One Piece: Starting with Breathing Techniques

To put it bluntly, it's just the author's imagination, and the writing is not strong enough. The plot can just be copied from the anime and changed. This is what the Pirates fandoms were like many years ago.

When it comes to Funagaru, the protagonist should have unique characteristics, and it would be good to develop into a Gintama-like funny character. The position on the ship can actually be developed in the direction of a think tank. Dancers are not that important on the ship. The positions of swordsman and deputy captain belong to Sauron in the original book. Only the think tank is important and unique, and the protagonist is a time traveler, so reverse reasoning can reflect the image of the think tank. In the future direction of strength development, the protagonist can develop in the direction of red hair. Because Sauron is developing in the direction of Hawkeye, this will not prevent Sauron from realizing his ideals. The opponent is preferably an original character, which will not hinder the growth of other Straw Hats and can be integrated into the plot. As for the plot, the TV adaptation + theatrical version + original version can cover a lot of words. It is best not to deviate from the One Piece world. ps: I don't know that the Breathing Talisman does not fit into the One Piece world.

It is difficult to follow the ship. Interfering with the plot will prevent the protagonist group from getting the training it deserves, which will pave the way for conflict in combat power in the later stage. If it does not interfere with the plot, it will be no different from the original work. This is why it is easy to follow the ship.

Be a pirate? Don't all pirates deserve to die?

You can follow a boat or you can be a dancer, but at least you have to have something special, such as the heroines Robin and Nami. This will be unique. Isn't dating on a boat a special feature? What are you writing about? The ship is doomed to have no characteristics and is weak in strength. You have not figured out what the readers here want to see. Some old perverts want to see love, some want to see passion, some want to see Luffy tortured. Isn't this the only point for fandom? Why can't you make up your mind? You let the protagonist fall in love with Nami Robin, the daily life on the ship, and then Luffy and the others are responsible for the passionate plot. Follow the plot, the outline will come, the word count will come, and the features will come.

In Demon Slayer, the most powerful thing is not the Breathing Technique of the Sun. The most powerful thing is Enichi Tsukuni.

Is it enough for you to bring the entire Demon Slayer World here to defeat the three navy generals? You, a cheater, might as well go home and practice your domineering skills.

Is it all breathing techniques? Not as good as Hawkeye's flat A

To be honest, I have clicked on this book 5 times because of the relationship with the boat. I can't read more than 5 chapters. The plot is too trivial and the protagonist is too stupid. Is this written seriously?😅

It's watchable, but the main character is too fake. You know, his personality, every aspect, is like trying to cater to everyone on the ship. He doesn't change it after every reflection. He doesn't have his own characteristics and is even inferior to Usopp. He doesn't take it seriously at all, just like he's playing a game.