Pirate: It's Not a Fantasy Beast, It's a Fantasy God!

The whole Auntie chapter made the protagonist lose. He had lost once inexplicably in the civil war before. Can I conclude that the traitor dragon will definitely lose no matter how he attacks? If the author had this kind of virtue, he would not dare to continue pursuing it later.

The author highlights a person who has a big eye but a weak hand and a stubborn mouth. He has the heart but not the ability. The classic combat power weakens the growth of the protagonist, just like a child who has not grown up. It feels like watching a female video

It is full of fantasy about "pirates" and is suitable for ages 8 to 12.

The look and feel of the two hot spring chapters is better than the previous ones. The pirates' internal OS looks a little awkward, and the style is similar to a certain platform. The author is suspected of being stupid (laughs) The daily life of these two chapters temporarily pulls the reader's vision from the dull battle back to the daily life of the three little ones, and the handling is still good. Later, when describing the subsequent battles, the author needs to make it clear what exactly the reader wants to see? A portrait of the reader drawn to this novel is needed. Two-spined ape and terrier crowd? One Piece fan? What are the keywords? La: Wudiliu, little girl, mother Red-haired Blue Rabbit: daily adjustment, playing tricks, complaining, stalking the little devil, false three nos, and evil belly. These attributes revolve around the article's battle-daily-battle-daily chapter novel to unfold the story. The organic combination will prevent the audience from getting bored. I won't talk about the daily part. The author's control is OK except for being a little noisy. In the combat part, the author needs to give La clear opportunities to show off and show off in front of others. At the same time, it does not reduce intelligence. For example, in the previous battle with John, there could have been multiple HIGH points. 1. Show your domineering power to scare the new pirates. 2. The ship is too slow. Transform the ship into an obelisk powered by divine power. 3. A divine wheel appears behind Shira, and the attack special effects refer to the One Punch Superman spaceship battle. 4. Pirates are not good people, so they can't stop thinking about harmlessness. La's halo of the Holy Mother is about to become a halo of wisdom. Faced with direct force to suppress disobedience. In short, the action must be big. If the battle is not sloppy, it does not mean that everyone cannot see the attack. This is the opposite of the feeling of pleasure. You can refer to JOJO's combat rhythm. In addition, the author needs to consider whether it is better for the three little ones to go it alone or continue to follow Kaido. Yu-Gi-Oh must have more combat special effects! This is one of the great pleasures of integrating world views. You can conduct contact battles with each force in the form of chapters to determine the position of each force. Then after Luffy goes to sea, he will play a key role at an important time and make up for his regrets. I have already started writing a fanfic, but the plot is still going as it was originally, so what's the point? Not the author, the author's creative process must be hard, but if he wants to win more readers, he needs to grasp the readers' psychology. The above is just my humble opinion and may deviate from the group portrait. The author needs a more in-depth investigation with a large sample size to clarify the writing direction.

I think the half-life stupid God Pharaoh, the traitor dragon accumulating superconducting waves in the sky is very oppressive. Can the protagonist also imitate it? Don't make a fuss, just give him a day in the sky like Cake Island or G5 branch I remember there is also a book about Winged Dragon that also follows Kaido, but unfortunately I don't see Kaido Malik's fusion. I hope there will be a part later How about optimizing the two sacrifices where the Titan Soldier is effective? I really want to see the protagonist sacrifice his teammates, so I made up a setting where the quality of the sacrifice affects the damage. Don't use token-like soldiers as cannonballs. If you want to sacrifice, just sacrifice the murloc brother or something like that I think "sacrifice" and "black magic" are very important keywords for Yu-Gi-Oh. The 123 movies led by Takahashi himself are full of these two elements. Anyway, the protagonist is not a good person, or even a human being, so why not have more scenes like this

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I've been following this book and I come over once a week to read Magical Girls after get off work. I'm so blessed.

The Three Fantasy Gods and One Piece are quite interesting, but the theme of your writing is off-topic. We are here to see how the Three Fantasy Gods exert their power in the world of pirates, not to see you supplement the settings of the original work. You can create an original plot, but your protagonist must participate in it and take up a big share. You now have a relationship with the protagonist in each chapter. Does Guan's plot have 100 words? I read 300 plots related to the protagonist every day. It just came out. Who is still following it? If you think the protagonist is still young and it is difficult to participate in the plot, then skip the time earlier. The focus is on the protagonist, not the brotherhood between those original miscellaneous fish. You are already three clones. It is already difficult to divide the plot between the three protagonists, so don't write other miscellaneous fish. The consequences of group dramas will be dead Of course, if you can update 20 times a day, then pretend that I didn't tell you.

