Pirates Start with Breathing Techniques

To put it bluntly, it's just the author's imagination, and the writing is not strong enough. The plot can just be copied from the anime and changed. This is what the Pirates fandoms were like many years ago.

When it comes to Funagaru, the protagonist should have unique characteristics, and it would be good to develop into a Gintama-like funny character. The position on the ship can actually be developed in the direction of a think tank. Dancers are not that important on the ship. The positions of swordsman and deputy captain belong to Sauron in the original book. Only the think tank is important and unique, and the protagonist is a time traveler, so reverse reasoning can reflect the image of the think tank. In the future direction of strength development, the protagonist can develop in the direction of red hair. Because Sauron is developing in the direction of Hawkeye, this will not prevent Sauron from realizing his ideals. The opponent is preferably an original character, which will not hinder the growth of other Straw Hats and can be integrated into the plot. As for the plot, the TV adaptation + theatrical version + original version can cover a lot of words. It is best not to deviate from the One Piece world. ps: I don't know that the Breathing Talisman does not fit into the One Piece world.

It is difficult to follow the ship. Interfering with the plot will prevent the protagonist group from getting the training it deserves, which will pave the way for conflict in combat power in the later stage. If it does not interfere with the plot, it will be no different from the original work. This is why it is easy to follow the ship.

Be a pirate? Don't all pirates deserve to die?

You can follow a boat or you can be a dancer, but at least you have to have something special, such as the heroines Robin and Nami. This will be unique. Isn't dating on a boat a special feature? What are you writing about? The ship is doomed to have no characteristics and is weak in strength. You have not figured out what the readers here want to see. Some old perverts want to see love, some want to see passion, some want to see Luffy tortured. Isn't this the only point for fandom? Why can't you make up your mind? You let the protagonist fall in love with Nami Robin, the daily life on the ship, and then Luffy and the others are responsible for the passionate plot. Follow the plot, the outline will come, the word count will come, and the features will come.

In Demon Slayer, the most powerful thing is not the Breathing Technique of the Sun. The most powerful thing is Enichi Tsukuni.

Is it enough for you to bring the entire Demon Slayer World here to defeat the three navy generals? You, a cheater, might as well go home and practice your domineering skills.

To be honest, I have clicked on this book 5 times because of the relationship with the boat. I can't read more than 5 chapters. The plot is too trivial and the protagonist is too stupid. Is this written seriously?😅

Is it all breathing techniques? Not as good as Hawkeye's flat A

When you see the breathing method, click on it and take a look. When you see the dancer in the introduction, you have no desire to watch it 😐

It's watchable, but the main character is too fake. You know, his personality, every aspect, is like trying to cater to everyone on the ship. He doesn't change it after every reflection. He doesn't have his own characteristics and is even inferior to Usopp. He doesn't take it seriously at all, just like he's playing a game.

Why would Sauron ask someone to untie him? This has directly changed his character. It's very uncomfortable. Have you never watched One Piece?

The Breath of the Sun has a useless role in the world of pirates. The Breath of the Sun is at most the same as other breaths when it comes to Demon Slayer. It is not as powerful as the Breath of the Moon. The Breath of the Sun is famous in Demon Slayer because it does great harm to ghosts. Killing demons in One Piece? The strongest one out of Demon Slayer is probably Breath of the Moon

I think a painter is more reliable than a dancer. I dream of painting scenery all over the world. Does a dancer dream of dating dances from all over the world?

Come on, but this dancer thing is a bit poisonous, Demon Slayer's Breath of the Sun is essentially a sword skill.

The most common mistake to make when following the flow of the boat is that with you and without you, everything is the same, just a sideshow, so can't I just go back and watch the animation?

It seems that no one still understands that the breath of the moon is the most powerful breathing method. Except in Demon Slayer, in other worlds, the breath of the moon stabilizes the breath of the sun. Others are the strongest when they do more damage to ghosts. Killing ghosts in the pirate world? And the moon breath has been upgraded for hundreds of years, and its skills have reached its peak. What the pirate world needs is this kind of sword technique.

The most outrageous thing in the One Piece world is that Luffy became the Pirate King within three months.

The most disgusting thing about following the boat flow is that the first chapter is traveling through time, the second chapter is invincible, and the third chapter is being a licking dog

Why don't you bring in some more of Hokage's ninjutsu? Don't everyone on the spaceship want to see ninjas?

Why did you write this novel? In order to make your home appliance meter jump two more words, what did you write? What's the protagonist's mentality? If you don't show off your face, you are really outstanding. How can you fish in troubled waters when others beat you to death? ? My diva still jumps into the plot, but I can't understand it no matter how I copy it?

Quite average Everything is mixed in but nothing changes, a dispensable character And many times it is done forcefully. The protagonist of the original plot starts to mess up and let the plot happen. He has to complete the system tasks even when his partners are injured. Moreover, the protagonist has a sense of superiority and always looks down on those characters who have less scenes. He has a lot of breathing techniques that are messed up but useless. He has high vision but low hand, hypocrisy and inner vacillation. It is really embarrassing to be a supporting role.

Anyone who wants to read the hydrology that I can't even understand when copying the original work should read it.

The most annoying thing about Ji Chuan Liu is that every plot is detailed and without any changes, you can just mess up the order. Today, the Great Channel forcibly raided Alabasta, then circled back, and then directly raided the Capital of Seven Waters, as well as combat capabilities and the like. . . If you can omit it, just omit it. Some boring plots will be briefly mentioned.

The weakness of the breathing method is too obvious. As long as you use poisonous smoke during the fight, you will win.

What about the Shampoo Island chapter? Jumping into the plot?

Can't the system give the protagonist a Nichirin sword? Or how about using an ordinary sword in a lottery? I just saw the ending of Sky Island.

There are a lot of typos, which greatly affects reading. There are also many irregularities in the sentences, making it feel like a running account.

I am still popular with the boat flow. It seems that it has not been long since I opened the book. My writing is not good, but I have more than 100 monthly tickets.

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