrong opponent for the protagonist. Perhaps, author, you think it would be great for the protagonist to fight Sengoku and Kizaru in his first appearance. This idea is correct, but you can't help but overpower the protagonist's combat power. It's too obvious! It's really cool, but it was written as a point of dissuasion. A Warring States Period and a Kizaru. It is indeed impossible for the protagonist to beat him now, and he cannot beat him. Otherwise, the protagonist's combat power will be too high, so the protagonist can only lose. Even in order to better suppress the protagonist's power curve, you don't dare to write what kind of damage the protagonist can cause to these two people. After several chapters of fighting, he was basically beaten by various pressures. The protagonist scraped crazily during the battle, almost turning into a bathhouse back rub master, and then the other side said: That's it? Well, that's it. The strong character of Sky Dragon has been suppressed. It has changed from a divine dragon to a flying snake, and from the three illusory gods to a scraping monster. The core expectation of the book is gone... The author should change the article as soon as possible before it is recommended on the home page, otherwise it will be too late. In this situation, either the protagonist needs to be given two different opponents, and a lieutenant general from the headquarters can take action in front of the execution platform, so that he seems to be unscathed, or the specific battle process can be changed to increase the protagonist's combat power. Don't worry too much about settings and stuff. Ignore those who tell you all day long that your combat power has collapsed. Just write it if you enjoy it and be done with it. If you win both of these two battles, or draw, don't worry about whether it collapses later, at least it's a great feeling now. As a result, your ten consecutive chapters of headwinds are too encouraging to give up.

An Anxin has been practicing in hiding for more than ten years. In order to show off and watch the execution of the Pirate King, he even had a high-profile fight with Sengoku... With all due respect, isn't this just a gift? Are you really a time traveler and not the bad-minded pirate in the original novel? Oh, I know I can't beat him, but I just want to provoke the navy, and expose my own capabilities and threat level, so that the navy who happens to be free will chase me and hammer me. Kaido is a strong group and then he gets drunk and pretends to be cool by himself. He can run and fight. You take your family and send them to the group to destroy them. I said it is a benchmark against Kaido... Kizaru should not have the ability to fight at high altitudes (or pretend not to), otherwise the golden lion would not be so invincible. So if he can't fly high with others, Kizaru can't really chase him with all his strength. If he can catch up, he won't be able to paddle behind. This is my personal opinion and may not be correct.

I was caught again, playing with my own life. Whether I can escape depends entirely on luck. If I'm not lucky, I'll be waiting to die in jail. I don't know how many people will be persuaded to quit this plot, so I might as well enter once in a few dozen chapters, and finally become a prison escape king. Don't say you will be rescued, he is just a fool anyway. You write that the protagonist is deliberately caught, prepares the back-up plan for escape, and can make a taunt when he comes out. The protagonist's IQ is not mentally retarded.

The protagonist is not like a time traveler, but like a low-IQ native in the original work. His way of thinking and behavior have been perfectly integrated into the world of One Piece, a middle-aged and mentally retarded person. Did the author deliberately pursue this effect, or was his writing skills so poor that he could only portray the protagonist as a psychopath?

Sky Dragon is a really good idea. Who doesn't want a handsome god card? Fu Fu is not a big problem. I haven't seen any heroines these days. The author can just follow his own ideas. The problem is that the fights after the execution are really sparse. What impresses me about the God Card is that he looks so handsome when he appears. No matter whether he can fight or not, he can't pull his hips in this scene. Moreover, you are an air unit. You can operate a little and catch air units on the sea. This dragon has such poor awareness. After fighting Barrett, he was assimilated. He had to fight against this demon-slaying order. It would be better for you two to fight side by side and be caught in the end. (Maybe you, the author, have some plot arrangements, but your fight is too outrageous. Let the protagonist take his brain with him when he goes out.) It really doesn't work. It's better to save two chapters before this kind of chapter. I'll update it and release the later part as soon as possible. It makes me uncomfortable to read it. --Personal opinions, feel free to author, come on

Let me talk about the reasons why I feel the performance is not good. There are three main points. The first one is Fufu. She has no self-awareness and acts in the name of the protagonist, which annoys readers. However, the author is a very thoughtful person. He clearly writes less space and things that can be solved by hiding in the later stage. He keeps arranging things to appear like a fly, and the more he reads, the more bored he becomes. The second point is that Pirates fans don't write about 1v1 battles between hot-blooded men. The later period is all about daily py transactions, and the style of painting doesn't match Pirates at all. The third point is that the protagonist's combat power is too high, but the combat power of others is low. In the early stage, the nine-star fruit's other abilities are already at the top with three or four stars. The other generals and four emperors' abilities are set too low. With the nine-star fruit's physical quality, the other six-star hegemonic gas skills are already invincible. In the later period, the protagonist no longer practices and is just fishing for money. It is too boring. One ability of the four emperors should be set to ten stars, and other abilities can be used eight or nine stars.

