One Piece: Starting with Breathing Techniques

To put it bluntly, "ship-themed" fanfiction is just the author's wild imagination, lacking in writing skill; they simply copy the plot directly from the anime and modify it. Many years ago, One Piece fanfiction was like this.

If you're going for a ship-themed storyline, the main character needs to have unique traits; developing a comedic character like those in Gintama would be a good idea. The ship's roles could actually be developed in the direction of a strategist. The dancer isn't that important on the ship, and the swordsman and first mate positions originally belonged to Zoro.

Joining a ship is difficult; interfering with the plot prevents the main characters from getting the necessary training, foreshadowing later power struggles. Not interfering means sticking to the original story, which is why joining a ship is prone to failure.

Become a pirate? Aren't all pirates supposed to die?

Following the ship is fine, being a dancer is fine, but at least you need a unique element, like the female leads Robin and Nami. That would be unique, wouldn't it? A romance on a ship—isn't that a unique element? What did you write? Following the ship is destined to lack uniqueness, and the characters are weak. You haven't grasped what the readers want to see.

In Demon Slayer, the most powerful technique isn't the Sun Breathing method, but Yoriichi Tsugikuni.

Even if you moved the entire Demon Slayer world here, would it be enough for the three Marine Admirals to fight? Your cheat-like abilities are so bad, you might as well go home and practice Haki.

All of these are breathing techniques? They're not even as good as Hawkeye's basic attack.

To be honest, I've opened this book five times because of its connection to the "shipping" genre, but each time I only read five chapters. The plot is too simplistic, and the protagonist is too stupid. Is this book for real? 😅

It's watchable, but the main character is too fake, you know? His personality, every aspect of him, seems to be just trying to please everyone on the ship. Every time he reflects on his actions, he doesn't change; he has no unique characteristics or personality, and he's even worse than Usopp. He doesn't seem to take it seriously at all, like he's just playing a game.