The Black Sand Swordmaster

It's not fun at all. Such a good golden finger is completely wasted by the protagonist! The whole novel is full of the author's complaints and dissatisfaction with his company. The protagonist in the novel is a wage earner full of negative energy, who keeps complaining that the company is not good, and it is not good here or there! It doesn't have the spirit of a time traveler holding a golden finger. The whole article is very frustrating to read!

The Five Elements Wasted Body, why is it always written this way? The more I read it, the more annoying it becomes.

Traveling through the Douluo, he was bullied by Bibi Dong at the beginning, and directly summoned Queen Medusa. Queen Medusa fought against Pope Bibi Dong, and the Douluo battle was broken. The beautiful Flame Spirit Princess, Hyuga Hinata, and the goddesses of the heavens were all summoned to the Douluo world by the protagonist. Want to know who is better, Cai Lin or Bibi Dong? Come and take a look, just click in and watch. Starting from Douluo to draw the goddess

As an old bookworm, I would like to comment that the idea is good, but you really ruined it. The biggest flaw is that every time the plot advances, there are a lot of explanations, setting backgrounds and nonsense. It completely loses the imagination and the sense of substitution. In addition, the character setting of the protagonist should be wise and decisive at the beginning, but later it became hesitant. Mother-in-law, there is too much inner drama.

This book should be called: Da Zhuang is the protagonist's father's spiritual practice career

It is obviously a very good auxiliary system, but for the sake of plot and story, the difficulty is deliberately created. From the beginning of the mortal city, you should know what kind of world this is ⊙_⊙I finally got to Sword Sect, and I didn't want to improve my strength and buy equipment, so I had to fight some monsters. In a sword sect that doesn't learn how to forge magic weapons and flying swords, it's clear that the sword hut is the best place, and then it drags on building the foundation instead of improving the cultivation level. What realm doesn't the library pavilion teach? What to do? What to mention? . You have to force yourself to add drama and create some kind of five-element waste body, but what does this have to do with the title of your book, Black Shark Sword Master? He had obviously experienced a battle to exterminate the sect, and was almost killed by a fox. He even ran over to adjust some formations, without thinking about improving himself. It is clearly a big change and a big crisis. Some masters don't ask how to improve their cultivation, but insist on doing it themselves, because the people who traveled back in time are superior to others and look down on others. What should I say? It's a good start. You can make a sword out of sand and match your name. Oh, forget it -_-||

It's not as fun to read as a cool novel, it's an old story, it's delicate but not written, and the characters are full of features A clichéd "kind" protagonist, and endless sinister villains. Always gets the benefit of being cast in a supporting role. It really embodies the frustration of beating workers. Suggested name change, "The Workers Behind the History of Strong Growth"

Please call me when it started to feel good, now it's too outrageous. The main character is a problem from beginning to end. The protagonist is a real gem. Ranked in the middle and lower reaches of the same level. The upgrade speed is not fast either. There are so many ideas, one in the east and one in the west. It reflects the development speed of full length very well. All aspects of development in the early and mid-term are really useless.

I like to complain too much. You complained when you were a mortal, you complained after you entered the sect, and you still complain when you have some power. What is the meaning of these complaints? Can the eyes only see ugliness but not beauty? Or are you thinking about a dream paradise? In real life, it is difficult to break down the hierarchy, but in the novel, with such a strong golden finger, how come there are still so many negative emotions? With Golden Finger, if you are dissatisfied with the status quo, you can sit at the top and change it yourself. But in this novel, we only see compassion and compassion on the lips, but in reality, there is no change and selfishness.

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