The author listened to others' advice and deleted the emotional scenes, or just condensed them into one chapter. What the hell has he been writing recently? The most thankless thing about writing pirate novels is ambiguous. This world is suitable for writing monk novels. Friendly battles and adventures are the main themes. Don't ignore the basics.

I have finished reading the latest chapter. To be honest, Katakuri was able to fight with Barret and the protagonist without being blocked. I was shocked. The general level was described by you. How can I put it? Katakuri's strength is not as good as Luffy. According to your description, Katakuri was able to fight with Barret without being blocked. It's not a big deal. Bull B, I'm blind. Goodbye.

What kind of cattle and horses are written about snatching away friends' pets and selling them for tens of thousands of beli? ? 🙂 Traveling through time and becoming a child, have you become a child in your thoughts? Tens of thousands of Baileys are of use

Pig's Knuckle is really a dead ringer for Kaido's character. Not only is he the strongest creature, he has also failed seven times and been captured eighteen times. Moreover, even Jack admires the level of iron-headedness. Opposite him are Warring States, Aokiji, Crane, Peach Rabbit, Sand Crocodile, Lieutenant General and Giant. This lineup of Yonko would have to kneel down if they don't play in a group, and the pig's feet are actually as strong as steel if they don't run away. 🤔🤔

Can this also go to Sanjiang? Sanjiang is so good, right?

I took some time off from work to read it, and ended up finishing it without having to smoke a cigarette. Asshole!

The author should write less emotional lines. He doesn't have to write it hard, and he doesn't mean to teach the author how to write a book. It's really embarrassing. I think the character Fufu in Impel Down is very good, but there are too many tantrums in the plot, which makes people have a bad impression of this character.

I really can't stand this kind of cruel drama lately.

Give me more updates, and if you don't die, I will do more updates!

No, you want to become a Celestial Dragon? Author, do you really want me to give up? The call of the sea and the dream of freedom were promised. In the end, you told me that the protagonist actually wanted to become the worst oppressor, the Celestial Dragon. What does this mean? You are writing about Odo, not Song Jiang, right? Originally, a long and pretentious emotional drama would be off-putting, but after thinking about it, it fits Fu Fu's setting, so I'll forget about it. But what are you going to do now? Otto is worthy, he can be the one to sweep away everything and re-establish a new world, but now you actually want him to wallow in the worst stinking quagmire of the old world. What I hope to see is the sky dragon that has just gone to sea, high-spirited and passionate. Not a yes man for the world government...

I'm thinking that if you want to take the path of the Celestial Dragon, why don't you just become a Celestial Dragon at the beginning? You don't have to go through so much trouble 😅 So the path of the Celestial Dragon has been blocked by default, and you are going to the peak of the pirates. All cooperation with the government is for freedom, for the peak 🙄

Is this kind of plot interesting? I came to see Pirate Overlord, not to see those messy love lives. If you can't write, there will be no heroine. It's ugly as hell.

Good guys, I can explain the previous plot and plot in a comic style. Now I know I am being abused and I still seek abuse. Does this fit the time-travel character? Is there a Barrett who only wants you to lick like this? One Barrett now occupies half of the book. Author, have you lost track of time? The protagonist is a time traveler, this is a fan of this book, and this is the starting point. I look down on it, I gun.

I sincerely recommend that the author enters sage mode by doing a few rounds before writing every day.

I've had enough fun, I've spent all my money, and I'm ready to start a business. As for the subject matter, I am writing about Naruto. Because I have written fan fiction about Naruto before, I still have a lot of affection for Naruto. After all, I followed it all the way when I was in school. Shippuden just happened to be completed a few years ago, and a lot of official information was released. The Naruto timeline was finally supplemented, so let's get started. I am currently preparing the outline. After the outline is finalized, I will start to compile the manuscript and then publish it. I don't know the specific time, but it will probably be soon...

What about the new book? This year is almost over! Brother

I just posted it today, and I was originally going to save more articles, but it's already October, so I might as well post it. Naruto theme, this time the pace is a little slower. The title of the book is "I Must Activate the Infinite Monthly Reading", or click on the author's name directly to read it. Because this book is in a complete state, I can't post new chapters, so I post it here.

Because this book is in a finished state and I can't write a new chapter, I'll give you a heads-up here. The outline of the new book has been finalized, but since I have been paralyzed for almost a year, I have no writing status, so the previous manuscripts will probably be written a bit slowly. Maybe it is because I am older, almost thirty, and I don't have as much energy as before... Emmmm, I plan to finish twenty chapters and start publishing them. As for the estimated time, it will be October, There is no way I will skip the ticket this time. I am starting to feel guilty after playing every day. If you can't wait, please urge me more. If you push me, you can move...

I felt lonely after watching it all day!

Aren't you going to write a new book? It's a pity. The writing is particularly to my liking.

Let me tell you the truth. Your first book was already very good, and it was only 1 million words. You are rewriting the second book.