To be honest, in the original work, I think the Wano chapter is really the biggest failure so far. It created a bunch of gods and men, and even the characters of the Straw Hats collapsed. It is also a national issue. Isn't this handled very well in the early Alabasta chapter? What is the relationship between the protagonist and the Straw Hats? Were they directly dragged into a fight by those gods like Momonosuke?

I thought it was Shuangwen when I came in and found out it was a perverted article. I was frightened by the girlishization and fainted.

It can only be said that it is getting worse and worse, the characters are broken, the plot is bad, there are few updates, and it is just watery.

To put it simply, this book by the author is a story about a clone, a girl, and a female, who helps a man who kidnapped the protagonist to achieve his career. I personally think it is a bit poisonous. Newbies should pay attention to whether they can accept it before reading it.

Forget it, just write Uno Kuni. Don't write Kozuki Oden according to the original manga. It gives me the feeling that you are showing me shit, and I have to pay to see the shit you moved, process it, and skip it. It will make me sick when I see it.

Can't you just risk farming honestly? The so-called growth is really ridiculous. It's obviously a light novel, and there are all those irrelevant people. Why do you write so much? The protagonist often doesn't appear in several chapters. It's not cool enough, it feels like it ends abruptly every time.

After Arceus, there are also three phantom gods, and the beasts are getting better and better.

Although I have also enjoyed reading transformation stories for a while, I still have a question, what is the fun part about transformation? Why do you have to transform?

The author wanted to write too much, but he didn't have enough writing skills and was reluctant to arrange it. It was really a big challenge for a newbie to write group portraits. As a result, the protagonist's role is almost squeezed out. The original character's role is not many and there is no shaping. The description of the three fantasy gods as the theme is too little. The content of Yu-Gi-Oh is basically concentrated in a few empty lines, and the concentration is not even as good as Arknights...

In fact, the Wano chapter of the original manga can be completely deleted by the author. The protagonist traveled so early in time that he could directly kill the whole family of Kozuki, and the following time is enough for the protagonist to completely conquer the entire country of Wano. After all, that idiot Kozuki Oden can be worshiped by Wano. There is no reason that a protagonist who is stronger in all aspects than Kozuki Oden can't do it.

Ah, a clone? What, effeminate? What, single? One is more thunderous than the other 🔨

It was pretty good when it first came out. I thought the author had changed his style. I was looking forward to it. The result was unexpected. The Sky Island chapter is again the dream of a useless supporting character. It's on the shelves now. I paid to watch it, so I have no problem scolding you. You are a bastard.

Try to generate it with AI

It's hard to explain in one sentence. Is Kaido the male protagonist? What's the point of splitting the protagonist into three pirates? Does it make Kai feel good?

For those who want to read a cool novel, let me remind you that there is no highlight of the heroine in the whole process. The heroine is just a supporting role. The heroine is almost a nanny, and she is in the background the whole time. These are the previous plots, I don't know what happens next because I really can't hold on anymore.

It's a free chapter that everyone can read before it's released, so at most it's just a reminder not to engage in group photos, and the main thing is to write more interesting content. As a result, you're still writing this now that it's on the shelves? People update every day and just write group portraits. How fast do you update and write group portraits? If you do this, then I can only keep reading and wait for you to write more. Come on, don't worry about subscribing if you have the ability, walk the path you choose, don't write half of the story about heartbreak tj

It's a pity that this opening idea is a piece of cake. You can go

The idea was good and the early stages were good, but gradually it became apparent that I couldn't control it anymore. If I don't have the ability to write group portraits with multiple protagonists, just be honest. I can't stand it. It's a waste of my time and yours.

This book can be said to be complete now. The plots of the three little ones are getting less and less. In these chapters, only Osi appears. Obe's name occasionally appears, and it is far away to complete it. La even directly found no such person. I wonder if the author has forgotten that there is this person. It has almost no role in promoting the world plot. The plot of Wano Country is just a mess. The three little ones did not bring any changes to the plot. Now it's useless for three people. You can only rely on setting the word count. There is a high probability that it will be directly transferred to the nanny article later.

It's been a while since La and Obe appeared, and Ossie only mentioned them a few times. Are they still the protagonists? Could it be that the author has run out of ideas and simply copied the original plot? But it's not as satisfying if you copy the original plot. Kaido has been strengthened so much, but in the end it fell apart if it wasn't for Osi, and the performance is not as good as the original manga. Ossie is now a pure nanny and thug. I write it timidly because I am afraid that if I hit too hard, everyone will be killed. I don't know how to write it later.

The plot is procrastinating, abandoned and abandoned. It is related to Yu-Gi-Oh and is not even related to Yu-Gi-Oh.