Creating the Age of Anime

Anime I'd like to see: High-quality anime like Fullmetal Alchemist, Hikaru no Go, Glass Mask, and Ninja Scrolls

Honestly, I could read 100 books like this and never get tired of it, just please don't write about women.

The writing is really bad! This isn't meant to criticize you or target you intentionally; it's just that I've read better ones. It's like eating better food and then eating the same old dishes—it just doesn't taste right. Having read better novels of this genre, reading yours really isn't good!

I didn't expect the author to be writing two books at once!

So far it's not bad, it's just that there aren't enough words.

Here's a vote for you, you're welcome.

The word count is a bit too low, it's way too short! I'll save it for later!

Honestly, after seeing the first thirty pages, I was completely baffled – were you writing about copying anime or just slice-of-life? If you don't know the theme song, let me tell you, you're aiming to be a Pokémon master and have watched the anime. It's not that your slice-of-life writing is bad, it's mainly the anime! The anime needs to be exactly as the title suggests.

It's been almost a month since I started writing. Let me put it simply. I've read the opinions offered by many people. Uh, there are indeed problems with what I wrote. The initial setup wasn't quite right, so I thought I'd work on the game for a year first, and during that time I'd introduce the main characters around the protagonist.

I haven't watched much yet, but the setting seems to be in China! I feel like Pokémon really needs some changes. Magikarp evolving into Gyarados is based on the carp streamer. There are quite a few similar examples. It's fine in Japan, but it feels out of place in China. They don't even have claws, and you're telling me this is a dragon?