People Expand in the Realm of Pirates

The protagonist who can't even defeat Katakuri still wants to kill Big Mom, this is the protagonist's IQ. . . . .

The comic aunt has left the show, speechless and inexplicably defeated.

Which time period is this? Karina in Voyager the Movie feels no worse than Nami.

Spell teachings? The more people who know about it, the stronger the spell will be, so every time a fight starts, the spell master will introduce his abilities.

It's no wonder that you are so popular. Wealth, status, and power are the easiest ways to become famous. The character of the protagonist is not good at first glance.

To be honest, I feel that spells are not suitable for combining multiple genres for the protagonist. It mainly can expand the domain and be invincible in the basic space, unless someone opens a domain and destroys your domain. Therefore, it is basically useless to open so many fields. It would be better to continuously develop a kind of spell ability to open fields, or to merge with pirates.

Kaido Jiao Da and martial arts? Isn't there taijutsu in One Piece? It looks so embarrassing

And since Yamato is the heroine, I really find this name annoying.

I've watched a lot, and I feel like my hobby is generating electricity.

Goldfinger is a game where reputation can enhance the field of spells. To be honest, it's pretty awesome, but the main character has no brains. He starts out in Wano Country to reach a level of strength that cannot be improved, and then goes out to sea to fight Bigmon. Even if he fights against a general, he almost overturns. He just defeated the general. Just say that you want to be invincible. Who gives you the courage to fight the four emperors? You won't be able to do it slowly. The protagonist in the author's works is very reckless and has plans, but he is super arrogant. If he were not the protagonist, no matter how many bugs Goldfinger made, the protagonist would not know how many times he would die.

The creativity is good, but the writing is not good. Try to improve it, otherwise it will be difficult to continue reading.

My personal feeling is that the ideas are okay, but the writing style cannot keep up, and there is no detailed description. Sometimes it looks a bit confusing and feels a bit broken. I hope to improve the writing style more.

The main character is sick and I couldn't stand it after 5 chapters.

To be honest, the protagonist written by the author is actually a bit naive. How can I put it, he is immature compared to other protagonists.

The first chapter is well written.

After reading a few chapters, I still don't know what the protagonist looks like. He can't be shorter than Yamato, right?

I haven't seen the spells, can you explain the effects of each field? Otherwise it looks a bit numb.

Good guy, it's too miserable if I'm the only one who has fully booked it.