The Black Sand Swordmaster

There's absolutely no satisfying moment. Such a great cheat ability is completely wasted on the protagonist! The entire novel is just the author complaining about and being dissatisfied with his company. The protagonist is portrayed as a negative, low-energy employee, constantly blaming the company and everything else. He lacks any of the confidence or ambition of a transmigrator with a cheat ability. Reading the whole thing was incredibly frustrating!

The Five Elements are wasted; why is it always written like this? It's getting more and more annoying to read.

Transmigrating into Douluo Continent, the protagonist is initially bullied by Bibi Dong, but then summons Queen Medusa. Queen Medusa battles Pope Bibi Dong, the Douluo Great Battle is broken, and the beautiful Yan Ling Ji, Hinata Hyuga, and all the goddesses of the heavens are summoned to the Douluo world. Want to know who's stronger, Cai Lin or Bibi Dong? Come check it out! Just click in to find out. Starting with Douluo Continent, I'll draw a goddess.

As a seasoned bookworm, let me offer my critique. The idea was good, but you really ruined it. The biggest flaw is that every time the plot progresses, you intersperse it with too many explanations, background settings, and unnecessary details, completely eliminating any room for imagination and making the reader feel completely lost.

This book should be called: Da Zhuang is the protagonist's father's cultivation journey.

It's clearly a great support system, but for the sake of the plot, they deliberately create difficulty. From the very beginning in the mortal city, you should know what kind of world this is. After finally reaching the Sword Sect, instead of improving your strength and acquiring equipment, you insist on fighting monsters.

If it's a wish-fulfillment story, it lacks excitement; if it's a plot-driven story, it's stale; if it's detailed, it lacks writing style; and it only presents stereotypical characters. A clichéd "kind" protagonist, with an endless stream of treacherous villains. The supporting characters always reap the benefits. It really captures the frustration of working people. I suggest renaming it "The Working Class Behind Dazhuang's Growth Story".

Let me know when things start to get enjoyable; it's absurd right now. The protagonist is problematic from beginning to end. The protagonist is truly just an average person. In PvP among players of the same tier, it ranks in the lower middle. Its leveling speed is also slow. It has many ideas, constantly switching between different things. This perfectly reflects its overall development speed. Developing in all aspects during the early and mid-game makes it truly useless.

He loves to complain too much. He complains when he's just a mortal, he complains after entering a sect, and he still complains even after gaining some power. What's the point of all this complaining? Can't he see beauty in ugliness? Or is he dreaming of a fantasy paradise?

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