Detective Conan: The Undercover World

Akemi Miyamoto is the female lead, and you still have to create a romantic relationship between her and Shuichi Hai? Enough already! She doesn't listen to the male lead, secretly contacts Shuichi Akai, has feelings for him, blushes when they hold hands 😅, that's enough already 😅

This is the story of how the chosen one, Shuichi Akai, makes the protagonist, a transmigrator who knows the plot, suffer various setbacks. First, as the chosen one, Akai possesses the protagonist's intelligence-lowering aura—yes, literally, it lowers the protagonist's IQ.

This book is really well-written; the writing style and plot are above average. It's definitely a good read! ヽ(*´з`*)ﾉ Below are some comments ┐('~`;)┌ Akemi Miyano is ridiculous. She seems like an idealist, the kind who's been hurt many times but remains so naive. Such a naive child is rare; most families raise children who are extremely wealthy and have only ever known nannies and tutors.

You might as well have let Miyano Akemi die; why did you have to go and find Akai Shuichi?

Chapter 8 felt really toxic. First, if a detective wanted to take action, which country's traffic police would dare to stop them? A detective's position is that of a police inspector! Second, the male lead is the female lead's superior; what organization's subordinate could contradict their superior? It's all so illogical.

Please stop writing about Miyano Akemi and Akai Shuichi being a couple. Akemi's mother is clearly Shuichi's mother's sister. It's a good thing Accelerator died in the original story, otherwise... (Think about it yourself)

What happened? Did something happen to the author? 😰😰😰

I thought it was an update, and I'd be excited if some important character died, but it turns out the whole book died.

Different strokes for different folks. The author doesn't need to care about the opinions of a few. Personally, I think this book has a novel approach and plot, and it's worth reading, especially since quite a few people are already following it. I hope the author doesn't give up!

The author's character descriptions could be improved; the dialogues and interactions between characters feel stiff. Keep it up, and hopefully you'll see progress in the next book.